Dissociative Identity Crisis

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    Bass
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    Hello everyone..

    Well, I've finally managed to start writing a story.  Now I've got a suitable chapter one and two, I'm not motivated to keep on going :D.  This new story is a crossover story sorts, featuring FMG.

    Dissociative Identity Crisis, by Bass

    Edit: Disclaimer, none of these characters belong to me.  Hikari and all Digimon characters are the property of Toei / Bandei.

        Hikari groaned as she store out the fogged up window.  She slowly sipped her cafe latte as she reflected on the past week.  Recent events had kept her busy.  Extremely busy.  She hadn't slept the past couple of nights, no one in her apartment had.  She was currently living with some roommates who were particularly special to her.  They had their own unique super-powers, kind of like Hikari's own which she had been able to master over the years.  She had control over light, an ability that had been dubbed 'lumokinesis'.  Her power wasn't entirely useful, but the light she could create did have a pleasant cleansing effect.
        She was waiting in a small cafe on a street corner for some friends to arrive.  She clutched onto her digivice tightly with one hand.  Things could turn messy here extremely quickly, especially with the type of company she was expecting.  The door banged shut, as a tall thin woman walked through the door.  She wore a thick raincoat, and store down at the ground, showing little to no interest in her surroundings.  She walked over to Hikari, and sat at her table.
        "I can help cure you, Hikari said before sipping from her latte.
        "You're assuming I need to be cured," the woman replied.  "But what I have isn't a cure, it’s a blessing."
        "One of my friends had one of those dark spores in him," Hikari stated.  "We were able to neutralise and eventually remove it."
        "He was a fool," she replied.  "I have not come here seeking a 'cure'."
        "Then what do you seek?" Hikari asked.
        "I want you to join us," she said.  "We are stronger then the rest of these insects inhabiting this planet.  With your help, we can take control of this planet, and rule it justly."
        "Your ambitions surely are greater then my friends," Hikari said, as she thought about her friend Ken, who as the Digimon Kaiser only wanted to control the Digital World.  "But I am going to decline, and I doubt you'll be any real threat to anyone."
        "Don't be so overconfident," the woman smirked.  "I was able to transcend the barriers between our dimensions.  You have no clue what I am capable of."
        "And you don't know what a Digimon is," Hikari replied.  "I don't think you understand just how powerful a Mega level Digimon is.  So I'll only say this one more time.  If you let me, I can destroy that dark spore in your neck."
        The woman stood up abruptly.  "Just you wait till you meet some of my allies," she said, before storming out the door.  Hikari left out a soft sigh.  Things hadn't gone as well as she had planned.  This mysterious woman had shown up out of nowhere a couple of weeks ago, and Hikari felt an instant bond to her.  She could feel dark energy coursing out of her body, and wanted nothing more then to help her.  Ever since they first met, they had been communicating through Hikari's D-Terminal.  She was issuing nothing but empty threats.  She didn't have her own Digimon partner, nor did she have a digivice, so she couldn't enter the Digital World.  Hikari felt sorry for her because in her opinions, she was just one sad individual.
        After paying for her latte, Hikari threw on her raincoat and left the coffee shop.  Seven years had passed since the last major incident involving MaloMyotismon, and things had been relatively peaceful for a while.  She graduated from high school, and begun studying college.  She had an on again, off again relationship with her old childhood friend Takeru.  All the while, her own latent powers begun growing more and more powerful, till she was forced to learn to control her own lumokinesis.  Or as she referred to it, her 'holy light'.  Her first act after mastering her power was to remove the remains of the dark spore that remained in her fellow chosen child, Ken.
        Hikari's D-terminal came to life with loud beeping.  An email had arrived.
        "Hikari," the message read.  "A digiport has opened up about a block and a half away from where you are now.  Can you check it out? -Izzy".
        "Damn GPS," Hikari thought to herself.  Izzy could track them down to anywhere in this world, and the Digital.  She had nothing else better to do, might as well go have a look.  She followed a small blip on a map on the D-terminal, leading her down a narrow alleyway.  The atmosphere was filled with a thick fog, flowing out from a large purple sphere of energy.  It didn't look now a normal digiport.  The shadow of a huge figure could be seen emerging from the fog.
        "A Digimon," Hikari thought to herself as she reached for her D-3.  "Well, let's see who you are."
        The figure was huge.  Just under twice as tall as her.  Hikari held the D-3 up and pushed a small button on the front.
