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    The Guardian Angle and Zack

    By Ryan Naughton

    Thursday morning 7:05 A.M, Deborah Cale woke up to start another day in school, she was 16 years old 5ft 9 inches tall had golden blonde hair and bluish green eyes. Her body was an impressive curved figure. She quickly got out of her pajamas and got into herself into her cloths she put on blue pants and white and blue shirt. She walked down stairs to have breakfast, their her father was making pancakes for breakfast, she got down got herself a glass of water and got ready to eat. “Hey Deborah” her father spoke “Did you study for your history test?” “Yes” she responded history was her favorite subject Mr. Campbell the history teacher was always informative and enthusiastic. After she finished her breakfast she packed her back pack and got her coat but before she got out she waved to her Grandfather who was reading in the living room he waved back to her gently. Grandfather Sam was a wise old man but he also creped Deborah out a bit with his intelligence. She walked outside to the bus she got on the bus took her seat and the bus drove to the city were the school was located. The bus drove past the Wynn corps building, Wynn corps was the cities major weapons manufacture their have been lots of complaints about their weapons back firing and how the refuse to take responsibility. The bus arrived at the school and the students got off, Deborah walked in the school and headed to the second floor, their she put her things in her locker, got out her folders and went to class. The first class was science their the students were doing a chemistry experiment. However 10 minuets into the experiment their was an accident, the chemistry lab contained unlabeled containers of chemicals and chemicals 14 years past their expiration dates, The experiment also wasn’t conducted beneath a safety hood available in the classroom and a cabinet containing acids was unlocked. Thus it cased a large explosion, seconds later the fire department was called in. The firemen ran in the building with high pressure water cannons spraying the out of control flames. 1 hour later the fire was out no one was dead but one of the students was trap in the inferno and that student was Deborah she was rushed to the emergency room, doctors tried everything at their disposal. Deborah’s father was in the waiting room, crying he hoped he prayed that her daughter wouldn’t die, “Terry” said familiar voice he looked up, it was his wife Jill “your dad wants to see you” Sam was a doctor at the hospital, Terry walked into his fathers office and took a seat. He asked meekly “can you do anything to help her dad?” Sam responded with “yes, yes we can” Terry slowly started to loosen up “thank you but how?” Sam sighed and said, “Remember the meteor that crashed a few weeks ago?” “Yes” his son responded “the government found something in it, a number of large crystals” he pulled a glimmering pinkish green diamond that was big enough to take up a person’s fist. “Studies have shown that these crystals contain a healing energy that is able to repair damaged bone and tissue, but theirs a drawback” Terry raised an eyebrow and responded with “what’s the drawback? “The human body doesn’t have enough space for the energy to flow, the energy when it’s in a tight compacted space it doesn’t have enough room to move ore circulate.” “What are we going to do about that?” asked Terry he felt his hands shaking. “This may sound crazy but we are going to have to genetically increase Deborah’s size to 9 feet so that the energy can circulate within her” Terry sighed “if it will save my daughter do it”

    He walked out of the hospital tense and nervous, Jill was waiting in the car, Terry got in the car and drove off. “We’ll she be alright? She asked with a tear in both her eyes, Terry nodded his head slowly and Jill sighed with relief. For next day when Terry went to the place he worked “The Information Distributor” the main recourse for the news in the cities. He walked into the building and into his small work office, on his computer was a story he had to edit, it was a story about the accident in the high school. His job was make any incident like that one weather a fire or shooting the blame should be terrorism and he grew sick of it he knew about the issues with extremists outside the cities but this was getting ridicules. After 5 hours of rewriting doing paperwork he walked out of the building and caught a bus to go home when he arrived he felt empty he wanted to see her daughter say to him a chirpy hello that did not happen. All the sudden the phone rang he walked to phone and picked it up “hello?” he said then his fathers voice came through “it worked” his voice was happy and upbeat. “Thank god” Terry gasped “thank god!”

