Bad Genes

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  • August 1, 2013 at 4:08 am #115388
    CGMann
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    Parts 1 through 5 up on my DA site.

    Bad Genes; Parts 1 – 5

    Enjoy!

    August 1, 2013 at 5:06 am #115390
    Cowprobe
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    I really enjoyed how some of the growth of the surrounding gym rats could have just been entirely in the main character’s head.

    The plot device had enough science to feel plausible and solid in the story. I’m not as enthusiastic about the actual process not needing any more calories to fuel its growth once the genes were re-expressed than normal.

    However the characters are likable and come off as nearly real humans and I should follow MST3K’s maxim and “just relax” about science facts.

    Thank you for sharing this, you keep writing and I’ll keep reading!

    August 1, 2013 at 1:34 pm #115403
    CGMann
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    Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it! Good point about the eating.. I might make some minor edits to account for that. 🙂

    August 1, 2013 at 10:35 pm #115404
    CGMann
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    I think I have successfully addressed the eating issue, Cowprobe. 🙂

    August 2, 2013 at 6:16 pm #115415
    CGMann
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    I’ve renamed the story to “Good Genes” as that is more fitting to the character for the greater part of the story. Also part 6 was added to the mix.

    http://cgman.deviantart.com/art/Good-Genes-Parts-1-6-388929965

    August 3, 2013 at 4:16 am #115436
    BodybyBane
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    I wonder if someone could draw your characters,..or maybe create 3-d renderings of your characters

    August 20, 2013 at 2:18 am #115828
    CGMann
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    Part 7, 8, 9 and (as of this writing, part of) 10 are in this location:

    Good Genes 7-10

    September 9, 2013 at 7:26 am #116246
    CGMann
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    Hey everybody,

    Good Genes was moved. I wrote an interactive flash “story reader” for it and other future stories. This will let me do more than the standard text entry of Deviant Art. I can add images, video and animation anywhere inside the store should I choose to. Also I am not limited to 64kb so the entire story is in one location:

    Good Genes

    Note that the story is now heavily edited down for compliance with DeviantArt’s rules.. Very sad. Some of those cuts were severe. If you want the ‘director’s cut’ send me a private message on DA.

    September 9, 2013 at 7:57 pm #116249
    jsimon
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    Scrolling format is really annoying for me. Can you post the complete series somewhere else?

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