Another original from the Maniac

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  • #37616
    Matthew Lim
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    Since Shannon only spawned a handful of responses, I decided to slow down and take my time with the next two characters. This one is number 3 of 5 with 4 shortly on her way. This one I decided to experiment with the 'off-season' sort of look.

    That's it for numero 3. I already have number 4 drawn out and it should be on its way in a few days.

    #37617
    JimmyDimples
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    Hmm… Purty pictures as always, though the Turtle and Serpent Avatar looks kinda… green.  😛

    Seriously… I'm wondering why we don't read as much on her personality… does it seem that the more trusted, more capable ones over their power don't have time for fun or a social life?

    On that matter, I wonder what the Avatars' friends are like on their "civilian" time?

    #37618
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
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    Most excellent, dear KtM.

    I's am growing more and more intrigued about your tale and how it will unfold.

    You have put much thought and planning into this work and for that you have my's praises.

    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    #37619
    Muscle Growth Nut
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    This is a terrific concept you got going here, KTM. I would most definitely watch a show like this. ;D

    #37620
    BlackKusanagi
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    With each new avatar, so much more is made to be intresting man… Im loving this… their bios are well done as their abilities are too. Great work KtM

    #37621
    Matthew Lim
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    Seriously… I'm wondering why we don't read as much on her personality… does it seem that the more trusted, more capable ones over their power don't have time for fun or a social life?

    On that matter, I wonder what the Avatars' friends are like on their "civilian" time?

    Those are some good questions Jimmy. I'm hoping these profiles I write up with the characters don't seem half-assed. But to answer your questions:

    1. Galena is more of a cold shoulder personality. Being on the streets without a parental figure has raised her up to be a very closed individual. She's sort of the Batman and Wolverine character in this universe.

    2. Galena doesn't have many friends because of her life on the streets, and at the same time she takes her role as an avatar much more seriously because a) it really is the only thing she has going in her life and b) her mentor has her honing her skills as often as possible.

    3. Briana is the only one out of the current three that has an active social life. Shannon's friends are more 'business partners' than anything else and she's often too busy doing the Lara Croft thing to spend time with them. And Galena's friends, as few as they are, are just 'survival buddies' and with the constant training she has choosen to busy herself with, it doesn't leave much time for socializing. Briana, who has friends she loves to hang out with finds herself torn between her responsibilities and passions, pretty much like every other teenage superhero/heroine out there.  😛

    But on the same note, Briana's second life isn't a secret, so the world around her is very much understanding of why she has to abandon any current task or meeting.

    #37622
    Cowprobe
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    But a brighter future, for Galena.

    It's an interesting insight into the sort of world these avatars will be inhabiting since Brina's capabilities aren't entirely secret.

    Perhaps Briana's seen as 'merely' some sort of superbeing in the Western world instead of some mythical caretaker of nature's harmony.

    Great character building and I like how each has the capacity to grow girl-gantic yet still have teir particular area of expertise. True their animal/elemental power sources suggest paths to take but their human personalities and fighting styles define it.

    Thanks for sharing this and I can't wait to see what comes next from the imaginative Maniac. ;D

    #37623
    David
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    Sweet character and storyline.

    #37624
    00tree
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    Great Stuff. Keep it coming.

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    #37625
    ze fly
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    Really awesome.
    I can't wait to see the last one. Then' maybe you will post a story featuring their adventures as well?

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