Aphrodite Blessing

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  • March 30, 2010 at 1:22 am #91219
    dr_muscles
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    Yeah, I just updated chapter 5 and posted chapter 6 of my long neglected novel thingy.

    I’d love y’all to read, rate and comment.

    http://brawna.org/stories/aphrodites-blessing

    March 30, 2010 at 3:04 am #91222
    Cowprobe
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    Holy carp and other blessed fish!

    Great to see ya man.

    Here’s to the sexual ideal being subverted further by Aphrodite’s favorite.

    Looking forward to reading and tossing my two cents in over at Brawna.

    Thought we lost ya to reality like Augoose and ZZZ. 😛

    EDIT- Looked for the chapter all over Brawna. Are you certain you updated it correctly?

    UPDATE – The chapters are there. If you’re lurking give dr_m’s yarn a read. Interesting take on the REAL power of motivation. 👿

    March 30, 2010 at 9:20 am #91232
    Unbridled
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    YES!
    I finally got my computer working again and I come back to this wonderful site and LO! it has been reformatted in an extraordinary way!
    Then I was perusing all the new features and LO! once again! I stumble across this fantastic story and I am filled with awe and enjoyment at having read such a wonderful piece of literature about my favorite genre!
    Congrats to you on your skill xoronewithnature!
    I give it two thumbs up and 5/5
    and to you as well Lingster! Thank you for providing us with such a fantastic site!
    Its good to be back…

    April 6, 2010 at 1:05 am #91399
    dr_muscles
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    Thank you. I really appreciate you taking your time to comment.

    While I’ve got short term ideas for where to take this story, real life is preventing me from doing any real work on it. If only time and motivation came in some sort of pill form…

    If anyone has any suggestions for what I should do with this story, please let me know. Maybe something will inspire me to just write this thing, despite my real life obligations.

    April 13, 2010 at 10:37 am #91574
    Unbridled
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    well i think there’s some foreshadowing that sort of leads me to believe that Myrna might be on the trail of some god-like strength from Athena
    :)?

    April 14, 2010 at 12:09 pm #91605
    kedrell
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    You see I would have guessed that she was looking for a way to undo the influence of the main character’s power over her so she could return to him eventually and be sure that she loves him freely of her own will. After all, that’s why she left in the 1st place.

    Great story so far though.

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