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    rastra
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    tara ive read your stories and i think you are a very good writer
    i enjoyed just the two of us very much and its one of my fav stories

    #17012
    Tara_Cross
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    DCM spoke to me  😀 awesome. I guess i have to post em here now. I was just afraid the stories would get lost between the posts. As it's 3am right now I need to rest but I'll post them here ASAP. Oh what the heck i can at least post S.W.A.T.

    Metro City SWAT Episode 1
              The Accident 

    Who am I? Are you certain you’d like to know? The story of my life is by no means a pleasant one. If you’ve been told it was a happy little tale about an average happy little girl, it’s not true. Just like many people my age I’m a broke college student trying to find my way in the world. But unlike many people my age I don’t have a lot of time to party and hold down a normal job. My job is a lot different than many people. I Tara Jasmine Cross am a Special Weapons and Tactics agent. A SWAT agent in Metro City. This is my story.

    October 14th was the day it all started. I had just finished my training and was rather nervous about being in the sort of condition I’d trained for. Metro City is an unforgiving city. I’d joined the force after my friend was shot and killed by a terrorist cult by the name of the “Silver Dragon”. It had been months since that day, but the pain of losing a loved one doesn’t just go away. I couldn’t let it go, I would see to it that these bastards went down hard. In the comics I’d have thrown on a black cowl and went vigilante on the entire city. But this was real life, and I knew I couldn’t fight crime alone.

    I was home when the call came in. There was a hostage situation at the Haven military facility. I arrived at the prescient at about midnight and was greeted by my fellow SWAT operatives. I entered the briefing room and took my seat to prepare for my first assignment.“Alright people we have a hostage situation at the Haven military facility.” the chief started. “We have a confirmed 18 hostages in the facility. Nine on each side of the nexus powered flux generator. These people know what there doing. A stray shot could set off a chain reaction and the whole place could go up in a black cloud of smoke. Agent London?”

    “Yes sir?” she answered

    “You agent Cross, agent Summers, and agent Mavado, and agent Chambers will enter entry point delta. Team Alpha and Omega will begin the assault from points B and C near the entrance. Your job will be to get the hostages out through the ventilation corridors used to vent the radioactive gas. The facility is not active so the entry point is safe as long as you can get the hostages out without drawing fire.”

    “Understood. Team lets move out!” she responded.

    An hour later we suited up and were on our way to the Haven military facility. Michelle, or Shelly as I called her could see I was nervous and tried to calm me down. I was shaking all over and I couldn’t breathe. I asked her who was responsible for the military facility being taken over like this. She told me it was Lotus of the Silver Dragon was the one who initiated this terrorist action on Haven. I was never sure which member of the Silver Dragon was responsible for my friends death but she’d do either way. This syndicate had terrorized Metro City even before I was born. Shelly had her own score to settle with the Silver Dragon. The woman in question known only as Lotus had murdered her brother years ago for failing to pay them protection money on his comic book store. Shelly too had a personal Interest in this. Agent Jennifer Summers, one of the less social of the team was on what she called a mission to clean up the dirt bags that thought they could get away with anything. She was rather cold. We used to be partners on the force before SWAT but she still treated me mean and distant. Still I could tell she cared. Mavado and Chambers made up the male portion of the team. Chambers always gives me crap because he didn’t think I belonged on the team. I didn’t care about him. What mattered to me most was making things right.

