HARDBODY Chapter Five: Mass Monster (NSFW)

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  • June 18, 2006 at 8:23 am #32666
    iceman75
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    I would definitely love to see a lesbian love affair here, I think Lacey could push Jenna just as much, if not more than Ed did, something makes me think Jenna will get above her goal with Lacey's help. And I hope that she'll take her to new levels of power!

    June 18, 2006 at 9:50 am #32667
    Mr.Shhh
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    Chachibenji, I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble visualizing Jenna.  There'll definately be some measurements in the next chapter to help clarify things. 

    Since meeting Jenna in chapter 3, Lacey has secretly developed an obsession with muscles.  The bigger the better.  As you can imagine, Jenna is her dream girl.  Also, as AbyssPlanet mentioned, I like the contrast between their bodies.  Jenna seems even more extreme next to a girl like Lacey. 

    June 18, 2006 at 12:42 pm #32668
    AbyssPlanet
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    Since meeting Jenna in chapter 3, Lacey has secretly developed an obsession with muscles.  The bigger the better. 

    Hey, if Jenna gets Lacey hooked on bodybuilding, that's okay by me too. 🙂

    June 18, 2006 at 9:23 pm #32669
    gimme size
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    I'm sort of ambivalent about measurements, personally, if only because they give a definitive figure that could otherwise be left to the imagination. Like if you say her biceps peak far higher than her head, or she's three times as wide as she is tall, I can visualize that without actual figures.

    That said, either way I'm certain the next chapter will be even more spectacular than the last. And with that much meat, I fully expect Jenna's measurements to be nothing less than triple digits… everywhere.

    June 18, 2006 at 9:47 pm #32670
    Anonymous
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    WOW!! Just excellent installement of this story… Can't wait for the next part!

    June 19, 2006 at 1:31 am #32671
    up2nogd1
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    Utterly fantastic!  Absolutley incredible muscle desciption!  And more to come!?!  Can't wait!  Hope to talk in complete sentences again soon!
    Thanks!

    June 19, 2006 at 4:22 am #32672
    kuner
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    amazing chapter!  you're really taking it beyond anything that has been written before.

    what we need now are some strength feats. like the character of lacey. maybe she could get off on some stuff jenna does or so

    June 19, 2006 at 5:58 am #32673
    Mr.Shhh
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    Ha!  Great post up2nogd1  :lol:. 

    Gimme Size, I hear you about the measurment thing.  Your reasoning is why I've resisted giving concrete numbers for so long.  However, since I Jenna is going to be pushing herself to incomprehensible new levels of mass, I think it's time to dole out some digits – just to make it clear how big we're talking here. 

    Hmmm, Lacey getting off watching Jenna do her thing…?  👿 

    June 27, 2006 at 12:12 am #32674
    TC2
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    That reminds me…

    I just wanted to clarify for anyone that Mr. Shh's Jenna Steel, and -my- Jenna Steel are two totally different characters.

    I started my Jenna Steel concept back in '96, don't know when Mr. Shh started his but they are two separate characters.

    Great job on the story so far Shhh.

    June 29, 2006 at 4:28 am #32675
    sacul
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    sweet job as always Mr. Shhh.  never before have i read a story with such vivid descrpitions of muscle and power and i;m enjoying every momment of it.  i've also noticed that her attitude is similar to that of my characters 😉

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