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June 17, 2006 at 8:15 am #32704AnonymousGuest
Well,
This started as a request for Ada Wong, and I think I got the hair right (thanks to Kozaburo for the hair prop), and the background is DAZ's Ops Center, so it fits right in.
[Edit … I made some major changes, and posted the new version below]
Let me know!
June 17, 2006 at 8:24 am #32705SimofettParticipantShe looks really nice on the whole, Turbo. But the problem lies in the clothes.. Which are way too tight on the body. The shirt looks like she has a strange set of floral tattoos on over her torso, and the pants look a little strange, probably because of the pose she is in.
Anyway.. Other than me criticizing, I really like the facial features, and the eyes are very striking, which is cool. The enviroment looks good with the addition of those giant crates, and one even has the biohazard symbol, which is a clever reference to the series.
Anyway, not bad at all. ๐
June 17, 2006 at 8:26 am #32706ChachibenjiParticipantWhooo. I like, I like.
Also, I think its the hair, and the getup perhaps. maybe the face, but otherwise i Like it a lot. Try a chinese dress next time perhaps?
And yeah. Awesome render *back pat*June 17, 2006 at 10:12 am #32707The Muffin manParticipantAlso her feet are very unnaturally placed. Again, the shirt is too tight, like she has a floral pattern all over her upper body. Her face looks…off. Like she's surprised/giving a blowjob.
Overall it suffers from what I feel a lot of CG suffers from…it doesn't feel "human". It has distant, lifeless eyes.
June 17, 2006 at 4:32 pm #32708AnonymousGuestWell …
The clothes are not special 3D props … They're called "second skins" … for a reason ๐ Unfortunately, they are the one of the few types of clothes I can fit to my ladies because most modelers make clothes to fit skinny supermodels. Also, I am having some issues in D|S 1.3 that I didn't have in 1.2 regarding clothes fitting. I can't go back, though, because I now have too many characters and $$$ invested in 1.3 — ARG!
Muffin Man — A blowjob???? I don't think I'd want my wife to look like *that* giving me a blowjob … She's supposed to be pissed…
Oh well ๐
June 18, 2006 at 2:16 pm #32709Number6ParticipantI like the image, but I'm easy to please as long as there's big boobs and muscularity. ๐
Some things that seemed off to me and might use improvement:
*Her legs are spread really wide, and her feet are poised so that she's on her tiptoes like a ballerina…the angle of the ankles seem a litte funny as a result, but more importantly it seems impossible that her massive torso could be supported in this pose…I think with the leg/feet in this way, she should look almost about to tilt forward or backward (probably forward, with those breasts).
*I agree that the facial expression needs some work…to me, her expression looks kind of emotionless, actually…not angry or determined or much of anything else…she also doesn't seem to be looking at what she's aiming the gun at, which might contribute to my impression that there's a lack of intensity in the scene (perhaps she's distracted by something, I suppose).That was pretty much it that I noticed…as I said, I like the image but I think some changes might improve it. I should also mention that I had a momentary brainfart when reading the initial post, and I thought I was going to see a render of super-cute Amy Wong (from Futurama), so I was all kinds of disoriented once the image opened anyway.
June 18, 2006 at 5:45 pm #32710mikazukiParticipantmean look: perhaps tense the eyebrows a bit?
leg spread: I actually like it o_O It's different, dynamic and shows her muscles well.
perspective: Just guessing here… her body seems to suggest a high camera view looking down (hence big upper body, small lower body), but the background suggests an eye-level view.
I don't know Ada, so can't help you with facial resemblance. But this is a trรจs beau render.
June 20, 2006 at 8:07 am #32711AnonymousGuestHere's a new version:
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8771/adafinal7dg.jpg
In a red dress, better face, better body ๐
She looks more pissed :-), and is actually looking where she aims….
Better?? ๐
Let me know…
June 20, 2006 at 9:26 am #32712TC2ParticipantTurbo I love your renders, but I think you need a bit of a reference for Ada. She is a tricky one to render.
http://www.gamespot.com/search.html?qs=Resident%20Evil%204%20Screens&sub=i&stype=11&type=11
See if that doesn't help you out a bit.
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