    We arrived at the Haven facility in a matter of minutes. I felt a new resolve within myself to put a hurting on these “Dragons”. We made our way to the back of the facility and awaited the first two teams to go in. I was oblivious from where I was but they had acquired a concussion laser cannon and nearly took the first squad out completely. We were to wait for the signal of gunfire but as the first squad was hit the second quad opened fire leading us to believe it was time to move in. We all entered the corridor with Shelly at point and made our way a few yards into the facility. I looked up and saw a guard standing directly above. If he happened to look through the floor vents I was toast. I kept quiet and moved quickly with the others. I sensed something was wrong. Why wasn’t he helping defend the front gate? There was no time to think about that. We made our way to the vents opening at the other end and looked in seeing the hostages. Then I saw her. Lotus. An Asian woman in a green ninja like uniform with a single katana sheathed across her back. Suddenly the front doors opened and the remaining SWAT agents ran in firing at the terrorists careful not to hit the hostages. A huge shoot out ensued and we moved in to gather the hostages. We gathered them one by one back to the wagon but as Shelly and Jen escorted the last hostage I saw Lotus making her escape. I ran after her as she reached the 3rd level overlooking the gamma flux power generator. I took aim but she threw one of her agents in my bullets path. The others made it outside safely but I had a score to settle. I drew a pistol and shot at her repeatedly. She blocked bullet after bullet with her sword but the last bullet caught her in the arm. Just as I prepared to fire again she screamed “Dragons never die!” and threw her sword striking the generator. She leapt down at me striking me to the ground as the light from the generator temporarily blinded me. I swung at her but she hooked my arm and hip tossed me onto my back and drove a kick into my chest. Thank goodness I was wearing protection there. I grabbed her ankle and pushed her upward but she back flipped landing on her feet. I was amazed by her agility but didn’t have time to care about how nimble she was. I swung at her again and she hip tossed me again but I landed feet first planting twisting to a position on both knees as I held her arm behind her. I rose to my feet switching my hammerlock quickly into a sleeper hold. Then all of a sudden she kicked her off from her heel driving my back into the power generator. I heard the generator rumbling within and thought to myself that my revenge would have to come another day. I pushed her away swinging a crescent kick for her neck but she rolled out of the way and ran off into a hallway corridor.

    “You are a worthy opponent SWAT girl.” she laughed. “But unfortunately our meeting must be cut short.”

    She fled and I followed but the doors slammed shut. The generator shook violently and I knew I had to get out. I ran for the ventilation corridor just as the gamma flux power generator went off. Instead of the whole place going up the entire facility just shook. I could see the opening ahead but the vibrations got stronger and stronger. Just as I made it to the opening a blast of radiation exploded down the corridor slamming into me throwing me out of the corridor. I rolled across the grass into the truck. My vision got blurry and I lost consciousness. I lapsed in and out in the ambulance on my way to the hospital; I thought I was dead.

    #17013
    Tara_Cross
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    Metro City SWAT Episode 2
              The Awakening 

    I heard a familiar voice pierce the darkness of my mind while I was unconscious. “Tara….. Please be ok.” the voice whispered. Hours later I woke up in a hospital bed. I looked up seeing Shelly and Jen and smiled. I wasn’t sure what had happened but I was feeling pretty good despite being exposed to flux radiation at that high of a level but I just thought maybe the doctors treated me already. Either way I was happy to be alive and even more happy that our mission was a success. At least by my standards.

    “Tara! Your awake…..” Shelly screamed.

    “We thought you were a goner kid.” Jennifer said “How do you feel?”

    “I feel ok I guess.” I answered cheerfully.

    “The doctor says Tara has a clean bill of health.” Shelly said happily.

    “But…..”

    “I know, it doesn’t make sense. She was hit with a mega-heavy concentrated blast of flux radiation. She should be….”

    “Dead?”

    “Well yeah.”

