[bri159]

hey gang,

here's the latest. for those who missed out on any growth in the last one, i tried to make up for it this time. hope everyone enjoys.

Gamma pt. 6

At the shipyard, Jess had just arrived to find Brian trying to lift a very large rock. As she walked up to him he lowered the rock to the ground as close as possible until he dropped it with a very loud thud.

Jess: pretty impressive “B”

Brian: thanks. I figure we can start out small and work our way up.

Jess was wearing a black sweat suit she had gotten from work. It hung a little loose in case she would be out-growing tonight. She leaned down and lifted the heavy rock one handed with ease. Brian just watched with awe.

Brian: wow. I never get tired of that.

Jess: juggling the rock from arm to arm) you know. This isn’t what I thought you meant when you said “ideas”

Brian: Settle down, horn-dog

Jess: Is it really that obvious. I mean. Ever since “it” happened, my sex drive has gone through the roof. Like just about every guy I see. If I ever had any attraction to them, I get insanely horny.

Brian: hmm…that explains us in the closet.

Jess: yeah I suppose. But check this out. Can you keep a secret?

Brian: pointing at jess holding the rock) what do you think?

Jess: okay. Dumb question. I kind of created another persona. You know that chick “jade”?

Brian: yeah…wait..that’s you?!? Man that chick is hot!!

Jess: well I guess we know how shallow you are now.

Brian: sorry. You know I have a thing for muscles.

Jess: (putting the rock down and heading over to another, larger rock. Picking it up with the same level of ease as the first one.) yeah I do. And so does Dean.

Brian: okay. So what’s your point.

Jess: well one morning I woke up looking like “Jade” and dean found me. I didn’t want to tell her it was me, because I don’t know how she is going to take it. Well, long story short, I have a date with her tomorrow night.

Brian: Wait, Dean’s a lesbian? Niice.

Jess: yeah, apparently so. But that’s not the half of it. We kind of made out last night.

Brian: whoa. You’re a lesbian too? This is the greatest night of my life!

Jess: (placing both hands on each side of the rock applying pressure) try to focus there, lothario

Brian: okay, sorry

Jess: I don’t know. It was different. I mean I have made out with guys before. Even when I pretty well raped you.

Brian: you can’t rape the willing.

Jess: the point is. With Dean it was different. It was like, I really care about Dean

Brian: ah. I see.

Jess: what. What is it

Brian: you’re going to have to figure that out on your own.

Jess: as she applied the right amount of pressure the small boulder crumbled in her hands) damn. Well you’re no help.

Brian: thanks.

The waves crashed against the shore a good 40 yards away but were still audible. The cool summer night winds brushed against Jess and Brian as they contemplated Jess’ enigma.

Jess eyed one of the cranes and began to walk toward it.

Brian: what are you doing Jess?

Jess: well you said we would start off small. Well I want to move on to bigger.

She approached the crane and looked it up and down. “won’t know unless I try I guess.” She kneeled down and placed both hands under the tracks of the monstrous vehicle. She attempted to lift. To Brian’s surprise the crane moved a bit. Jess used a bit more pressure, actually lifting the crane off the ground. Slowly and unsteadily she lifted it up a few more inches and set it back down.

Brian: looked like you reached your limits on that one.

Jess: not really. I mean it took more effort than anything so far. But I want to test something.

Jess closed her eyes as her sweat suit began expanding, filling with muscles. Her shoulders broadened, her back widened, her biceps began to swell. Her hips began to widen, allowing room for her expanding thighs and calves. She stopped as her suit became ever so tight. She flexed her arms.

Jess: that should do it. I don’t want to keep ripping my clothes. Daddy is already going to have a shit-fit when he sees my credit card bill

Brian: well if you ever need money all you have to do is compete. You would win every competition.

Jess: (smiling) aww

Jess leaned down placing her much larger hands in the same place they were before. Using the same effort she hoisted the crane up, almost throwing it in the air but managing to keep it in her titanium grip. She moved it so her hands were in the middle of the crane so that she could balance it. Slowly she removed one hand and placed it on her hip.

Jess: SUPER-GIRL!

Brian: super indeed.

Jess lay the crane back down and walked over to Brian

Jess: you know Brian. I really do appreciate all that you have done for me.

Brian: hey it’s nothing. I get more pleasure out of it than you think.

Jess: yeah, but still. You really are a good friend.

They shared a hug, jess being careful not to crush him. She lowered her hand down to Brian’s belt, feeling his muscular back, her face planted in his large pecks. Her hand found his belt and she casually lifted him over her head.

Brian: jess? What are you doing.

Jess: (unbuckling his belt and pants and revealing Brian’s huge monster cock) I’m showing you my appreciation.
Jess used her free hand and began stroking. It began to lengthen and grow as it hardened. She began licking the shaft and playing with his balls a bit.

Brian: you know. Most girls get on their knees to do that

Jess: (smiling) I’m not most girls

Jess took his cock into her mouth and began lightly sucking. Raising and lowering his body up and down, as she massaged his abs, landing on his chest, she tickled his nipples. Brian cried out in exstacy as he received the ultimate blowjob. After a few minutes, he exploded in pleasure nearly collapsing onto jess. she swallowed every bit as she stood him up as he re adjusted his pants.

Jess: like that “muscle man”

Brian: oh yeah. Best. Head. Ever.

Jess: want to return the favor?

Brian leaned in and kissed jess on the lips.) what do you think?

