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June 9, 2007 at 11:20 pm #5349800treeParticipant
a somewhat darker story than the last three parts. Hope you all like it.
Fraulein Panzer
Part 4May 1944
At a fortress eighty-two miles south east of BerlinEver since the Nazis had taken control people were very careful not to bring attention to them selves. Unfortunately that was next to impossible for Valda Schlierkamp. Being scientifically gifted from an early age. She was a medical genius with an extremely vast knowledge of medical science buy the time she was fourteen years of age. This did not go unnoticed by the people of power in the government. When she had reach the age of seventeen several men in uniforms showed up at Valda’s house and told her that she was going to relocate to a remote government installation to begin research on a human enhancement serum. That was four years ago and the Fuhrer was becoming very impatient.
Alrich Von Jaguar was the guard in charge of Valda Schlierkamp’s safety, witch also meant he was to be sure she didn’t try to leave the old castle that was being used as a sight for various top secret military experiments. Weapon designs, chemical agents, solider enhancements, and top-secret vehicle designs are all examples of some of the things that are what were all being studied there.
Alrich was a man with a good heart. When he first joined the German military he thought he was going to be fighting to serve his people and to make the world a better place but refused his commanding officer when he was ordered to shoot several unarmed civilians. Alrich was nearly executed on the spot but he was such an exemplary solider up until that point that he was just shipped off to do a shit job as punishment. That’s how he got guard duty.
Alrich stood in the damp windowless room that was Valda’s lab and watched her lab as she worked on her formula. She was a tiny woman at around five feet tall and ninety-five pounds. Valda’s hair was cut short but well styled so that it still looked like a woman’s hairstyle. She also had to ware a small pair of glasses to correct the slight case of nearsightedness that she suffered from. Alrich actually had a soft spot in his heart for her though Valda had no idea of this. They were not permitted to communicate in any way shape or form unless it was him telling her where she was needed or who she was suppose to have a meeting with. She had nothing left. All of her family was dead. Two years ago Hitler ordered that her test subjects were to no longer be dormant cells but living people and she was forced to use her own family as the subjects as to motivate her to work faster.
Her father insisted that he would be the first of the tests to try and protect the rest of the family from harm. He died a horrible death as his cells became so unstable that he liquefied in Valda’s arms and flowed away as if he was a spilled bucket of water. Slowly one by one she was forced to conduct her experiments on the rest of her family. After all the men of her bloodline were all dead she started to work on the females. All that was left was her mother and two of her cousins.
After three years of study Valda finally found success. It turned out that her formula only worked on the female gender of the species. Her mother, Gunhylda was transformed into a six foot ten inch muscle bound powerhouse.
This apparently angered the Fuhrer to no end. He wanted an army of Uber Männer not Frau. He ordered immediate testing of the new Uber Mensch. Valda watched in horror as her mother was put through countless tests of her strength, stamina, and durability. Valda was amazed at the results. Gunhylda had enough strength to press over one hundred and fifty tons overhead and was able to withstand the direct point blank impact of anti armor rounds. But finally after eight months of testing her mother’s body gave out. Again one of her loved ones died in her arms.
That was a little over two days ago and Valda had formulated a plan for escape. She wasn’t going to allow her younger cousins to be killed after they were tested on and the final straw was when they she was informed yesterday that she was to perform an autopsy on her mother to see why her formula only worked on women and not men.
Today Valda was going going to finish her own personalized formula that was meant for herself. It was far more advanced than any other of her previous formulas. It would enhance her physique far more than the other formulas she made because it only made for one person instead of one generic formula for many people. She also filled two more syringes with the formula that worked for her mother. Her plan was to enhance herself, break in to her cousins cells, and enhance them as well so that they could all have a better chance of escape. Even though they weren’t going to be anywhere near her in power level, they would be at least on par with the strength and durability level that her mother had been before she had died.
The three of them would be able to escape together with little trouble but Valda had vengeance in her mind. She wasn’t going to leave until this entire castle was in ruins.
Alrich saddened when he had to inform Valda of what time it was, “Miss Schlierkamp, the autopsy is in forty five minutes we should go prepare,” he said with a formal military tone. His feelings for her were completely hidden. Alrich noticed that Valda was sweating some a little bit. “I can’t imagine what it would be like to perform an autopsy on your own mother. No wonder she’s so nervous and jumpy today,” he thought to himself.
