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July 21, 2008 at 2:37 am #73606
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ParticipantThe artist is supremely skilled. I'm impressed.
July 21, 2008 at 4:30 am #73607DevonCory
ParticipantWow! I have to say, it's a beautiful piece… but she just looks a little too… "cute," maybe? I think I would have gone in entirely different direction, making her look more powerful, bigger and more… *hungry*-looking. She does look sexy in this picture, but just not at all powerful or intimidating.
My thoughts exactly. I think you hit it right on the nail with your "hungry-looking".
Here's a woman who built herself to be an iron-willed warrior, who lives a life of restraint and denial, so that her emotions and her passions do not fuel the demon dwelling in her. When she loses control, when her lust and her anger allows the demon to manifest through her body, do you really think she's going to look… cute? :-
I don't think so.
July 21, 2008 at 6:07 am #73608ze fly
Participantwell, just look at her.
😮 😮 😮 The problem is rather to STOP looking at her… ;D
Congratulations, that's an awesome batch you purchased, there!!
July 22, 2008 at 9:49 am #73609trilliwig
ParticipantHere's a woman who built herself to be an iron-willed warrior, who lives a life of restraint and denial, so that her emotions and her passions do not fuel the demon dwelling in her. When she loses control, when her lust and her anger allows the demon to manifest through her body, do you really think she's going to look… cute? :-
I don't think so.
Yeees. Lust? Anger? These things I see not! Only sweetness. 😛 More ferocity in form and demeanor would probably have been more fitting. Still, a piece of art that does not hit all the right notes is better than no art. 😀 Thank you!
July 23, 2008 at 3:25 am #73610ParticipantNext: Growth. Oh yah! ;D
After commissioning so much work for the girl, I guess it was just a matter of time before she became the output of some of my fantasies. While Reiq had done some sexy work on her, I wanted more. To be exact, I wanted growth.
I browsed the web, looking for a talented artist who was both available and affordable. I finally found one, and I must say I’m happy I found him. Going by the name pDubage in his Deviant Art days, he’s now the man behind FMF. A great artist, and also someone who does know to listen to his customers, we pretty much ended up building the sequence together: me providing much of the storyboard, and he making it happen with his tremendous skills and invaluable output.
My only regret: he’s even better now.
Originally the sequence was about 15 pages long, but I wanted more. I wanted details, I wanted close-ups, I wanted to see what the character felt. So after a few months, I commissioned him again, to add a few more panels and fill a few gaps. In the end we ended up with a 30 pages monster. The whole thing is in black and white unfortunately, but I chose content and not colors. Eventually I might have it coloured, if I can find a kind soul willing to do it for free. Time will tell.
[file name=1QeSSUdR__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_01 size=103189]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/1QeSSUdR__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_01[/file]Attachments:July 23, 2008 at 3:27 am #73611ParticipantOn with the show… 😀 [file name=u91oUWlL__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_02 size=118436]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/u91oUWlL__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_02[/file]
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[file name=YIaUtSOo__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_04 size=87132]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/YIaUtSOo__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_04[/file]
[file name=XFwrPWsq__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_05 size=120874]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/XFwrPWsq__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_05[/file]July 23, 2008 at 10:02 am #73612ParticipantOriginally the sequence was about 15 pages long, but I wanted more. I wanted details, I wanted close-ups, I wanted to see what the character felt. So after a few months, I commissioned him again, to add a few more panels and fill a few gaps. In the end we ended up with a 30 pages monster.
Heh, have I mentioned I like the way you think? 30 pages, wow! I can only hope FMF does half as well with my next commission. The first 5 pages definitely excite me with what's to come. Veldt's expressions and close-ups do add to the experience. I wait with bated breath to see the rest of it!
July 23, 2008 at 2:59 pm #73613ParticipantHeh, have I mentioned I like the way you think? 30 pages, wow! I can only hope FMF does half as well with my next commission. The first 5 pages definitely excite me with what's to come. Veldt's expressions and close-ups do add to the experience. I wait with bated breath to see the rest of it!
Those were my two biggest complaint actually. Most sequences out there lacked in intensity and realism, and the growth was often protrayed as being almost instantaneous. The character would grow from slim to huge in two or three panels and the emphasis would be put on the final result and not on the process itself. I wanted the opposite, I wanted to see in details what was happening to the character.
It turned out pretty good.
July 24, 2008 at 2:40 pm #73614ParticipantA few more to complete this segment of Veldt's growth… [file name=xcghkBt7__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_06 size=123191]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/xcghkBt7__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_06[/file]
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[file name=q4JuQXVI__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_09 size=110711]http://amaz0ns.com/media/kunena/attachments/legacy/files/q4JuQXVI__PDubage.Veldt_Growth_Sequence_09[/file]July 25, 2008 at 10:07 am #73615ParticipantA few more to complete this segment of Veldt's growth…
Oh no! Has she plateaued? *waits in suspense*
Thanks again for sharing, DevonCory!
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