Jess took off her sweat suit revealing her muscled body. Her 26 inch unflexed biceps, her huge DD cups breasts mounted on large pecks. Broad bowling ball shoulders tapering down to a small waist. Her soft feminine wide hips showcased her thick legs and calves. Brian lay on top of her, kissing her soft lips. Slowly lowering down to her neck. Using his tongue, he teased her nipples while softly caressing her breasts and massaged  her traps. He kissed his way down to her 8-pack abs, licking each crevasse, paying close attention to her belly button. Soon, he found her pussy and began working her clit. Jess moaned in exquisite pleasure. She lifted her legs with her hands holding them aloft, more so for Brian’s protection than anything. Jess’ mind entered euphoric pleasure. She soon began to think of Dean.  What if dean were the one doing this? That would be so awesome she thought. Soon enough, Brian had taken her to the ultimate climax. She lay her feet down to the ground letting the rest in a puddle. What a minute. A puddle. But they weren’t close to water. Jess opened her eyes and leaned up to find that her feet were indeed in the water of the ocean that had been 40 yards away previously.

She looked down to see a small doll resting on her abs. Upon closer inspection she realized…IT WAS BRIAN!! She lifted him as she stood to her now 135 ft height

Jess: Holy shit Brian! What the hell happened.

Brian: remember when you said your growth was triggered by your arousal…I guess you really liked it.

Jess closed her eyes and concentrated, shrinking down to her “normal” size. Donning her sweat suit, Brian walked her to her car. They hugged each other, giving each other a small peck on the cheek.

Jess got home to find Dean curled up on the sofa, watching some television.

Jess: hey you

Dean: Hey. Kind of late for you isn’t it.

Jess: yeah. Brian from work and I had to do some inventory for dad. Afterwards we grabbed a pizza.

Dean: and you’re just getting home at midnight.(Dean raised an eyebrow)

Jess: oh don’t be jealous. You know you’re the only one for me.(both chuckle)

Dean: I’m kind of nervous. I didn’t tell you before, but I kind of have a date with Jade tomorrow night

Jess: a date huh. That’s pretty serious.

Dean: yeah. I mean. To be totally truthful, we kind of made out here the other night.

Jess: oh you slut(winking)

Dean: thanks for the support.

Jess: What do you want from me? My only girl is being taken away.

Dean: I’m being serious. What if it doesn’t go well. And this is my first girl crush. And what if I was wrong to begin with. And…

Jess: (putting her hand and Dean’s) it will go fine. Just relax. Everything will go perfect. Just be you. I didn’t want to say anything before, but Jade and I had a chat after class. She is definitely digging on you.

Dean: really?

Jess: definitely. She was worried that you were just doing it because you thought she expected it.

Dean: oh no. I definitely want to do it.

Jess: slut

Dean: shut up. Thanks jess. you made me feel a lot better.(hugs)

Dean heads off to bed as does Jess. Jess lay awake in bed with uneasiness. How was it possible that she grew to be a giantess. And for that matter why did she think of Dean while Brian ate her out. And how long could jess keep up lying to her best friend. Jess rolled over as sleep did not come easily that night.

2b continued

Brian

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Ok, first off – you put in a break between EVERY PARAGRAPH! HALLELUJAH! Finally, years of bitching at people about it being an incredibly easy way to make your story a 100 times more user friendly for 2 minutes downtime has paid off. One writer at a time…

Ok, to more pertinent matters. You're clearly not a bad writer… so, I'm starting to wonder why you're writing this more like a script than an actual story… granted, you're doing something that's more inclined toward dialogue than action – and there's certainly nothing wrong with that… but there's a lot to be said for the traditional style of prose… It seems a little awkward when you have to insert actions at the start of dialogue in the way you do…

As it stands, I think you probably could stand to put in more description – of actions, emotions etc. in the dialogue sections. The "action" parts too… I mean, one minute she's pretty buff and then BANG she's a giantess? That's a pretty extreme reaction compared to what happened with coitus… and it's totally undescribed… A bit slapdash, really. You probably need to pin down Jess' abilities a bit more solidly because that felt rather incongruous with what's gone before… still fun but a bit… yeah.

[Icon]

I really liked the story so far. Too bad she suddenly turned in to a 135 ft giantess.. GTS is not my particular taste. But nevertheless a nice story. Keep up the good work!!

[Fonk]

Interesting, if wild! ;D Can't wait to see how the date works out.

[bri159]

hey guys,

thanks for all the love.

prophet tenebrae: thanks for all the input. i always try to use it to better my writing. the reason i write it more like a script is i'm a comic guy at heart and i would eventually like to see this maybe turn into comic(at least certain parts of it. specifically the growth.) and i do agree about the more descriptiveness and adding actions in the middle of dialogue. i think perhaps in future volumes i'll integrate more dialogue in paragraphs. i have done so in previous work, i just wasn't extremely happy with it. with the added descriptions though i think that i will be more inclined. thanks again!

p.s. the giantess thing was supposed to be a bit of a shocker but i can see your point in the added descriptions would have really fleshed it out and made it a bit better.

icon: thanks for da luv. i'm glad you like the story(except for the gts bit. the real goal of the story is that jess pretty well has the ability to do most(if not all) aspects of our little(no pun intended)fetish. if it makes you feel better i'm not super into gts so she probably won't do it that often. thanks again for da luv.

fonk: glad you like it man! and the date is the very next part!

brian

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