Andy and Alison

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  • March 8, 2008 at 1:45 am #65113
    ratlaf
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    Kewl!  Very nice development and only one repeated sentence at the very end…

    March 16, 2008 at 11:49 pm #65114
    Tim
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    Great so far,when's the next part?

    March 29, 2008 at 7:14 am #65115
    KeithXZ
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    This is going really well, Wachsende.

    I hope you'll write more.

    April 2, 2008 at 1:59 am #65116
    Anonymous
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    An excellent work of fiction!

    Thanx for sharing and posting all the chapters thus far!!

    April 29, 2008 at 9:23 pm #65117
    Tim
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    Are you going to continue this or is it abandonned?

    May 1, 2008 at 7:27 am #65118
    cwmoss
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    This onehellofah story. I sure would be happy to see some more also!!!!!!!!!  🙂

    May 2, 2008 at 12:36 am #65119
    Wachsende
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    Are you going to continue this or is it abandonned?

    It's on hold but definitely not abandoned. Right now, I'm revising "One Less…" for publication so this has been pushed to the back burner. I introduced the father/alien subplot for a very specific thematic reason, but now I'm not so sure I want to pursue that direction. It'll probably take me a month or two, but I will finish the story. I promise.:)

    May 2, 2008 at 2:41 pm #65120
    Mark Newman
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    I'm enjoying it too, so I hope you'll keep going.

    If you want to change an earlier entry, you can always edit your own post!  I know that expanding the scope of the story can make it much more complicated and you could then stick to your main characters for now.

    If you do edit it, you might consider making the period in the second time jump a few years later, so that the "edited scenes" could be reinserted. 

    May 2, 2008 at 7:52 pm #65121
    cwmoss
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    That's great news Wachsende. Like Marknew said any editing you do to your past posts if fine.

    You spin a really fine tail. I have greatly enjoyed all of your writing.

    May 4, 2008 at 12:42 am #65122
    Tim
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    Oof that's great news…I had a some doubts that you might have considered stopping it.Well as long as you take your time it should be good.

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