    At that point the doctor walked into my hospital room. “I’m sorry ladies” he started. “visiting hours are over. Your going to have to go.” Shelly and Jen reluctantly left my hospital room and went back to HQ. I tried to get some sleep but I was too wide awake to get any rest. “I wander if my hairs going to fall out of something.” I shuddered at the thought. My mind raced hour after but I just couldn’t figure out how my body wasn’t reduced to a pile of ashes. Maybe it was my shielding? Couldn’t be, I was only wearing a spectra vest, and even if somehow it could resist flux radiation my face was exposed. I couldn’t figure it out. I tried to go to sleep after the orderlies shut off the lights in my private room to encourage me to go to sleep. I tossed and turned in my bed but it was no use, I couldn’t get to sleep. Not only that but my bare feet were exposed to the cold air of the room. I sat up to adjust my blanket as a dull pain assaulted my head causing me to groan as it gradually intensified. “Great I knew I’d get sick. Damn it.” I tried to massage the pain out but it was no use. I fled to the bathroom still in my hospital gown and splashed water on my face. That didn’t help the situation much, in fact things got worse at that point. I felt horribly sick to my stomach. I dropped to my knees in front of the toilet. Everything started getting blurry. I grunted harshly as the pain spread across my body. I tried to scream but a grunt was all I could muster. With my eyes shut tight I couldn’t possibly know that my hands were slowly expanding. A tingling sensation mixed with the blinding pain as my body began to slowly swell larger. I hunched my back as the musculature there also slowly expanded. I opened my now glowing red eyes and was shocked to see the seat of the toilet cracking under the pressure of my expanding hands. I hunched over further and out of the corner of my eye I saw my discoloring hair grow longer as it gradually went from my normal blonde to black. I started to feel a rage building within me and I rose my arms into the air throwing the cracked toilet against the wall. I stood up looking into the mirror; I thought I was hallucinating. My eyes were red and giving off this eerie glow, while my once shoulder length hair had darkened to a black hue and had lengthened down to my upper back. “What’s happening to me!!!” I felt a tickling sensation as my hospital gown slid up due to the volume of my expanding chest. My eyes widened as my forearms pulsated with muscular growth. Veins began to pronounce themselves in my swelling arms. I pushed my sleeve up as my swelling biceps and triceps seized the sleeves in there expansion. I hunched over further and clutched my hands. In this motion the expanding mass of my arms tore my gowns sleeves apart. At the same time as I hunched over the developing musculature of my widening back popped the restraints on the back of the gown. I moaned as I felt the cool air on my sweaty swelling back. I tried to resist the changes that were happening to me by willing myself to stop growing but it was no use. I watched in horror as my biceps bulged higher an higher as my arms filled with hulking mass annihilating what was left of the sleeves. At the same time my triceps accomplished the same degree of growth filling with powerful muscle mass as they thickened. I staggered back into my hospital room groaning loudly as I continued to transform into this massive hulking creature. As I slammed my enlarged fists into the medical cabinet crushing it into a pile of twisted metal I felt something within me give. A wicked smile played across my lips as I surrendered to the change raising my powerful arms into the air letting out a powerful roar! I began flexing my powerful muscles willing them to expand. As my intelligence slowly ebbed away only one word tore through my mind. More. I doubled over as the beautiful pain hit me again. I grunted over and over as I felt nots of muscle stretch into my widening back. I felt a warmth between my legs as they too expanded gaining a monstrous degree of muscle. My thighs swelled thicker and thicker. They seemed to be inflating in sheer size but due to the gown I couldn’t see the truly awesome expansion. My calves bunched up and swelled outward as they grew and grew, veins pronouncing themselves up and down my growing legs to match the ones on my expanding arms. I felt the warmth intensify as my panties began to moisten. Moaning loudly I felt the growth accelerate as I began hearing audible sounds of muscle growing and skin stretching. I licked my lips feeling them grow fuller as I gazed toward the floor. I both saw and heard the expansion of my thickening ankles and growing feet. I watched with wicked delight as my once small slim feet thickened and widened with hulking growth. In combination with the expanding mass of my beautifully large swelling toes, my feet had gained a powerful appearance unlike anything id ever seen. MORE!!! I roared! I grasped what was left of the flimsy hospital gown and ripped away throwing it aside, flexing my enormous muscles moaning deeply. I felt my stomach twisting and reforming itself. Due to the expansion of my chest I couldn’t see what was happening but as I lowered my enlarged hands to my abdomen I could feel an increasing musculature developing as my once soft tummy transformed into a pulsating mass of abdominal muscle. The warmth between my legs continued to intensify and I suddenly felt a stiffness wash across my