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November 7, 2007 at 3:26 am #63070ratlafParticipant
Whoo… that's a bit of "F" alliteration. Anyway, this is a work of my fiction based on Joss Whedon's Firefly TV show. All the characters and the end of the "Out of Gas" episode are his creation while the plot and everything after is a product of my twisted mind. Enjoy!
Firefly FMG
By Ratlaf“Hey Captain,” said Kaylee entering the infirmary.
“Hey…”
“You fixed the ship. Good work.”
“Thanks…”
“All right,” the Doc interjected. “I have too insist. The Captain need to rest.”
“Yeah,” Mal said with a slur. “I think the Doc might not be wrong about that one. Just going to need a few…” Mal said almost falling asleep again. “You all going to be here when I wake up?”
“We’ll be here,” Shepherd reassured him.
“Good. That’s good,” and with that Mal slept for the next sixteen hours.
“Say Doc, we were all feeling kinda weird when we were out there in the shuttle, you mind taking a look at me?” Kaylee sweetly asked the Doctor obviously flirting with him.
“Feeling weird how?”
“Well there was about ten minutes there where we were all feeling a bit woozy, nauseous.”
Rolling his eyes Jayne left the infirmary while Shepherd just smiled. “Well let me examine you real quick.”
Triumphantly she enjoyed every minute of his checkup. Simon, of course, was totally oblivious to the closeness he was enjoying with Kaylee. “Well, there doesn’t seem to be anything wrong with your vitals. I’m going to need to do a blood test.”
“Alright, be sure not to pinch me too hard Doctor.” This also went straight over his head as he drew a blood sample.
“I should probably test you too Shepherd, and Jayne and Inara too.”
Once again unsuccessful in getting through to Simon, Kaylee retreated to the sanctuary of the engine room where working on Serenity always, or sometimes, well hardly ever took her mind off of Simon and why he’s so irritating and difficult to get to. In a moment of frustration she tried to loosen a bolt by tightening it and bent the handle of the ratchet wrench she was using.
Kaylee had always been strong for a girl, growing up on a farm will do that, especially when all the work her daddy had for her was loading hay bales, but she’d never bent a piece of metal like this before, intentionally or by accident. She tried to bend it back but it wouldn’t budge. Perplexed she decided to call it a night.
“Well, you’ve all suffered from mild radiation poisoning,” Simon explained the next morning. “As far as I can tell it’s so minor that by now any damage that would have happened would already have been done and you’re in no more danger although I will take another blood sample in about a week to make sure there’s no permanent damage.”
“Will I still be able to, you know…” Jayne asked obviously worried about his manhood.
“Yes as far as I can tell the dose was minor and the shortness of your exposure to it makes me believe there’ll be no permanent damage. We should probably check the radiation shielding on that Shuttle so this doesn’t happen again.”
“I’ll do that,” said Wash.
“Thank you Doctor,” Inara replied and somehow ended this impromptu meeting with a grace that only a lifelong Companion could posses.
“So if I feel any side effects of this I should let you know right away, right?” Kaylee asked Simon flirting again.
“Yes… Is there something you want to tell me?”
“Oh no, I just wanted to make sure!” she said smiling sweetly.
“Great, well I’d better check on the Captain.”
Frustrated again she went to Inara’s shuttle this time only to find it locked. Knowing Inara’s moods and need for privacy she decided to check on the port stabilizer. It had been rattling a bit and she wanted to tighten it before the whole engine snapped off during take off.
She went to put on her flight suit and noticed that it was too small for her. The legs and arms of the suit were way above her ankles and wrists and frankly it was uncomfortable because her shoulders were pulling the suit up so high it was rubbing her in just the right way. Wonderful and pleasing at any time except when doing a space walk.
Kaylee went to the space suit storage locker and pulled out one of Wash’s suits and that one fit just fine. The space walk was just the thing she needed. She always loved coming out into the complete silence and the total black punctuated by billions of stars. After admiring the view for a bit she got to work, something else that always soothed her.