        "Human," the D-3 reported.
        "So you're not a Digimon," Hikari said to herself.  "But how on Earth could something that big be human."
        The fog begun to clear away, and the enormous human could now be made out clearer.  Not only was it human, but also a female human.  She was muscular.  Bigger then anyone else she had ever seen before.  Hikari dreaded to think just how much strength such a beast would possess.  She wore skintight pink armour, covering her chest and waist, but leaving her mid section exposed.  Her face head was covered by a pink dome like helmet, with holes for her eyes and mouth.  Despite her muscularity, she possessed a feminine figure, and really large breasts.
        "Hikari Yagami?" the enormous woman said, in a low voice, which sounded extremely familiar to her.
        "Yeah, that's me," Hikari replied.
        The giant lunged forward with surprising speed, with her arm pulled back ready to strike.  Hikari lunged out of the way, just missing the enormous woman’s fist, which plunged straight into the ground she had been standing, leaving an enormous crater behind her.  Hikari ran around behind her, and caught her breath while the hulk stood up and slowly turned around.
        "You're going to make this hard, aren't you?" she said.  Her voice sounded very similar, Hikari thought to herself.  But she had never met anyone like this in her entire life.
        "Who are you?" Hikari yelled.  "And why do you want to harm me?"
        "Hah, an attack like that would do slightly more then 'harm' you!" she replied as she approached Hikari.  "And I don't think its necessary to explain my actions to you."
        The giant soon backed Hikari into a corner, amongst some trashcans.  She reached forward and picked Hikari up off the ground with one hand around the waist.  Hikari tried desperately to fight her, but her futile struggles only entertained the giant.  She knew she could never over power her, each of the giantesses wrists were thicker then her own waist!  She slowly tightened her grip on Hikari, who screamed in pain.  It was like been trapped in a giant vice, or trash compactor.
        "Why are you doing this?" Hikari pleaded as she tried desperately to get free from the giant woman's grip.
        "Lightning claw!!"
        Gatomon leapt down from a fire escape above and slash the hulk repeatedly with her claws.  She barely recognised that attacks, till Gatomon jumped back, landing about 10 meters behind her.  She dropped Hikari to the ground, before turning to face the Digimon.
        "Aww, and what is a cute little kitty like yourself going to do to be?" she said.
        "Hikari, run for it," Gatomon said.  "I can handle her."
        "She's not going anywhere," the hulking woman said.  Hikari climbed to her feet, and charged up a small ball of pink energy in her hands.
        "Holy light!!" she yelled out as she threw he pink ball of light at the giant’s head, which cleanly reflected off of her helmet.
        "Nice trick," the giantess said as she turned to face her attacker.  "But it’s completely hopeless."
        "Gatomon, try and get that helmet off," Hikari yelled out to her partner.
        The giant woman turned to face the small cat.  Now she had a look of fear in her eyes.  Hikari threw another ball of light at her, which hit her in the middle of her broad back.  The giantess picked up a trashcan, and threw it at Hikari, who threw another ball of light, stopping it in mid air.  While the enormous woman was distracted, Gatomon jumped on her back and begun clawing away at the latches holding her helmet on.  The muscular woman shook wildly, until Gatomon flew off and landed in a pile of cardboard boxes.  The giantess reached out, and picked up the small cat Digimon in one of her enormous hands.
        "Did you really think a runt like you could hurt me?" she snickered as she held the small cat up to her face.
        "Holy light!" Hikari yelled out as she threw one more ball of light at the giantess.  This one knocked the pink helmet clean off, revealing the identity of the attacker.
        "Hikari!" Gatomon gasped as she looked upon the giantess.  She looked identical to Hikari, except for the obvious differences in physique.
        "Yeah, it's Hikari Yagami," a voice yelled out.  Standing above them was the woman Hikari met at the diner.  "I brought her here to prove a point to you.  She's you, from a parallel dimension, not unlike your 'Digital world'.  And I'm sure this Juggernaut of a woman is more powerful then a 'mega-level Digimon'.  But you, and her, and I have something else in common."
        The woman threw off her own heavy trench coat, and hat to reveal one further secret.  "I'm Hikari Yagami too."
        The evil Hikari standing on the fire escape laughed, as she store down upon poor helpless Hikari from this world, who was finding it hard to struggle with the idea of there been three Hikari's in this one world.  One good, one evil, and one insanely muscular, who was apparently also evil.
        "Why are you attacking us?" Hikari asked the two evil Hikari's.  "Why would you want to kill one of your own?"
        "Because there's definitely not enough room for three Hikari's in one dimension," muscular Hikari laughed.