“I’m in the middle of a complicated equation and am almost finished. We’ll leave right after we’re done,” Valda said to Alrich. He nodded and she turned back to her to her work. What Alrich didn’t notice was that Valda had just injected herself with a syringe. After a minute or two she turned around “OK I’m ready to go now”. All of her notes and records of her formula had also been taken care of. Valda made a paper dissolving compound to destroy her notes so the nazis wouldn’t be able to continue her work should she be killed today.
Alrich walked over to the door and opened it for Valda and the left the lab and they started their long walk to the room that the autopsy was to be held in. As they walked Valda was hit by a sudden dizzy spell as the drugs kicked in. She stumbled as Alrich caught her. “Miss Schlierkamp, are you all right? You look rather pale,” he said with a hint of worry. If she hadn’t been somewhat out of her wits she might have detected his concern but she had other things to focus on.
“I’ll be fine. I just seem to have caught a bug,” Valda said as she got her bearings back and corrected herself.
By the time she reached the autopsy room Valda was sweating profusely. The room was rather cramped with a big window that had an observation room on the other side with about six people seated in it. To of the people in the room were SS officers and the rest were guards. Valda entered the room and was feeling very ill now. As she walked up to the table where her surgical tools lay, Valda suddenly convulsed and fell to the floor and Alrich ran to her side.
The officers had suspected she would try to enhance herself and tried to keep a close eye on her but had just shipped out many of their guards to the war front. They were vary short staffed and couldn’t keep watch on her twenty –four/seven with anything more than one to three guards at any given time. The man in charge of her enhancement program quickly looked at the guards in the room with him, “Shoot her, Shoot her now”!
Alrich and Valda both looked up when the heavy steel door swung open and the four guards ran in forming a line. When they trained their weapons on Valda, Alrich reacted. Valda watched as the guards started to fire at her and Alrich shielded her with his body. The bullets ripped through his limbs and a few hit him in his torso. Alrich looked into Valda’s eye as he fell to the ground riddled with bullet holes. As the guards reloaded their empty machine guns Alrich Spoke to Valda. “Run,” he rasped out through the blood in his mouth and throat while Valda kneeled next to him. She was hit by another wave of pain as her body started it’s growth process.
Valda screamed in pain as her skeletal structure grew in size and mass. The guards all paused for a few seconds and watched in amazement as her muscles and ligaments were visibly torn and ripped. Sickening tarring sounds of muscle, tendon, flesh, and clothing as she grew at an alarming rate. Valda’s body seemed to flow like water as the muscles, ligaments and skin then reconstructed them selves.
“What are you standing there for, SHOOT HER,” the officer yelled at the top of his lungs as her hit the reinforced glass to get the attention of his guards. The guards suddenly realized as Valda stood to her new height of eight and a half feet tall they were in immediate danger. They fired at her as she turned towards them but it was already to late. She flinched as they shot at her not realizing that the bullets were ricocheting off of her skin.
The guards watched in fear as they looked at the massive woman before them. She was only clothed in the under garments for her lower body witch now looked more like a pair of G string panties because of two factors. One; she had just gained three and a half feet of height and her muscles had grown to an inhuman level. Two; they had just emptied four sub machine gun clips at her and blown what little was left of her torn up lab coat off.
Valda looked at herself in wonder. She knew that she would grow in height and her muscles would also become more prominent but this was beyond anything she ever thought would happen. Valda looked at her biceps as she brought them up into a flex. “WOW, This is amazing,” Valda said to her self as she watched her forty-eight inch biceps bulge like boulders sitting on top of her arms. “I feel like I could do anything,” she grinned.
Her grin then fell as she looked down and saw Alrich lying on the floor in a pool of his own blood. “Alrich,” she screamed as she checked his vital signs. He was somehow alive after being shot somewhere around two dozen times, but she need to give him medical attention, and soon. That’s when Valda heard the heavy steel door slam behind her. She growled as she turned around just then she remembered something she watched her mother do during the testing she went through.