The port stabilizer was an easy repair. Once again she had to do a bit of re-wiring and re-tightening of the anchor bolts, nothing she wasn’t used to doing on a regular basis. This time though, she had brought the strongest wrench she had to tighten the anchors because her ratchet wrench was still bent from yesterday. As she was tightening the last bolt she put a bit of extra effort into it and because there’s no sound in space, she didn’t hear her wrench creaking before it snapped cleanly in two.
The sudden lack of resistance almost sent her sprawling into the nothingness of space. She instinctively reached out and held on to the engines’ intake. Good thing they weren’t burning right now. After returning her heart rate to normal she looked at the handle of her strongest wrench and saw that the metal had somehow been forced past it’s tolerances and snapped as cleanly as a crystal.
Definitely perplexed now she worked her way back to the hatch and inside because she needed to figure out what was going on and she needed to get out of her spacesuit because it was starting to feel somewhat claustrophobic. Smaller somehow.
“Hey Simon! Will you help me out of this, I seem to be a bit stuck.”
“Uh, sure, where’s the problem?”
“Well, I can’t seem to get my top off.”
“Oh, well, here, let me pull the sleeves and it should slide over your head.” again her allusion going totally over his head.
“There it goes. I’ve never had trouble getting this suit off before. Thanks.” She said as she gave him a quick hug/squeeze.
“Aaaah!”
“What? What happened are you alright.”
“I’m fine, it just that you… Well you… I guess one of the hoses must’ve jabbed me.”
“Oh, I’m so sorry.” Kaylee said blushing a bit. “Thanks anyway.” She said stepping close to him. Close enough to make him squirm a bit, look up at her strangely, and with a knowing smile on her face she bounded down to the cargo bay to put the suit away.
“Do those space boots make her that much taller?” Simon asked himself remembering that he was looking up slightly at her when she stepped so maddeningly close to him. “They must and I’ve just never noticed before.” He shrugged and went back down to the infirmary.
“Kaylee, will you help me move these crates. I checked our balance this morning and we’re listing to port a bit,” Wash asked her just as she was done putting the suit away.
“Sure thing, do we need to move all of them?”
“Yeah, I figured that if we move these eight to starboard side we’ll straighten out again.”
“OK,” Kaylee said brightly as she picked up the first crate. ‘Wow, these are light,’ she thought to herself. Wash picked up a crate on his own but he was obviously struggling with his. She went back and stacked three crates on top of each other and tried lifting it.
“Woah, what are you doing!!? Those weigh about 50 kilos each! You’ll hurt yourself!”
“No I wont, I’m a strong girl, comes from growing up on a farm… Look,” she said as she easily lifted them and carried them to the other side of the cargo bay. “Actually that was still a bit light.” She put her three crates on top of the two already moved and lifted all five off the ground. This time she had to work. “There we go, now that’s heavy.”
Wash just stared speechless as Kaylee lifted 250 kilos as easily as he had lifted 50. He could also tell there was something different about her, something that made him want his Zoë to take him in bed, pin him down and ravish him. “Well, you obviously won’t have any trouble with the last three so I’ll let you finish. Zoë…!”
He left with a look in his eyes and a bit of an awkward walk that made Kaylee smile, and made her want to pounce on Simon, rip all his clothes off and make him make love to her all day and night. With a sigh she lifted two of the crates with one arm, the third in her other and set them down on the other side of the bay.
At dinner that night Kaylee’s appetite seemed to be never ending. She easily put down five helpings of the blandest tasting protein meal they’d had in weeks. Their next job wasn’t for a few more days and ration selections were getting thin. Even so, as the meal went on and Kaylee kept eating and eating she suddenly experienced the same sensation she’d felt in the space suit, only this time it was with Wash’s borrowed flight suit. It felt too small and even felt like it was shrinking as she was eating. No one had really noticed anything different about Kaylee except for her appetite so after helping clean up, even putting the dishes away on the top shelf without having to reach, she went to her bunk.