    *End of introduction*
     
    Part two

        Hikari charged up a ball of pink light in her hand, in the other she grasped onto her D-3.  "Come on Gatomon, time to digivolve."
        She forced the ball of energy into her digivice, sending out a beam of pure light, which struck Gatomon as she leapt up into the air.
        "Gatomon, warp digivolve to."
        Gatomon begun to glow bright white as her feline-like body morphed into a human figure.  Green armour appeared covering her entire upper, and lower body, leaving her mid section exposed.  Large golden wings grew from her back, and a green helmet covered her head, except for you gap on the back, where her red hair flowed out.  A large green and gold shield appeared in one hand, a golden lance in the other.
        "Ophanimon!"
        "Heh, nice trick," Juggernaut Hikari snickered, "but do you really think its going to be enough?"
        "So this is a 'mega-level' Digimon?" evil Hikari said to herself.  "This should be an interesting fight."
        "Ophanimon," good Hikari yelled out.  "Move the fight to somewhere with a bit more room.  If we fight here, the destruction will be huge!"
        "Nah, I like a bit of collateral damage!" Juggernaut Hikari yelled as she picked up a nearby dumpster and threw it at the angel Digimon.  Ophanimon caught the flying dumpster, and dropped it to the ground.  She held onto her lance firmly, and prepared to strike with all her strength.  The tip of the lance began glowing bright white, pulsating with holy energy.
        "Exactly how strong do you believe you are?" Ophanimon asked her enormous attacker.
        "Hard to say," Juggernaut Hikari replied.  "Where I come from they have yet to discover a force which can stop me.  They called me, 'Hikari Yagami, the unstoppable Juggernaut', or the Hikarinaut for short.  Those tabloid newspapers come up with such cute nicknames."
        "Unstoppable is such a relative term," Ophanimon replied.  "Eden's Javelin!"
        Ophanimon fired a blast of golden from her lance, knocking the Hikarinaut back a few paces.  The enormous surge of energy engulfed the giantess who struggled to fight back.  The giantess regained her composure, and begun fighting back against the holy energy.  Step by step, she gradually made her way closer and closer to the angel Digimon.  Ophanimon tried her hardest to keep the enormous woman back, but the Hikarinaut kept on approaching.
        "How can this be," Ophanimon thought to herself.  "How could a human possibly withstand an attack like that?”
        The giantess crept forward closer and closer, until she was standing over the Digimon.  With one swift backhand, she was able to knock the lance from her hands, ceasing the attack.
        "Whoa, what a workout," the Hikarinaut snickered.  The attack didn't even leave a scratch in her armour.  She was completely unharmed.  "Is that all you've got?  I'm kind of disappointed."
        "I've got plenty more up my sleave," Ophanimon said between clenched teeth.  She leapt up into the air and glided about 10 meters above her.  "Hikari, it appears energy attacks will be useless against this one.  She's got some kind of force field protecting her.  Time to improvise."
        Hikari held out her D-3, and charged up a blue orb or energy in her hands.  Over the past couple of years, her skills had improved greatly.  And her mastery of lumokinesis allowed her to do her own unique brand of digimodifications.  "Yeah," Hikari said as she thrust the orb of energy into the digivice.  "If we divert all off your 'holy energy' been generated by your digi-soul into your digicontractile tissue, take away your ability to fly, as you won't be needing that anymore.  And optimise your entire body for physical strength.  We should end up with one awesome mode change!"
        Hikari's D-3 shot out a large blast of blue energy, engulfing Ophanimon.
        "Ophanimon, mode change to."
      Ophanimon grunted as her muscles begun to thicken and develop.  Her biceps and triceps exploded outwards, annihilating her armour.  Her muscles first grew to enormous proportions, and then gained stunning definition, and finally vascularity as veins popped up along the length of her formerly thin arms.