entire body making it hard to move. I hunched over bringing my hands in front of my face grimacing with erotic delight as the transformation continued. The action of bringing my arms to the front caused an explosion of muscle as my arms continued to grow, along with my shoulders which had nearly reached the size of beach balls. I grunted loudly as my entire body hulked up expanding to the point my room looked more like a cage to me. My undergarments, even though they were made out of a high tech polymer meant to take on high levels of stress, it was only a matter of time before they were destroyed. My swelling breast began to spill out of my stretched out bra. One by one my nipples popped free. My massive breasts twitched as dense thick pectoral muscle developed under them. This expansion popped my bra in the front freeing my inhuman chest. I cupped and massaged my breasts running my enlarged fingers across both erect nipples. I moaned stroking my nipples slowly at first then faster and harder. I began to moan and grunt louder and faster. The remaining straps of my bra snapped away leaving my massive upper body completely naked but I was to busy furiously fondling myself to notice the final strap snap loudly across my hulking back. Yes!!! Yes!!! I roared. I raised my massive arms into the air slamming both fists into my medical bed crushing it to the floor. I remained in this hunched over position as the final stages of my growth began. The already massive muscles in my back began to thicken outward. Every muscle group inflated in sheer size causing my back to hunch. I loved every second of it. I moaned loud and long grunting as my neck expanded and my trapezius muscles bulked up. From behind it would have looked like my back was protruding outward and my head would appear as if I was disappearing behind a hill of hulking muscle. My lats spread out pulling wide adding to the incredible dimensions of my back. I felt a tightening sensation pressing into my vagina. My panties had survived up to this point but had now sucked into the crack of my swelling ballooning ass turning itself into a thong. However this thong didn’t last long. A loud snap and they dropped to the floor. I stood there completely naked, a few more seconds and my body reached it’s destined mass. I’d started about 5'9" 115 and by this time I’d reached over 8 feet in height and I weighed about a ton. The sheer size was astounding, from my wide back to span of gorgeously large toes. After the destruction of my panties I noticed juices dripping from the lips of my clitoris. I began to boil with a mix of rage and lust as I licked my thick lucius lips. I grasped the remains of the bed throwing it out of my hospital room through the glass doors. I ROARED with a powerful rage I’d never before felt in my life. I grasped a large piece of medical x ray equipment and thrusted it into the ceiling causing it to buckle dropping equipment from the room above my onto the floor. I kicked a heart monitor through the wall and began to throw random objects around the room for the mere fact my now primitive mind could think of nothing better to do with my powerful new body. I rested my foot on a defibulator thrusting my foot downward crushing it. I then grasped a stray pole on the floor with my toes and squeezed. I moaned loudly as I felt the steel ooze between my huge sexy toes like it was butter. Fueled by nothing but a lustful rage I cleared the room and destroyed everything in it in a matter of minutes. With nothing left to destroy I rested my back against the wall driving two fingers deep into my vagina. I roared with primal lust fingering myself faster and faster. As I felt myself near climax I used every ounce of my strength driving my now larger fingers harder and harder into myself. My eyes rolled back into my head as I went on. YES!!! YES!!!! MORE!!! I roared. Suddenly my vagina exploded spilling my juices all over the floor. I orgasmed over and over until I nearly blacked out. I lapsed into semi consciousness and tiredly closed my eyes. I began to recede in size shrinking slowly back to normal. Curling up on the floor in the midst of the destruction I’d caused, I absent mindedly grabbed the torn hospital gown half covering myself and fell asleep.

    #17014
    Hunter S Creek
    Participant

    Welcome, Tara!

    Thank you for sharing your very cool stories!

    Tschuss!
    Hunter

    #17015
    gblock01
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    I'm torn between saying that your Start Me Up seires is my favorite, or the S.W.A.T. series. Either way, they are both magnificent. This one, in my opinion, has a better transformation scene. Will you continue this series?

    #17016
    Tara_Cross
    Participant

    I plan on adding to that and my current red eyes story  😎 ty for your intrest ^.^

    #17017
    rastra
    Participant

    start me up is also a good story  😀

    #17018
    gblock01
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    I can't wait for the next chapter for the series.  😀

    #17019
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
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    All that can be said is: 'tis wonderful to have a Lady such as yourself, dear Tara, writing such wonderful stories of this genre. Do not be afeared to post them again. You sucess and their approval is assured.
    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

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