[Solarian, aka LordDaroth]

Hardbodies' request in my previous chainsketch…

I like this except her hair.

Please post comments, tell me what you think…

[10-4]

Looks pretty good.

[fasola]

Great work Solarian. The only comment I would have is that her lats are too low. they seem to come from her butt.
I think that's all that I can thibnk of.

[Solarian, aka LordDaroth]

You do have a point.

[Jedediah]

I was going to post about the odd lats on her too- but Fasola has covered it-

Regarding drawing hair, I can only recommend that you draw the whole mass of hair as a big shape, then you can apply lines of hair on that as texture.  Trying to draw each bit of hair leads to a confused tangle of lines.

That aside, I like the arms and legs on this piece- good powerful looking muscles without being huge.  Also good job on the proportion on this piece- it looks much more accurate than your last Ms Marvel picture!

[Tonus]

The arm confused me a bit, perhaps because the elbow is hidden.  That's a minor quibble and other than that I think it looks good, including the hair.  But it never hurts to find out from other artists how they draw hair.  I usually rough in the general outline, then add a few details.  Many other artists seem to layer the hair in, or draw it in large 'strips' to build it up.  What you did in that drawing doesn't look bad, and fits in nicely with the style that you're using.

[Solarian, aka LordDaroth]

Edited:)

[gettar82]

ROAR! 😀

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