        Her breasts grew larger, wider and seemingly firmer.  They forced her chest plate to warp around her growing bust.  Her back grew wider, and more V shaped, and round bunches of muscle appeared bulging.  Soon, her chest plate was complete destroyed by her growing upper body. 
        Her butt mimicked her breasts, pushing outwards while becoming rounder and firmer.  Her legs grew thicker, and enormous quads and hamstrings destroyed the fabric of her white fabric dress, and waist armour.
    Finally, the growth halted.  She stood eye to eye with the Hikarinaut, at around 11 feet tall.  The bikini-clad giantess flexed both her biceps, which grew into two enormous bulges of muscle.
    “Ophanimon – Muscle mode!”
    The new muscular Digimon stood opposite of the Hikarinaut, ready to fight.  In the transformation, she had lost her energy attacks and ability to fly, but more then made up with it with the increase of physical strength.
    “This is going to require some new tactics,” Hikari thought to herself as she clenched onto her D-3.  This was the first time she had ever used this transformation, and she had no clue as to it’s potential.
    “Nice trick,” the Hikarinaut snorted as she store her opponent straight in the eye.  For the first time, she was facing an opponent of her own size and stature.
    “Enough talk,” Ophanimon replied as she begun charging towards her opponent.  The Hikarinaut begun running as fast as she could.  Building up a huge amount of momentum.  The two other Hikari’s looked on in shock and awe.
    “Take cover!” Hikari yelled out as she desperately ran away.
    “Agreed,” evil Hikari replied, and then climbed further up the fire escape.
    The two titans collided with each other, their fists connecting with the others upper chest.  The two muscle women were sent flying by the raw force of each other’s attacks.  A huge shockwave was emitted, shattering all windows in the vicinity.  Car alarms went off.  Ophanimon was thrown out of the alleyway, where she landed on a parked car on the side of the road, completely flattening it with her enormous body.  The Hikarinaut was thrown through several brick walls behind her, finally coming to a stop after been thrown through a couple of buildings.
    Ophanimon climbed out of the wreckage of the car.  The attack she received was like nothing else she had ever felt before.  She looked back down at the wrecked car, which was completely reduced to scrap metal.  A crowd begun to form around her, as people noticed the muscle giantess standing in the middle of the street.  It wasn’t exactly the type of thing people were use to seeing.
    The Hikarinaut charged out of the alleyway, ready to attack.  Ophanimon doved to the side, avoiding a sucker punch.  She punched the giantess in the abs, as hard as she could.  Unfortunately, for her, she could feel the Hikarinaut’s forcefield dampen the blow.  The Hikarinaut was barely affected by her attack.
    “Don’t you see it’s pointless,” the Hikarinaut mocked.  “It’s impossible to harm me!  Why don’t you just give up?”
    “I’m never going to give up!” Ophanimon replied.  “Someone has to stop you!”
    Ophanimon swept the Hikarinaut off her feet, and jumped up onto her feet above her.  She threw a hammer punch at the Hikarinaut with all her strength, destroying the road below the two, sending them falling into the subway below.  Ophanimon fell onto the platform, and the Hikarinaut fell onto the tracks.  A loud siren could be heard; the subway train was on its way.  The Hikarinaut stood up, and showed no intention of moving.
    The Hikarinaut held her arm out.  The train had slammed on its brakes, desperately trying to stop before colliding with the girl in the way.  The train collided with her, getting instantly derailed.  Each carriage of the train ran off the track, some heading to the left, others onto the platform.  But the Hikarinaut was not even moved an inch.  She store at Ophanimon with a look of contempt.
    The Hikarinaut knocked the wreck carriages aside with a fairly weak backhand.  She charged towards Ophanimon and grasped onto her head with one hand.
    “Do you give up yet?” the Hikarinaut asked.  “I doubt you’ve got anything else left up your sleeves!”
    Ophanimon knew she was going to have to resort to desperate measures in order to win.  But how could she win against someone who couldn’t even be harmed?
