Dawn (now with Jenna from Hardbody)

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  • #17473
    rhinehartd
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    Oh, don't get me wrong. I want to do a before picture, no doubt about it. Currently I'm taking a break, but expect a new picture over the weekend.

    #17474
    rhinehartd
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    During her college years, Dawn not only excelled in her studies, but became more motivated than ever to become the biggest, most muscular girl anyone would ever see. Her body became huger, and by the middle of her freshman year, her entire body was unrecognizable from what it was five years ago. Her pecs were massive and thick, her biceps bulged impossibly and her legs constantly threatened to rip whatever leg wear she had on.

    Unfortunately, when finals rolled around, Dawn became stressed due to the huge amounts of work and studying needed. She had signed up for intensive classes on business and biomechanics, and found herself occupied with studying and homework for almost six hours each day, leaving her with little time to work out.  The sense of isolation and alienation returned once again, as people antagonized her on such a level that Dawn had never imagined. Though she still held a select group of true, loyal friends, the few students who treated her with such harshness drove Dawn into a state of depression.

    She became dissatisfied with her body, and constantly sought heavier and heavier weights. When the barbell couldn’t load anymore weights, Dawn began pumping *two* barbells loaded with the maximum possible number of weights. The more stress she had, the huger Dawn wanted to become. Looking back at her past, she remember what a popular, athletic and happy young girl she used to be. At first, her mindset for building such a muscular body was to single out her true friends and alter people’s perceptions of her. Now, having discovered her limitlessness, she wanted to push her body right over to edge and see how muscular she could get, period.

    Unfortunately, the vast amounts of stress during her freshman year caused Dawn, for a few months, to feel that she was not getting big enough. She experimented with various supplements, and ended up taking too much. She even tried taking anabolic steroids for a short while. The effect on her body was tremendous; her workouts yielded more dramatic results. Her muscles grew larger, and bulged harder like never before and her entire body, after a few weeks, had become so huge that for a few days she could not leave her dorm room because none of her clothes could fit her. After Dawn’s friends had given her some custom tailored clothes, she could finally move freely. The reaction from the general student body was just like always, except on a larger degree.

    Dawn’s steroid use was, obviously, not good for her. She was now so muscular that some of her movement was restricted. Dawn found it hard to do something as simple as scratch her back, because her biceps got in the way. Likewise, her legs were so massive that her knees couldn’t touch. When entering through doorways, Dawn had to do so sideways, because her shoulders were too broad. Then she became severely ill. The supplement overdose inflicted terrible pain upon Dawn, and after she quit, she was plagued with constant illness, headaches, and difficulty eating. She was subsequently checked into a hospital, and placed in a special ward because her size proved to be a problem for standard hospital apparatus.

    For nearly a month, Dawn stayed in bed while undergoing treatment. She lost a significant amount of weight, and her inhumanly muscle-bound physique was reduced to a more natural level. Her friends were also there to support her throughout the whole ordeal. By the time she was out of the hospital, Dawn’s mind was refreshed and more aware. Too much of anything is never good, as evidenced by the physical limits she was faced with. She bounced back into her studies, and did extremely well in the finals. This nightmare behind her, Dawn was determined to work hard at college, and pump herself up further, but this time without excessive drug use.

    #17475
    iceman75
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    Holy Veinage Batman! Rhinehart, each one gets better than the last, can't wait to see more and hear more about Dawn! And I like the reverse anorexia angle you got going, no matter how big she is, she looks at herself as small, so she just has to get bigger, love that element, and here's hoping she gets more and more huge and do it naturally, the commentary you put about the steroids is a good storyline element too.

    #17476
    AbyssPlanet
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    Awesome work! I'm liking how this is turning out. Great job!

    #17477
    Tommy Dreamer
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    Cool stuff, Rhine.  Can't wait to see her bump into Cammy.  And by bump I mean bounce off of like a brick wall.

    #17478
    BlackKusanagi
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    O.O Progress. Haha.

    #17479
    rhinehartd
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    Ah, I'm working on the next picture and I'm not sure what clothing she should wear this time. Suggestions?

    #17480
    MadJack84
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    how about a cheerleader or a pyjama shirt or a rogue customs

    #17481
    Fonk
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    "You're so vein, oh you're so vein…" Wow, is the only other thing I can think of saying! 😉

    #17482
    g-man
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    Awesome. Just pure awesome.

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