By the time she climbed down the ladder the flight suit was painfully tight and as she peeled it off her growing body Kaylee finally came to realize what was going on and why weird things were happening these past few days.
Her body had transformed in the past two days from her usual toned physique into an extremely muscular, extremely strong body that any man would spend years and years building. She was definitely bigger and more muscular than Jayne and as she explored these new endowments she quickly turned herself on watching her own, new, body swell with muscular power as she flexed her arms, spread her lat’s like the wings of a bird, appeared to double her size with a “I need to tie my shoes!” pose, made her breasts swell bigger and bigger as she flexed her pecs, and even destroyed what was left of her panties when she flexed her legs. The fabric had no chance resisting her massive legs and the strength and power she now possessed sent her to the knife edge of an orgasm. Then the thought that she’d now be able to take Simon whether he wanted to be taken or not, sent her over the edge and she imagined herself overpowering him while he enjoyed being taken by the woman of his dreams.
She fell asleep with a smile on her face as she continued to grow.
Riiip! “Dammit!”
Riiip! “Son of a…!”
“Kaylee, are you alright?” Zoë’s voice floated down from the hall above.
“Zoë! Perfect, come down here I’ve got a problem.”
“Woah!” Zoë said as she looked way up at Kaylee who was now almost as tall as Jayne but definitely twice as muscular. She was easily as muscular as Hardings, the biggest guy in their unit back in the war and the biggest guy Zoë had ever seen. “What happened?”
“I don’t know but it’s amazing, isn’t it?” Kaylee asked as she flexed her arms which ballooned up to the size of cantaloupes.
“Amazing is one way of putting it, alarming would be another.”
“I know, I can’t get any of my clothes to fit, just these short-tights. Oooh, I’m so hungry,” she said wolfing another protein bar. Judging by the wrappers littering her room she’d already eaten a whole carton since she’d woken up. That bar was the straw that broke the camels’ hump. Her whole body shuddered and she began expanding. Her muscles were growing in front of both of their eyes and the shorts she was wearing, which were already micro shorts because of her new size, lost their battle. The seams steadily ripped as Kaylee grew until just the elastic around her waist was holding. With a casual flick she ripped them off and looked despairingly at Zoë.
“I can’t walk around naked! I don’t think we have anything on board that’ll fit me.”
“Let me scrounge around, I’ll be right back.”
“OK, in the meantime would you bring me some breakfast too?”
“Uh, sure, but do you want to repeat what we just saw, what you just experienced?
“Hell yeah, it felt amazing!” she said as she flexed her now volleyball sized arms.
A few minutes later Wash called down to see if Kaylee was ready for breakfast. She quickly hid herself under her covers and told him to come down.
“You not feeling well?”
“Nah, I feel great, just getting a slow start and trying to figure something out.”
“Oh, OK, Zoë was just as mysterious. Let me know if you need anything.”
“Thanks Wash.”
Once he was out of sight she bolted for the food. Within a minute and a half it was gone and she closed her eyes, waiting for that feeling of growth to permeate her body. She was not disappointed, it felt to her like a wave of heat and pleasure emanating from her heart and spreading to every fiber of her being as she grew again, as her muscles expanded, as power filled her to the bursting point, she had to grip one of the “I” beams it was so intense and this time she heard the metal groan as she inadvertently stressed it.
With a gasp she let go, staring unbelieving at her own finger marks in the twisted steel. ‘Good thing I wasn’t holding the hull of the ship,’ she thought, ‘I’d’ve torn right through it! This is so cool!’ Experimentally she flexed her arms again and now they expanded to the size of basketballs, biceps and triceps combined. Her head was beginning to look comically small compared to her gigantically muscled body. She was probably as big as any man had ever been, on Earth-That-Was or in the New-Verse. When she tried the “tie my shoes” pose she practically fainted as her neck, shoulders, arms and chest all pumped up to enormous proportions making it look like she was made up of only muscle.
