[raylight]

I'm really surprised he or somebody else hasn't already posted this, but this is definitely a classic FMG story, with the added benefit of being immensely readable other than the FMG scene.

http://brawna.org/stories/eleanor

I hope I'm not the only one who enjoyed this story.

[strang3n3]

That was a very good story.

[Lingster]

Make sure to post comments so Morpheus writes more stories for us!

Also, go join his Yahoo! group and tell him there, also: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Morpheuscabinet2/

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Surely the purpose of Brawna is that we can let the festering uselessness of Yahoo groups die a death?

Good stuff… but rather more of a scene, than a story. I suppose that can be considered good or bad.

[DevonCory]

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? 😉

The "What's happening to me?" comment always does it for me, so I was hooked right there. I would have liked Ellie to be more vocal about her transformation and for the growth itself to be more detailed. All in all though, quite nice.

[Lingster]

I liked it, except for the gypsy part. Why does it always have to be gypsies? 😉

Those freakin' gypsies!  I read it again last night and I really enjoy it.

[Trina]

Hey!!!  I'm a gypsy…  Or at least my anscestors were.  ;D 
So, if any of y'all need any of that vitality potion, come find me in my wanderings.  If you can!  😉

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