    He arrived at the hospital in his car and ran right in to his dads office, he burst in “were is she, were is she?” he panted “calm down, calm down she’s sleeping” Sam took his son down a small hallway and came walked into one of the rooms, their lying on a large bed was Deborah sleeping, Terry walked a little closer and saw daughter who was now taller then her own father. Her eyes slowly started to open “dad?” she said meekly she sat up and looked around and saw the her father was smaller than her and her head was closer to the ceiling “what’s happened to me?” she gasped her grandfather walked up and explained what they had to do to help her but he told her something new that Terry didn’t know about “we were doing both processes and some how the energy got mixed the steroids and hormone ejections meaning that you have two very unique abilities” “what are they” she asked “one, you can heal yourself in seconds and two you can alter your own size” “you mean I can go back to my original size?” she asked happily, Sam sighed and replied “yes but you can only stay that way for 90 minuets “and if I make my self bigger?” she asked with a raised eyebrow, “you can do that for a limitless time” she tried her new ability to shrink herself down to normal size when she was back to her original height she felt tight, tense and very uncomfortable “why do I feel so horrible” she asked her grandfather “its because the energy inside you is compacted it doesn’t have much space to flow when you grow the energy flows neatly” so Deborah grew back to 9 ft and it felt good, she felt a very warm and nice feeling inside her. They drove home in Terry’s car Deborah had to be at her original height to fit in “what’s mom going to say when she finds out I can do these things?” “Don’t worry” her grandfather replied “I told her ahead of time” When they got home Deborah’s mother was happy to see her despite her daughters new size. That night wile her family slept Deborah was still awake she was thinking what will the other kids at school think of me? Will they laugh will they be scared? Just then she hared a small voice call her name “Deborah” the voice squeaked she looked up to her 8 year old brother Tommy “what is it” she asked “I can’t sleep” Deborah smiled “still afraid of dark aren’t you?” he nodded his head “can sleep with you” this wasn’t new Tommy always got scared of sleeping alone in the dark and would come and sleep in Deborah’s bed now he was with some one who seemed to be bigger than what he feared. Then all the sudden their was a noise a wailing noise Tom nudged his sister and said “he wake up!” “What is it?” Deborah asked, they both looked the window and saw a fire truck drive by and in the distance was large column of smoke they quickly ran out side, “what’s going on” asked Tommy “were going to find out” replied Deborah “stand back” she commanded and all the sudden Tommy watch as her sister grew even bigger she grew until she was 35 feet tall, he stood their in aw as she picked him up and placed him in the palm of her hand and ran toward were the supposed fire was. She hid behind a building and saw what was happening an apartment building she quickly set Tommy on the roof of one of buildings “I’m going to help” Tommy nodded his head. She quickly walked into the street and the eyes of many people looked at her. Deborah quickly climbed the burning building and peered into the fiery holes and quickly said “everyone in here follow the sound of my voice” she quickly collected the people both men women and children alike when she had all of them she climbed down the building and placed them gently on the ground and firefighters finished the job. She looked down and saw people were cheering to her, Deborah blushed, picked Tommy and set off home. The next day when Deborah awoke to see her parents looking at her and smiling at her “what is it?” she asked “we just want to say were proud of you for what you did last night” she smiled and said “I had to do what was right with this power I have” Later that day while Deborah and her grandfather were at the city bank (Deborah and her grandfather decide to make a withdraw” 3 men walked into the bank with faces that show no emotion all the sudden pulled out guns and ordered everybody to get on the floor. Deborah decided to show them who’s boss, she grew to her new official size and snuck up behind of the men and punched him in the back, the man flew into the wall but was back up and the men tackled her to the ground, one of them hit her with but of his shot gun and knocked her out and then he pointed the barrel of the gun at her face, but then some one grabbed his arm, the man looked at the person who grabbed him, it was a roughly 6 ft tall man in a grey trench coat wearing black gloves and dark sunglasses, “what are doing?” asked the man with the shot gun with an emotionless voice “this” responded the man in the trench coat all the sudden out of his coat came long tentacle like robot arm the three talon, it pounced on the man who was holding the shot gun 2 other robotic arms attacked the two other men who fired their guns at him but the bullets had no effect. The arms rammed the men into walls the ceiling and the floor after five minuets if torturer the arms let them down Sam noticed one of the men was laying next to him he turned the person of and saw that mans face was cracked open but instead of blood and bone their were wires sparks he examined the other two men and discovered they were all androids, “what’s going on” he asked he turned around saw the man in the trench coat sprouted out three more robotic arms and the six arms picked up her granddaughter “what are doing with my granddaughter?” snapped Sam “helping her” responded the man sported 4 more arms Sam quickly asked “were are you going?” “Do you want to find out?” responded the man Sam gulped and said “I suppose so” and then another arm grabbed Sam and then man jumped up in the air and started jumping from roof top to roof top free falling, grabbing and swinging on power lines until they came to an abandoned warehouse. An hour later Deborah regained conciseness she heard a voice that said “you’ve been out for hours glad you came through” She looked and saw a well built man with a green lenses like right eye and black gloves on with large holes on his skin, “who are you” asked Deborah the man raised his arm and she could clearly make out a number imprinted on his arm she reed it allowed“7YOQ3-4BIZS31-9UI47K24 that’s your name?” “Yes” replied the android “personally I don’t like the name I think its jerky, so if want to give me a new name say it and I’ll accept it” Deborah thought for a moment and said “how about Zack?” “Fine” replied the android. Deborah leaned over to what Zack was doing, apparently he was working on his right hand with the help of two tentacle like robotic arms “what are you doing?” she asked Zack turned to her and said “I’m customizing my self” “what?” she asked “I like to ad gadgets to myself” he replied “I believe you already know about my arms” he smiled “what are you doing here?” Deborah asked, Zack sighed and replied with “I’m an experiential spy/combat robot that’s been programmed to learn by observing what humans do. Apparently I learned too much about my creator Dr. Evans” “what did you learn?” Deborah asked “I learned that Evans was experimenting his androids on humans, you see by posing as muggers, bank robbers or mobsters and having them attacking and sometimes even killing the people they prove themselves to get in the military force” Deborah gasped “just to get them in the military?” she asked Zack replied with “Its sick world we live in” “so those men at the bank were some of those android things?” “Yep” said Zack “and I’m trying to stop them and hopefully find Evans and stop this madness and you can help me” “I can?” Deborah asked “shore, I’ve seen you rescue those people from that burning building and your size changing powers could be of some help against Evans’s robots but first my friend, you need a costume” “what” asked Deborah “a super hero costume” replied Zack. “I believe I can help” said Deborah’s Grandfather Sam he reached in to his inner coat pockets and pulled out three test tubes with strange multicolored liquid inside them. “It’s a special formula that was put my granddaughters clothing to make them change size when she changed size, however their were three left over and I didn’t know what to do with them but now I think you can use them” he tossed Zack the tubes and Zack caught them with one of his robotic arms. “Go home” said Zack “I’ll be finished by tomorrow” As Deborah and her Grandfather walked out of the warehouse Deborah turned to him and said “I can’t believe I’m going to be super hero, this is going to be hard to deal with” Sam smiled “we’re all responsible something and this is quiet an achievement in your life” “come on Granddad” said Deborah “you never went threw anything I’ve experienced” “true” said Sam “but remember your father kept on reminding you about how when you get older you need to except responsibility, well now I’m not sure if he meant by this but I think you get the picture” Deborah nodded her head.