“I found something that might work.” Zoë said as she descended the ladder.
“You’ve brought me a circus tent,” Kaylee said as she tried to find the top of the flight suit she’d just been handed.
“Well, now that you’re bigger than a circus…”
“Yeah…” Kaylee wriggled into it and amazingly enough it was still huge on her. Her bulk barely filled half of this enormous flight suit. “Who was this made for, the Incredible Hulk?”
“Actually, there was an Alliance genetics program attempting to breed colossal soldiers and the program would’ve worked if the soldiers didn’t have a four day life span after they were altered. These are their uniforms. We just use them as filler cargo.”
“Maybe they should’ve tried with women instead of men because that’s where I seem to be headed.”
“I see that you’ve grown again.”
“Yeah, and look at this.” Kaylee said as she bounded over to the “I” beam she’d bent.
“You’re going to have to watch yourself. Especially where Simon’s involved. Men are fragile, trust me on that one. Here try this one, it’s the smallest of those suits.”
“You mean Wash likes that you’re stronger than him!?”
“Yeah, I wondered why he was so enthusiastic yesterday, now I think I know.”
“It must’ve been when I carried those five crates for him, now I could probably carry all eight with one hand,” she mused flexing her arm again, seemingly not getting enough of the sight of her new body. “So how do I make my appearance to everyone else?”
“How about walking up to Simon, reaching down to him, lifting him up with one arm and kissing him in front of everyone?”
“Ooooh do you really think I could? No wait, that’d only embarrass him. I think I’ll act like nothing’s different and see how he reacts. No that hasn’t worked at all so far. I think I’ll corner just Simon and then pick him up and kiss him.”
“How about I ask him to visit you here? Say you’re feeling weird from that radiation…” Zoë trailed away an obvious epiphany visiting her.
“Yeah, ask him to examine me! Oooh, this’ll be fun!”
Not noticing Zoë’s vacant expression as she climbed the ladder Kaylee went about modifying another of the XS super sized suits so that it had no sleeves and shorts for pant legs. Now she was clothed, but her mighty new muscles from her neck, her chest with it’s ample cleavage, both her breasts and her muscles, down her shoulders, over her biceps and triceps, down her forearms, and her quads that surged with power as she stood nervously waiting for Simon, to her Football size calves were exposed in all their power packed glory. Her chest, back and ass filled in the rest of the jump suit so completely that no one would have a hard time noticing that she was now a tall, super strong, power packed, muscle babe who loves to flirt and was getting hornier and hornier as she heard Simon’s footsteps approach in the hall above her.
“So, Kaylee what seems to be the proble…..” he was even more flabbergasted than usual when he saw her standing in her modified jump suit designed to show off her hulking new physique.
“Oh nothing, I’m just going through a little growth spurt and I wanted you to examine every part of me to make sure that I’m in no danger.” she said flirtatiously as she sauntered up to Simon. His head turned up to look into her face because he’d never be caught dead checking out her body. That’d be inappropriate. “How about we start the examination here?” she asked as she put one hand under his armpit and effortlessly lifted him up to her mouth where she kissed him somewhat hesitantly at first.
After overcoming, first the shock of a massive Kaylee, then the shock of being lifted off the ground by one muscle packed arm, then the shock of getting kissed by the girl of his dreams, his mind totally checked out and all propriety was lost and he finally gave in to all those base instincts he’d been fighting against all his life.
When she sensed that he’d given in, she was overwhelmed with joy and kissed him more passionately still. He matched her strength and intensity with a lifetime of his repressed feelings, and that kiss quickly turned into the best experience of both of their lives.
“How did…? What…?” he tried to say but she just stopped his lips with hers and this time he even took it a step farther without her encouragement. His hands began roaming over her new body, feeling the mass and bulk of her muscles, caressing the new curves that she now possessed. These explorations turned her on even more and she felt another wave of growth spread through her body. Simon in turn moaned and grew hard for her as he felt her growing even bigger. When this kiss finally ended she held him at arms length so he could get a good look at her.