The officer stepped back from the glass as he watched Valda hold her hands out to her sides and slap them together. Valda’s mother was able to knock over a squad of men with the shockwave that generated from her hands when she did this but Valda was vastly more powerful. When her hands came together the entire stone wall that the steel door was on exploded outward and not only killed the four guards that just fled the room but destroyed the next three rooms as well. The officer rushed over and hit the alarm
Valda walked over to Alrich and carefully lifted him. She placed him on the wheeled table with her mother’s covered body and pushed it to a surgical room close by. “They will learn nothing from my mother’s body,” Valda thought. Realizing that she wouldn’t have time to take the forty-five or so minutes it would take to patch up Alrich with out a distraction, she set out to the cells that her cousins were being kept prisoner in. on her way there she encountered a unit of about ten guards.
“You there. Halt or we’ll open fire,” the sergeant of the group said with a noticeable nervousness in his voice.
“Ha! I am no longer scared of you and your annoying machine guns. I am FRAULEIN PANZER!!!” Valda bellowed in a surprisingly feminine voice. The guards all took a few steps back as Valda shoved her fist into the ceiling of the hallway and pulled it down on top of her self and all but the last two of them as well. The two surviving guards cautiously walked up to the huge pile of rubble that nearly filled the hallway when Valda stood and brushed herself off. They both turned and ran away.
She reached the stockade and saw the guard sleeping even though the loud alarm was going off. She walked up to him and bonked him on the head to render him unconscious. She then walked up the cell and ripped the heavy door from its hinges as if it were tissue paper.
Valda’s cousins, Adalheid and Felicie, were both huddled in the corner shaking with fear. Around fifteen years of age, they had both just become young women. Unknown to Valda, some of the guards have been forcing themselves on them whenever they had a desire for a female. “Girl’s, it’s me,” Valda said soothingly.
They both looked up with a surprised look of recognition ran to her. “Valda,” they both cried. “What have they done to you,” Felicie said as she looked at her massively muscled physique.
“Not them me. I did this to myself so that we could not only escape but to take this building apart stone by stone before we leave. I have a dose for each of you as well. You won’t be quite as large or as strong as me but you should be able to cause a lot of havoc before I’m able to join you,” Valda said to them both.
“You not coming with us,” Adalhied asked.
“I have to perform surgery on the man that save my life. He’s been shot up pretty bad and needs about an hour of my attention in order to survive,” Valda stated sadly. “Do you girls think you can keep the base busy while I save my friends life?” They both gave Valda a determined look and nodded as they held out their arms for the injection. “Thank you girls. This is going to hurt a bit,” Valda said as she injected them both with the Uber Frau formula.
They both went through the same transformation as Valda. Their rebirth took forty-five or fifty seconds instead of the half hour it took Valda’s formula to kick in due to the fact that they weren’t as heavily enhanced. When they were both finished with their transformation, they were around seven feet tall and had large powerful muscles. They then both walked out of the cell and stared hatefully at the unconscious guard.
“What’s wrong girls,” Valda asked.
Adalheid and Felicie’s faces were both tear stricken as they glared. “He raped us every other night for the last two years and now he’s going to pay,” Adalhied said coldly.
Valda’s face went blank as she realized what was just said. “Don’t take to long girls. A good man’s life is counting on you to keep this base off of us,” Valda said.
“No problem, what we’re going to do will be quick. He might even live through it, not that he will want to when we’re done with him,” Felicie said.
As Valda left to go back to Alrich and try to save him she heard blood-curdling screams from what sounded like a man at three octaves above the normal pitch.
June 11, 2007 at 12:37 am #53499SeldomParticipantGood story! I admit to liking the darker turn, but I enjoyed the first 3 parts as well. I hope you continue!
June 11, 2007 at 2:08 am #53500ratlafParticipantMe too!! I'd definitely like to read much more of this story. Good work!!
June 11, 2007 at 2:18 am #53501ze flyParticipantYes, captivating. 😮 More, please. ;D
June 11, 2007 at 2:54 am #53502TheGovParticipantAnother good installment! Thanks for starting it in a new post.
June 11, 2007 at 1:12 pm #53503airnelParticipantmagaling magaling magaling. very good 3x cant wait for the next part.
June 27, 2007 at 11:29 am #53504airnelParticipantwish to see a new part soon!!!
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