ABX

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  • August 11, 2007 at 12:47 am #57791
    Mark Newman
    Participant

    Part 1 is now available on Brawna.  Enjoy.

    August 11, 2007 at 4:35 am #57792
    Cowprobe
    Participant

    Like a Morpheus story pulled a Pac-Man powerpill on an Augoose/Myostatinus three car pile-up.

    The uber-ty was prescient!

    Thanks for sharing the fruit of what must have been many hours of fine tuning. The pacing and delivery, both in mechanism and tone, is inspired.

    Again, you keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    August 11, 2007 at 5:49 am #57793
    nic2800
    Participant

    You draw pictures in my head as you write this story with shadows and contrast. It is dripping with juicy goodness. I hope a second helping is coming soon.

    August 11, 2007 at 7:18 am #57794
    Lingster
    Keymaster

    Part 1 is now available on Brawna.  Enjoy.

    Who the hell are you?

    August 11, 2007 at 7:53 am #57795
    egad
    Participant

    Another great story,or at least a great start. 

    August 11, 2007 at 1:41 pm #57796
    g-man
    Participant

    I'm about to check it out, hopefully it'll be a bit less depressing and post-apocalyptic than your regular (but still awesome) fare 😛

    August 11, 2007 at 2:45 pm #57797
    g-man
    Participant

    Oooh, I like so far!

    August 11, 2007 at 9:21 pm #57798
    Mark Newman
    Participant

    Part 2 is up now.  A few new characters.  A few consequences.  And more is left to happen later.

    August 12, 2007 at 8:46 am #57799
    crazyfck
    Participant

    Yes! Finally, a new marknew!

    Just read the two parts,

    Loved the lesbian touch;

    The ABX sounds like smeagol, or hal9000, Im not sure

    hey, G, I never thought of any of his stories as depressing, like in the way when you see a car crash;
    Is more like When worlds collide. Is not depressing, is exhilarating to see the world falling down

    I feel depressed when the fantasy tries to be happy. I’m happy when it storms

    Clark? we have a Clark here… shit 🙂

    August 12, 2007 at 11:03 pm #57800
    nic2800
    Participant

    Another great story,or at least a great start. 

    Marknew has written many very good stories that are on Diana the Valkyrie.

    I am glad to see his work spreading to meet the masses finally.

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