The jump suit now seemed to be painted on her and he doubted he’d be able to completely encircle her upper body with his arms her shoulders were so wide, her chest stood out so far from her, and her back bulged out in a symphony of muscle that was clearly visible through her now skin tight clothes.
“Wow, I’ve always wanted you but I never thought it’d be anything at all like this. Kiss me again my mighty Kaylee.”
Melting at his words she laid him down on her bed and hovered over him, his body totally disappearing under her mountain of muscle almost three time his size. His eyes told her everything she needed to know and the rest of that morning was a blur to both of them. Clothes were shredded, virginity was lost (not Kaylees’ obviously) dreams and even some previously unknown fantasies were fulfilled.
In their afterglow Kaylee held Simon to her chest as they chatted. “How are we going to tell the others?”
“You mean about me, or about us?”
“Both… I figure I could, or maybe, well…”
“How about you just introduce me as the New and Improved Kaylee?”
“Yeah, that sounds nice and simple.”
“Alright then.”
“Now?!”
“Yes now silly! I’m hungry and want to walk around a bit.”
“Alright.” Simon got dressed and as he opened the hatch at the top of the ladder the rest of the crew were already gathered there, smiling and applauding. He was busted so instead of making an excuse that would sound lame even to himself he instead introduced “The New and Improved Kaylee!”
It was a tight fit for her to climb the ladder. There were more than a few gasps as more and more of her bulk revealed itself from her room. If she grew any more she wouldn’t be able to get in and out anymore. Then she stood to her full height and everyone’s eyes went as wide as dinner plates. There was a chorus of “Woahs’” and “How dids’”
“I’m not sure yet but the only thing I can think of is that radiation in the shuttle.”
“Yeah but Shepherd Book and I were in there too and we aint turned into King Kong!”
“I wonder if Inara was also affected like this. I haven’t seen her in a few days.”
“I’ll ask her.” said Simon. “In the mean time this is still the same Kaylee and…”
“You bet it’s the same me in here, and I’m going to enjoy this as much as I can. What do you think Jayne? Want to arm-wrestle?” she asked giddily as she flexed her gargantuan arm that he’d never be able to match.
“You’d pulverize me, I aint that stupid.”
“I know, I’m just teasin’. Just a little payback for all those time you were a pig to me.”
“Oh, well, alright then.” Jayne said as he sulked off.
There were more than a few smiles on everyone’s faces after that moment. Very quickly though they realized that not much had changed with their overall crew dynamic. Jayne was a bit more guarded, Simon and Kaylee were happily together, and everyone very quickly went back to their socializing as if nothing was different. Until Inara made her entrance.
It was River and Shepherd’s turn to cook dinner which always promised an interesting meal because, as River was trying to improvise Book was seasoning and refining her insane genius. The resultant meals were unique but tasty. Simon and Kaylee lounged in the comfy chair. Actually Kaylee was holding Simon because she was about three times his size and for her to be in his arms was a bit ludicrous, not to mention dangerous as she’d probably crush him.
“That smells wonderful,” Inara’s voice came drifting in through the door from the hall. Everyone turned to see her turn the corner as if on queue. After seeing Kaylees’ transformation nobody was totally astonished but, to see her totally dwarf Jayne in height, and match him in muscularity, while still being dressed as was her usual custom, as a glamorous, sensuous Companion was something else entirely.
Inara looked like a six and a half foot tall, extremely muscular belly dancer. She had obviously worked to alter some of her clothes to fit and as always totally highlighted her new attributes. She looked as sexy and beautiful as ever.
“Wow, Inara, you’re going to have to help me with my clothes. I just ripped the sleeves and pants off of this flight suit.”
“I wondered how you’d changed. You’re quite a bit stronger.”
“You bet I am, but you’re still taller,” Kaylee pouted.
