ericka the beast – part i (new story)

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  • June 5, 2009 at 2:43 pm #84423
    darkscribex
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    Hello all. I've been lurking these forums a while and I'm a big fan of female muscle. I finally decided to try my hand at some fiction. Enjoy.

    http://brawna.org/stories/ericka-beast-part-i

    June 5, 2009 at 4:52 pm #84424
    darkscribex
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    Edited and uploaded an additional section. I must say, writing this was an…interesting experience. And enjoyable. Part II should follow soon.

    June 7, 2009 at 3:33 pm #84425
    darkscribex
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    part ii is up. Anybody care to comment? I'd love some feedback.

    June 7, 2009 at 3:55 pm #84426
    alex
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    Very nice story so far. Looking forward to hearing what she's going to do next (probably mayhem) and how big she's going to get.

    June 9, 2009 at 2:40 am #84427
    El_Roy_1999
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    Reposted from Brawna:

    I like it!

    It's a crazy story, full of crazy people. I somehow enjoy it.
    Besides, will Tanya reappear? She might be available for some competitive growth/revenge, mightn't she?
    Please write on!

    June 11, 2009 at 1:09 am #84428
    Mr.Shhh
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    I wanted to congratulate you on the overwhelming awesomeness of your story!  He's the comment I posted on Brawna:

    First off, as a piece of first-time fiction your writing is extremely clear and descriptive. You seem to be a natural writer. The story itself is so packed with the stuff I love it's almost crazy. I've never been a fan of magical muscle growth, so I was thrilled to see how hard Erika struggles to forge her dream physique. I particularly like how far you push things – clothes bursting, popping veins, tit-less pecs – this is female muscle pushed to the max! Can't wait to read more!

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