    “Hey Hikarinaut,” she said.  “How tough is that armour yours?”
    “Heh, it’s just fabric,” Hikarinaut replied.  “Do you think I’d need real armour with skin as tough as mine?”
    “But everyone’s got their soft spot,” Ophanimon replied.  “Even a big, stupid muscle head like yourself.”
    “Aw, are you trying to hurt my feelings?” the Hikarinaut asked in a mocking tone.  Ophanimon was feeling around on the ground for anything that could be of use.  She picked up a bit of scrap metal, with sharp gagged edges.  With all her strength, she shoved the piece of metal into the Hikarinaut’s private region.  She staggered back, howling in pain.  Droplets of blood hit the pavement, as Ophanimon climbed back to feet.
    “Sorry Hikarinaut,” she mocked.  “I hope you weren’t planning on having children?”
    The Hikarinaut staggered in pain, and Ophanimon took this opportunity to give her one swift uppercut right to her chin, knocking her up to street level.  She grabbed a large steel pipe, and jumped of after her.  The Hikarinaut had just climbed back onto her feet, when Ophanimon leapt towards her, and impaled her with the steel pipe.
    “Let’s just end this here,” Ophanimon said.  “I don’t want to finish you off.”
    “Hah, do you think this will be enough to stop me?” Hikarinaut yelled.  She pulled the sharp piece of metal out from between her legs, and dropped it to the ground.  Soon the bleeding stopped.  With one swift pull, she removed the steel pipe from her chest.  Within seconds, the wound had completely healed.
    “Healing factor,” she said as she threw the pipe to the ground.  “Not the worst injury I’ve had to recover from though.  Once I was shot but a gigantic energy cannon, which stripped my body down to its skeleton.  Recovered from that one in 20 seconds.  Still want to keep on going?”
    “I’m never, ever going to give up,” Ophanimon replied.
    “Suit yourself,” the Hikarinaut said as she revealed a small black object she had been holding in her hand.  It looked like an electromagnet.  “I think I’ve figured out your weakness.”
    The Hikarinaut charged towards Ophanimon, with the electromagnet in her fist.  She punched Ophanimon directly in her punch, puncturing her skin.
    “You see, I figure you can do what you do because your body is made entirely out of computer data,” the Hikarinaut replied.  “I heard what that puny Hikari was saying earlier.”
    “And I know you get your power from the Crimson Ruby of Cyttorak,” Ophanimon replied as she tried to remove the Hikarinaut’s arm from her chest.
    “Heh, if you knew that, then you would have also have known just how futile it was to fight against me,” Hikari snickered.  “So why’d you keep on going?”
    “Because I never, ever give up!” Ophanimon yelled at her attacker.
    “Good for you,” Hikarinaut said.  “At least you won’t be going out like a bitch!”
    The Hikarinaut sent a huge surge of energy towards the electromagnetic, powering up its magnetic field a thousand fold.  The huge flux of electromagnetic energy disrupted Ophanimon’s data, forcing her to revert back to Gatomon.  The Hikarinaut held onto Gatomon with one hand, and threw her down at the ground with all her strength.
    “Gatomon!” Hikari yelled out.  She ran between Gatomon and the Hikarinaut, and knelled before her fallen friend.
    “Hikari, run,” Gatomon said weakly.  “She’s way too strong.”
    “You want to get out of the way?” the Hikarinaut mocked.  “We’re kind of in the middle of something here.”
    “You bitch,” Hikari cried.  Tears streamed down her face.  She couldn’t stand looking at Gatomon in this condition, and the hatred she felt for her parallel self was beginning to overwhelm her.  “Gatomon is my best friend.  I will not let you kill her!”
    “And what do you plan on doing about it?” the Hikarinaut asked.  Hikari climbed up to her feet, and turned to face the Hikarinaut.  Her eyes were glowing bright pink as energy pulsating from them.
    “I am going to give you something to think about,” Hikari said through clenched teeth.  She fired two beams of pink energy, which flowed from her eyes into the Hikarinaut’s.  The giantess stumbled back a couple of steps, and landed flat on her ass.
    “Hikari, wait,” Gatomon said weakly.  “Come closer for a second.”
    “What is it Gatomon?” Hikari asked as she knelt down towards her friend.