“Taller than whom?” Simon asked looking up at Kaylee his eyes at the same height as her collarbones. If you could see her collarbones. If her collarbones weren’t hidden by several inches of muscle…
“Well, she’s still taller than I am, even though it feels like we’re not through yet. I may still become the tallest of all this land,” she said giggling.
“Well, growing girls need to keep up their energy. Dinner’s ready!” Book called
As expected Kaylee and Inara put away most of the food and even cooked a bit extra after everything was gone. “Don’t worry, with my new endowments I’ll help with our jobs and more than pay for all this extra food!” Kaylee replied to Mal’s look of worry as she cooked yet more food.
That night Simon and Kaylee slept in Simon’s bed together for the first night, and every night thereafter for the rest of their lives. Somehow it took Kaylee turning into a gigantically muscled amazon for either of them to be courageous enough to do something about their mutual attraction. Simon however woke up in the middle of the night with a nightmare about Kaylee growing bigger than the ship, causing it to explode in space killing them all.
They found out the next morning why he had this dream. When Kaylee stood up to her full height she was now just shy of seven feet and Simon was eye level with her perfect breasts perched atop her mighty pecs. He couldn’t not stare.
“I’m up here cutie,” a sweet voice drifted down from somewhere in the heavens as a gentle yet irresistible hand lifted him up into heaven for a kiss. “Bring me that medium sized super jump suit. Will ya?”
“You mean this parachute?”
“Yeah, I can’t wait to grow out of this one today.”
“You mean… You’re going to…”
“Sure! See it’s quite loose on me,” she said as she flexed her arm. The sleeve of the jump suit expanded and ballooned until it looked like there was a small beach ball stuffed inside. Even then there was still a good amount of loose fabric surrounding her arm that was easily bigger around than his shoulders.
“And you’re going to grow out of…”
“Yeah, I can actually feel that there’s still that radiation floating around in me and that I haven’t used it all up yet. This is the most amazing thing that’s ever happened to me. Especially now that I have you lover boy…” and with those words she pounced on top of Simon again, careful not to hurt him, took him inside her and rode him to the best orgasms either of them had ever experienced. Kaylee because Simon was totally into her and her new body and she could feel him growing larger for her every time she flexed any of her muscles even slightly. Simon because he had finally and completely given in to his desires and found that he truly loved being totally overpowered and dominated by Kaylee, the girl of his dreams. As they approached their climax Kaylee began flexing her muscles. As she flexed they pumped up with blood and she steadily grew larger and larger. She could feel it wasn’t a growth spurt but even so her muscles were expanding so much that she felt like she was turning into the Incredible She-Hulk or something. As she flexed her muscles to their maximum Simon exploded into her and the combination of fully exerting her muscles, and Simon, made her explode with so much pleasure that it felt like the universe was being born inside her.
Later Simon asked her if she’d give him a blow-job.
“I’ll do you one better.”
“What do you mean?”
“Come here lover boy and I’ll show you.” Never again able to deny her anything he walked up to her and she lifted him off the ground, her hand between his legs. As he was sitting on one of her hands, and she was lifting him up into the air as effortlessly as if her were a feather he began to get hard at what he though she had in mind.
She didn’t disappoint. While holding him in the air, level with her mouth she gave him the best blow-job he’d ever experienced. His first sky-job. He looked down at her and seeing his mountainous muscle woman flexing to do what had before now seemed to be the impossible made him come into her mouth. She moaned with pleasure as she sucked him off that she’d have this much of an affect on him and definitely resolved to do this more often. She liked seeing him perched up high, helpless to stop her from doing whatever she wanted…
“You two knocked us off course!” Wash chided later that day.
“Really? Oh, sorry, we’ll try to keep ourselves under control when we’re in the air…” Kaylee said blushing a bit. As that day progressed Kaylee didn’t add any more muscle mass to her already overburdened frame, but she did add a couple inches of height putting her at an even seven feet tall.
Zoë, meanwhile, cornered the doctor and asked him if he still had the original blood samples he took. “The ones with the radiation in them.”
