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  • November 5, 2005 at 3:57 pm #17001
    Tara_Cross
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    I've been feeling a bit out of place as far as what and how I write because I'm no writer. I was wondering if anyone read anything i wrote and if i could get some feedback. I hope this isn't spamming if it is i'm very very very sorry. My yahoo ID is tara_lux. Thanks.

    November 5, 2005 at 5:28 pm #17002
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
    Participant

    Greeting, dear Tara Cross. 'Tis good to see ya'll here after such an absence from Wreck Shop's beloved and long departed Forums. If thou doth wish constructive criticism of thy works, then please feel free to e-mail I (the mail icon on my's profile) your stories and I's shall critique them for you.
    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    November 5, 2005 at 5:51 pm #17003
    gblock01
    Participant

    Although my opinion probably doesn't count for much, having not written stories until recently, I am more than willing to offer my services as well. My email is on my profile as well.

    November 5, 2005 at 5:58 pm #17004
    Silent One
    Participant

    Better yet, post them on the board for everyone to enjoy/critique.  😀

    November 5, 2005 at 6:02 pm #17005
    gblock01
    Participant

    Now why didn't I think of that?  😳

    November 5, 2005 at 10:54 pm #17006
    AlexG
    Keymaster

    If you write it (and you post it), they will come . . .  😉

    Whether or not that they'll also comment is all up to them.  But until you do, you'll never know.

    Good luck!

    Note to Silent One: Your avatar, very original, very you.  😎

    “I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
    ~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

    November 6, 2005 at 12:21 am #17007
    Tara_Cross
    Participant

    I figured so I don't clutter up the message boards or anyones email inbox I'd post them on my geocities site.
    You can find my stories here

    http://www.geocities.com/tara_lux/mywork.html

    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/criticalmass01

    November 6, 2005 at 6:04 am #17008
    Silent One
    Participant

    Note to Silent One: Your avatar, very original, very you.  😎

    Thanks  😀  It's not so original though, I bet if you think back you can remember where I've used it before.

    It's good to be back.

    November 6, 2005 at 8:36 am #17009
    gblock01
    Participant

    Ah. I remember reading most of these stories. Very nice work. In all honesty, I never really got the hang of writing in the first person, but you do it beautifully. I hope that you will post some of your work here.

    November 6, 2005 at 9:03 am #17010
    David C. Matthews
    Participant

    I figured so I don't clutter up the message boards

    It's not "clutter" if people are enjoying them! By all means, post them here!!

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