Betty – Prophet Tenebrae Story Repost

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  • March 1, 2008 at 6:37 pm #67860
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    As the forum so kindly chose to randomly single out for summary purging my recent thread, I have posted "Betty" on Brawna… And I shall warn thee, may contain gratuitous fan service, copyright infringement and hulk penis.

    Anyway, here it is…

    http://www.brawna.org/node/438

    And, as I've just bemoaned – for reasons I don't pretend to understand – italics is disabled. So, when there's dialogue without quotes, it's internal monologue. Also, I've tidied up a couple of errors and expanded Betty's post-TF monologue to Bruce…

    Anyway, opinions and such are always appreciated. Thanks to everyone that replied in the other thread… I hope that it's not lost to the ages.

    March 2, 2008 at 1:35 am #67861
    Evan Stanley
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    This is all I have to say about Prophet's new story:

    March 2, 2008 at 1:48 am #67862
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    Really, I generally prefer more articulate commentary… Mostly because I'm greedy and like flattery and commentary but then, at the same time…

    But you can't argue with Spock. I'm just sad my question to Deadly Pixxxie about what made the concept of the story being "border line award winning" may never be answered. Also that it didn't warrant a cigarette… should have put in more shoes…

    March 2, 2008 at 6:46 am #67863
    Evan Stanley
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    Really, I generally prefer more articulate commentary… Mostly because I'm greedy and like flattery and commentary but then, at the same time…

    But you can't argue with Spock. I'm just sad my question to Deadly Pixxxie about what made the concept of the story being "border line award winning" may never be answered. Also that it didn't warrant a cigarette… should have put in more shoes…

    Admit it. You're jealous Novmeber To Remember got a cigarette call for Pixxie. 😉

    March 2, 2008 at 9:48 am #67864
    Deadly Pixxxie
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    IT GOT A CUP OF TEA!!!

    That's as good as a cigarette!!!

    And if you really…really….REALLY want to see me explode over a story….get a certain someone to finish (or release) the third installment in a certain series about a pissy goth chick.

    *coffs*

    March 2, 2008 at 3:32 pm #67865
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    I don't smoke and I'm not a huge tea fan – only if it's green.

    About as close as I've got to a pissy Goth chick is an irritable Asian girl who gets superpowers… but really isn't too keen on being hit on by female "team mates".

    And I appreciate the praise, I'm just playing but I still want to know why the concept was borderline award winning… and yes, I sound like a broken record.

    Pitch your "ideal" growth story at me, Pixxxie… I could probably do with something a little less full of saccharine, sapphic characters.

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