[JimmyDimples]

I figure it might be. Prob is that EMPs and fields sorta nuke any and all electronics nearby. Not that a good option, if he’s in, oh, a hospital’s ICU.

Aha! M15+4 Axel3.14 5pr34|<3|| z13 1337? o_ô

[David C. Matthews]

I figure it might be. Prob is that EMPs and fields sorta nuke any and all electronics nearby.

It might take awhile before Dyna figures out H4X0R’s weakness, though, ne?

And a further thought about "Sonja": Having her be a "twit" could add some drama to the piece: Dyna is at first grateful for Sonja’s expertise, but how will she feel when she finds out why H4X0R went after Sonja in the first place?

A twist I just thought up: Dyna’s two objectives in this story will be 1) putting a halt to H4X0R’s rampages, and 2) if possible restore him to his human "Roger" form. But Sonja has her own agenda… she was so devastated (mentally and emotionally) by Roger’s revenge against her that she’s willing to "kill" him, i.e. disrupt his digital structure in such a way that he’ll never be able to re-integrate into a physical form again!

Somebody write this up soon! (I can’t, I don’t have the expertise in computers and digital tech to do it justice!)

[JimmyDimples]

[quote="JimmyDimples"]I figure it might be. Prob is that EMPs and fields sorta nuke any and all electronics nearby.

And a further thought about "Sonja": Having her be a "twit" could add some drama to the piece: Dyna is at first grateful for Sonja’s expertise, but how will she feel when she finds out why H4X0R went after Sonja in the first place?

A twist I just thought up: Dyna’s two objectives in this story will be 1) putting a halt to H4X0R’s rampages, and 2) if possible restore him to his human "Roger" form. But Sonja has her own agenda… she was so devastated (mentally and emotionally) by Roger’s revenge against her that she’s willing to "kill" him, i.e. disrupt his digital structure in such a way that he’ll never be able to re-integrate into a physical form again!

Somebody write this up soon! (I can’t, I don’t have the expertise in computers and digital tech to do it justice!)[/quote]

Sonja’s own agenda? Mr. Matthews, you. Are. Ebil. 😈

Almost as ebil as this…

You guys ever play The Sims? Well, I was thinking of having M15+4 H4X0R store Sonja and others as living digital data on a computer system somewhere remote. His prisoners exist in a virtual world there a la that game. And he’s doing what he can to keep them alive but keep their "motive scores in the low red."

The children relatives, though…

Well, when Dyna starts to crack down on him, he kidnaps the kiddies ("Hey kids! Wanna see the exciting world of virtual reality?") and he keeps them happy in a nice little simulated playland. But every once in a while, he’ll send a simulated prog that looks like Sonja to tease them, bully them, torment them, and make them miserable.

And then. he makes the mean prog look like Dyna and cranks up "her" nastiness… So when they see her come to their rescue… they won’t trust her. 😈 😈 😈

Here’s the synopsis as I see it so far.

(1) Mr. H4XOR rears his ugly head, puts the vehicles or systems on NVU’s campus in a tailspin. Dyna controls the damage.

(2) In retaliation, H4X0R starts kidnapping kids and grandkids of the university faculty. This is where Dyna recruits a hacker friend to help her, track them down, and rescue them.

(Twist: He actually befriends some of them…)

(3) After a little research, Dyna finds out also Sonja’s missing, and the scoop behind her and tries to track her down. And finds she’s been beamed down onto a hard drive out in… where’s a good remote locale? Western Sahara? Irkutsk, Siberia? The Falkland Islands? After finding her, she finds out the Sonja’s story… and gets her agreement to help find H4X0R, and shut down his powers with a virus.

(4) Then Dyna gets the ENTIRE history behind Sonja, and the pictures she made to push him over the edge, and how she got every big jerk on campus to dump on him. Then when they corner H4X0R, Sonja pulls a double cross and zaps him with that virus so he can’t ever physically rematerialize or affect anything on the web. It only does half the job, though, so he can’t ever physically rematerialize in a human body. With that, H4X0R decides to hijack the military computers to launch all the nukes in the world, and capture the few people he feels kindly about so they’ll live in a perfect virtual haven while the rest of meatspace fries. It’s up to Dyna to save the day!

So far, so good? What do you think?

[JimmyDimples]

Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Just thought of something!

What if he popped up on Sparta Enterprises’ servers… and Aries managed to trap and isolate him somehow?

"Delete you, Mr. H4X0R? Not at all. How would you like to get some REAL revenge?"

[David C. Matthews]

Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Just thought of something!

What if he popped up on Sparta Enterprises’ servers… and Aries managed to trap and isolate him somehow?

"Delete you, Mr. H4X0R? Not at all. How would you like to get some REAL revenge?"

That would make a great second H4X0R story, after Ares is introduced into the series and we see what he’s capable of on his own.

[Zespara Alathar]

I agree with the Mighty One’s suggestion of a power leech type villainess for Dyna to confront. Also, you could create a master villainess with a super brain to take on our heroine. 🙂

Z

[Axel3.14]

A gravity controller might also create problems for Dyna as well. Being able to punch through a steel wall isn’t useful when you can’t make physical contact with anything.

[JimmyDimples]

I think I can help out with my idea of a female muscle leech. But there are some questions…

(1) Can Dyna zip about America’s cities to stop criminals, or is she pretty much rooted to New Vista?

(2) Is New Vista near the West Coast, East Coast, or where?

(3) Is it OK for someone to write a Dyna fanfiction here in this forum? (*COUGH cough koffmyselfkoff*)

[David C. Matthews]

I think I can help out with my idea of a female muscle leech. But there are some questions…

(1) Can Dyna zip about America’s cities to stop criminals, or is she pretty much rooted to New Vista?

(2) Is New Vista near the West Coast, East Coast, or where?

(3) Is it OK for someone to write a Dyna fanfiction here in this forum? (*COUGH cough koffmyselfkoff*)

<sings> "Go right to the source, and ask the horse…" oops, too much TVLand 😀

Anyway, your answers:

(1) She can go practically anywhere except outer space. (Most of the stories I’ve come up with take place in New Vista only because, being created by me (mostly), I know the place better than I’d know (for example) NYC or Boston. Besides, New York’s already got more than its fair share of superheroes! And I didn’t want to set yet another of my characters in Orlando… I’ve already got two different versions of Orlando to keep up with, I don’t need "The Orlando of Earth-3"!)

(2) New Vista is smack in da middle of the country… analogous to St. Louis but bigger. And the terrain around the city is varied enough that almost any kind of terrain you’d need for a story… mountains, flatlands, forests, a river, a harbor… you’ve got.

(3) If it’s OK with Lingster, it’s OK with me!

[JimmyDimples]

Say, y’all… I’d been to http://www.bumwine.com and I’d been thinkin’…

What kind of villains can you come up with these names?

Thunderbird

Night Train

Wild Irish Rose

Mad Dog 20/20

Cisco

I think they’d make quite a bad guy team… I’ll talk more next time.

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