    “What the heck happened here?” Sora asked as she surveyed the damage done to the location of the fight.  She wandered around, till she reached the epicentre of the battle, where she spotted the Hikarinaut.
    “Is that Hikari?” she thought as she looked at the giant woman standing in the wreckage.  The giantess walked away in her direction.
    “Hikari?” Sora asked.  “Is that you?”
    “Yeah,” Hikari replied.  “What’s it to you runt?”
    The Hikarinaut stormed off, not even waiting to hear a reply from her.  She could not care less what others thought.  Then Sora noticed the girl crouching down in the middle of the wreckage.  She ran over to her to see if she needed some assistance.
    “Hikari!” she yelled as she noticed who it was.  “Who was that person who just left?  What the hell is going on here?”
    “I absorbed her,” Hikari cried.  “She’s gone.”
    “Who’s gone?” Sora asked.  Hikari turned around to reveal a new set of cat ears on her forehead.  A long white tail grew out of her lower back.
    “Gatomon,” Hikari replied.  “I absorbed her data.”

    End of part 2

    #31814
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
    Participant

    Even though I's do not know the characters or their individual origins or programs, you do have a most wonderful flair for writing, dear Bass.
    I's look forward to reading for future efforts.
    Kudos unto you.
    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    #31815
    Bass
    Participant

    Even though I's do not know the characters or their individual origins or programs, you do have a most wonderful flair for writing, dear Bass.
    I's look forward to reading for future efforts.
    Kudos unto you.
    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    Thanks for the kind words :D.  Heh, too bad not as many others have read my story :(..

    #31816
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
    Participant

    Thanks for the kind words :D.  Heh, too bad not as many others have read my story :(..

    Yes.
    'Tis an announce we writer must bare.

    But, given time, this shall be read, if no replies or comments be made.

    Do not let such things discourage you from such fine work.
    For there will also be those whom shall read it.

    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    #31817
    Lingster
    Keymaster

    I'll read it later tonight.

    #31818
    Lingster
    Keymaster

    This is very good.

    #31819
    joey7x
    Participant

    Remember Awesome? It's back..in FANFIC form

    Once again BassAsh, you astound me with your fics involving muscled up digi-ladies.  I really like how you evolved kari's character.  Hikarinaut was fantastic. and aces on the muscle descriptions and strenght feats. I hope my fic can get this good…

    *glares at notebook and pen*

    You see that? That is what we're striving for.  A  a clear cut conflict, , a solution that results in a hugely muscled anime chick that leaves'em wanting more and story telling that indicates that you have a general grasp a character's personaluty. Not this "three stooges meet the she-hulk with a little shipping thrown in" tripe that you managed to churn out. Now get on  it. GAH!

    …sorry 'bout that. Once again, great story and I hope that the next part comes soon.

    One more thing. I'd like to commend you on how handled hikarinaut  telling everyone "who she was", heh heh.   

    #31820
    Bass
    Participant

    This is very good.

    Thanks 😀  Heh, to be honest when I first saw you comment on my story, I thought it might be because it broke some rules.  This is much better…

    Once again BassAsh, you astound me with your fics involving muscled up digi-ladies.  I really like how you evolved kari's character.  Hikarinaut was fantastic. and aces on the muscle descriptions and strenght feats. I hope my fic can get this good…

    *glares at notebook and pen*You see that? That is what we're striving for.  A  a clear cut conflict, , a solution that results in a hugely muscled anime chick that leaves'em wanting more and story telling that indicates that you have a general grasp a character's personaluty. Not this "three stooges meet the she-hulk with a little shipping thrown in" tripe that you managed to churn out. Now get on  it. GAH!

    …sorry 'bout that. Once again, great story and I hope that the next part comes soon.

    One more thing. I'd like to commend you on how handled hikarinaut  telling everyone "who she was", heh heh.

    Thank you 😀  I've just finished my last exam today, and I'm going to start on part 3 pretty soon.  Hopefully it'll be a satisfactory continuation of the story 😉

    #31821
    JimmyDimples
    Participant

    Sorry I never sat down and actually read the darn thing, seeing I haven't followed Digimon at all since I was in China.  But you write an excellent story.  Very good.

    I can hardly wait now for part 3!  ;D

    #31822
    mikazuki
    Participant

    I'm not familiar with Digimon either, but the personalities you've instilled into the story are so engaging that I was able to very much enjoy the story. The characters are not only strong physically, but mentally as well, which gives depth to the story. And the progression of events flows well and thrillingly, keeping me drawn in. Most enjoyable, Bass. I'm glad I read this.

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