A Stake Dinner

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  • January 29, 2008 at 11:29 pm #65516
    iceman75
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    I enjoyed it a lot, though I would have loved to see the steroided out woman do some feats of strength, I'm always looking for some massive muscular woman doing unreal feats of strength in stories, but overall I loved this story. 

    February 9, 2008 at 9:19 am #65517
    Sludig
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    I've enjoyed both of your works (haven't read the first yet, but give me time) I guess what I'm most impressed with is how they not only seem symbiotic, but that the male character isn't the weak and helpless one.  I know this board is about some of those things, but that gets stale after a while, this wasn't.

    February 9, 2008 at 4:24 pm #65518
    cpbell0033944
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    Very interesting work.  The accidental deletion of that line made a ig difference to the plot, though, even with it, I still didn't appreciate that the freak had killed those people just for tactical reasons.  Like some of the other folks who've commented, I did experience slightly mixed feelings on the death of the freak, though the way you described her as being rather grotesque alleviated those thoughts (which is a little disturbing by itself).

    February 10, 2008 at 7:11 am #65519
    Robert McNay
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    Like some of the other folks who've commented, I did experience slightly mixed feelings on the death of the freak, though the way you described her as being rather grotesque alleviated those thoughts (which is a little disturbing by itself).

    Sometimes, we can find the most attractive things in the most evil of entities. If this weren't true, killers like Ted Bundy wouldn't have been so successful in their carnage.

    I had to come up with a threat that would challenge Lillyia and Craig. Unlimited physical strength used with no remorse was the best I could think of. I knew my choice might not be popular with listers, but I had hoped Lillyia's graceful and elegant power would more than make up for it.

    February 10, 2008 at 3:55 pm #65520
    cpbell0033944
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    Sometimes, we can find the most attractive things in the most evil of entities. If this weren't true, killers like Ted Bundy wouldn't have been so successful in their carnage.

    I had to come up with a threat that would challenge Lillyia and Craig. Unlimited physical strength used with no remorse was the best I could think of. I knew my choice might not be popular with listers, but I had hoped Lillyia's graceful and elegant power would more than make up for it.

    No criticism implies Sir.  I was impressed that your writing was able to cause such feelings.  Lilyia definetly more than compensated – your write her as such a poised lady. 8)

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