[Lupus14]

O boy – intense indeed! So descriptive I saw everything before my inner eye. I hope this story continues!
Were you by any chance inspired by the story "Bloodsucker" which Wreckshop illustrated?

[Robert McNay]

O boy – intense indeed! So descriptive I saw everything before my inner eye. I hope this story continues!
Were you by any chance inspired by the story "Bloodsucker" which Wreckshop illustrated?

Thank you to you and Fonk both. I had hoped to make the person reading feel the same intensity that he felt, maybe even a little bit of the fear as she "took over". I also tried to pace my writing to match the pace of what was happening, that's why the initial part was so long and descriptive and the climax (no pun intended) became faster in it's reading.

I actually have one more idea right now. There's no lovemaking in it (at least not as I have mentally scripted right now) but it will show just how strong both of them become after a few months of their relationship. It will actually give them both names and fill some backstory on who they are, also. As wrote this over the last couple weeks, I found myself growing to like both of these characters a lot. When that happens, I don't like to let them "lay about", unused. There may be a long lag between stories, as I work on other ones, but I eventually revist them.

As for the Wreckshop story, nope, I never read it. I've only seen the odd picture labeled as being from that site, but I've never joined it. The story I posted is a product of my own imagination and, to be honest, more than just a little of my own fantasies related to female bodybuilders.

The vampire's look was somewhat inspired by a picture that I can't remember where I found it. It is of a very muscular female Sith Lord and titled Darth Malice. I slimmed her initial description down a little so her post-coital state would be more like the picture. The only other chages are the lack of a facial tattoo and her breasts are smaller and higher than the Sith Lord's.

Again, thanks for the compliments on the story.

[Lupus14]

The illustrated story is about a female Vampire that is slim and very stacked, that goes into some "Gothic" Gym and sucks 3-4 Bodybuilders dry. After each one, she has a growth spurt, that literally lets here explode out of her clothes.
Giving them a background sounds very good. Would be neat to hear, how she became a vampire, how old she is etc. Maybe she is even a "good" vampire, that fights the bad ones and he is a vampire hunter that stumbled upon her while fighting the bad ones. But of course that is for you to decide.
The Idea that he also gains something out of this relationship is truly wonderful. Usually Vampires are like parasites that just use you. The stronger and more massive he gets, the more she can get out of him – making them both grow, grow, grow, GROW!
Your style is really smooth and very professional. I really enjoyed it and hope to read a lot more!

[Cowprobe]

Very good work Lupus14!

Thank you for sharing this great start.

I like how both the main characters are developed enough in their sense of self to try such an interesting relationship.

The buff gentleman could have easily come off as a idle playboy but the idea of his own efforts, and admittedly good genes, leading to both his physique and the resulting nocturnal courtship won me over.

I like the blood predator lass not just because of her hemoglobin enhanced pulchritude but that she seemed to have enough curiosity to find out exactly how her capacities functioned.

The pseudo-scientific explanation provoked all the best aspects of modern darkstalker media without the cheese. Feels a little like Forever Knight combined with Blade and Underworld.

Not to mention in a reality where there are vampires there may be interests that hunt them.  8)

You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

[Lupus14]

Very good work Lupus14!

Thank you for sharing this great start.

You are confusing something. I didn't do any "work".  The great writer is CptMatt.

[Cowprobe]

Whoa.

Sorry about that mistake.  :-[

CptMatt my previous comment was supposed to be addressed to you not Lupus14.

Thank you for the clarification Lupus14.

Can't wait to see where this tale leads CptMAtt  8)

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