    The next morning Deborah got a phone call from Zack saying that he was finished the suit. Deborah told his grandfather the news and then went out to the warehouse. When she arrived Zack showed her the new armored costume, some parts were made out of leather were made from titanium and some were made of gold but what impressed Deborah the most were the angle like wings he gave the costume she was able to grip on to then and fly like a bird. “Try it on” said Zack she fid and it fit right plus it was comfortable. “I like it” she said “I have a question” continued Deborah “what kind of gadget were your giving your arm?” All the sudden their was an explosion that formed a hole in the wall and out of wall came black red eyed androids “Ninja droids I’ll tell you later Deborah” yelled Zack. Deborah quickly hid behind a few boxes and peered her out and then she saw what Zack did to his hand, she saw his hand turned into a chainsaw. Zack started hacking at the robots their were hacks, it’s and blows along with limbs and heads flying through the air. Zack was winning but then the remaining 200 robots vanished into thin air. All the sudden Zack looked like he was being hit by invisible forces. Deborah had to help, she grew to 50 ft she looked down and started stomping her feet around Zack their were crunches and creeks it turned out her suspicions were correct the robots turned invisible. She swung her and hearing crashes and bashes until their was apparently no robots left. She looked around and saw that Zack was gone she looked and saw a truck speeding away and she quickly went after it. The truck tried everything to evade her but then she finally caught it and turned it upside-down. She opened the end and grabbed Zack “are you ok?” she asked Zack looked up and replied with “yeah thanks” then they saw a man come out of the cab of the truck “stop right their!” snapped Deborah, the man stopped dead in his tracks he turned around and said “ok you got me” Deborah looked at Zack and asked “is that Dr. Evans?” “Yep” said Zack “that’s him” then police cars came to the area to arrest him Zack then offered the information he had over to the police. Then a man came out of the crowd of people that saw what happened and walked up to Evans, it was Robert Wynn head of Wynn corps. He appeared to be very angry “you little git” Wynn snapped “I can’t believe you testing experimental weapons on civilians darn it man we are here to exploit them not kill them” their was awkward pause. Wynn looked around and said “forget I said that, forget I said that!” and walked away. The police then arrested Evans and he was sentenced to 25 years in prison. Deborah returned to her new normal size and news reporters started asking her question one them asked “who are you called?” Deborah thought about it she didn’t want to say her real name so she said “I’m the guardian angle” the name stuck and from then on Zack and Deborah became the cities official super heroes.

    #2389
    Axel3.14
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    That school should be sued for the dilapidated state of their lab. LOL.

    #2390
    nic2800
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    When they asked her name you wrote…“I’m the guardian angle”

    Did you mean Guardian Angel?

    #2391
    Anonymous
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    yes that i did

    #2392
    Anonymous
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    yes that i did

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