“Sure I do, but… Wait, you want what Kaylee and Inara now have.”
“Yeah, this would really help us out on our jobs.”
“That’s not all though…”
“No, I want to drive Wash crazy by giving him what he’s always wanted, before he strays off to Kaylee.
“And…?”
“And I want it too,” she finally admitted with a sigh. “I want to be able to lift Serenity off the ground as the Giantess I’d become.”
“Giantess is right. You’re what 6’2” and 220? Well muscled from years of combat. Kaylee was 5’6” and maybe 140, strong from farm work and she’s now over seven feet with amazing muscles and strength. You? You’d be off the charts. We’d have to reconfigure the cargo bay for your … almost eight feet of height with a muscle mass that will make Kaylee look like a toothpick”
“Can you do it or not?” Zoë asked stepping up to Simon, glaring down at him and flexing her body which was nowhere near what Kaylee now possessed but was still more than sufficient for putting Simon in his place.
“Yes, I’ll do it. Give me a few hours.”
“Thank you doctor.”
The next day both Kaylee and Inara stopped growing. Kaylee topped off at 7’2” while Inara soared to a majestic 7’6”. Kaylee was a bit vexed that she still had to look up to Inara, but when she lifted Inara off the ground with one arm that was now almost as big as Simon’s entire body, she was more than happy with her own transformation.
Strangely enough Inara still had a steady stream of business. The House was none too happy when they found out but, as all intelligent women know beauty and being a Companion has much more to do with who you are than what your physical appearance may be. She lost several clients who weren’t secure enough in their masculinity but acquired a number of new ones who admittedly were a bit more on the fringes of society, but still enticed her to enjoy and experiment with her new strength and stature.
They did have to retrofit her shuttle with higher ceilings so that she’d fit. The effect was incredible. To see Inara dressed in her best re-fitted dress, her head just below a ceiling that makes normal sized people feel short, making her seem that much taller and more glamorous.
Kaylee absolutely loved her new size and strength. Not only were she and Simon together, she’d join everyone at the bars and win copious amounts of money by totally overpowering every man there while sweetly smiling and flirting with Simon who collected the bets. She’d also make short work of anyone’s challenges of strength. One time she lifted their shuttle off the ground, completely over her head, when five guys came up to their table and challenged her.
Back on Serenity, Wash climbed down his ladder after his overnight shift on the bridge was done. “Keep the lights off Baby” Zoë’s dulcet tones came floating towards him through the dark. “I have a surprise for you…”
Just then Wash felt Zoë in front of him and when he reached up to kiss her at his usual, head turned slightly up angle, he found himself kissing her breasts instead. “Up here Baby.” And he felt one of his wife’s’ strong hands encircle his body and effortlessly lift him up to his wife’s waiting luscious lips.
November 7, 2007 at 5:14 am #63071CowprobeParticipantDidn't "Out Of Gas" but having caught a few episodes of the series and the movie I've got to say you've nailed the character dynamics as far as I know them.
Always thought the experimented upon waif psychic warrior River would be the best recipient of implausibly sensual gigantism but then you brought out Kaylee and Simon's unrequited love plot thread.
I'd love to see this framed by the Alliance's reaction and since this is before the tragedies in the movie the Reaver's would still be a mighty cannibalistic threat. 8)
A nice improvement but it might leave folks that haven't had the fortune to see the series or flick out in the coldness of the Verse.
November 7, 2007 at 11:33 pm #63072FonkParticipantYup, I likes it. ;D
November 8, 2007 at 10:39 pm #63073ratlafParticipantThanks!! I likes it too…
Yeah, I definitely wrote it assuming that whoever reads it is already a fan of the show, which saved me a lot of explaining and whatnot…
November 21, 2007 at 7:03 am #63074fm07ParticipantNice story ratlaf!
November 26, 2007 at 7:52 pm #63075ayanamifanParticipantGreat story. Very well written. You really made it feel like firefly ^_^
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