HARDBODY Chapter Four: Showoff (nsfw)

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  • May 12, 2006 at 1:25 am #24809
    Monothefox
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    This is rapidly turning into my favourite FM story of all time – not to mention the artwork!

    Since so many good judgements have allready been past, I feel there is little I can add, so I'll just second the previous messages.

    It is difficult to balance the line between ridicusly, impossibly huge and the (albeit slightly) beleivable, and I must say that You are very successful at it, Mr Shhh.

    I can't wait for the continuation…

    (Now why doesn't this forum have a "heart" icon? Hmmm.)

    May 12, 2006 at 3:49 am #24810
    AbyssPlanet
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    (Now why doesn't this forum have a "heart" icon? Hmmm.)

    …because if it did, people (namely, me) would spam it on stories like this.

    I guess chains of emoticons like  😮 😀 😮 😀 😮 😀 will have to suffice…  😛

    May 12, 2006 at 7:19 am #24811
    Mr.Shhh
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    Thanks for the kind words guys  :lol:. 

    Chapter 5 has been put on hold while RhinehartD and I work on the Jenna/Dawn story.  Hopefully Rhinehartd will have his art done soon so we can post this sucker up.  It definitely sets a new standard for mass. 

    You're right about realism vs fantasy, Monothefox.  Jenna is far from realistic, yet there has to be some grounding in reality.  That's why I feel she has to push herself so hard – it in some way explains how she's able to get so big. 

    May 17, 2006 at 2:12 am #24812
    kuner
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    ahhh…

    …the calm before the storm

    May 19, 2006 at 4:09 pm #24813
    sybic26
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    Can’t wait to see the result of your collaboration with RhinehartD and I’m sure that it will just be amazing. I’m also really exited about Hardbody Chapter 5.

    May 23, 2006 at 3:24 am #24814
    gimme size
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    Hey Mr. Shhh… any status report on the Jenna/Dawn showdown? That sample was such a tease…

    May 23, 2006 at 9:28 am #24815
    Mr.Shhh
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    The idea was to post both my story and Rhinehartd's illustrations in one shot.  Rhinehartd's been working away on the art, but these things take time (he's also got a lot of other things on his plate).  Since it may be a little while still before everything is ready, I've decided to post up the story by itself here in the writing forums.  Look for it in a little bit.  As soon as the drawings are done, we'll add them too :lol:. 

    May 25, 2006 at 5:53 am #24816
    Anonymous
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    Hey now, who's this RhinehartD fella? (asking without searching.) Does this person have art on this forum? (asking without looking.)

    May 25, 2006 at 7:57 am #24817
    Mr.Shhh
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    Rhinehartd's stuff can be found here:

    http://amaz0ns.com/component/option,com_smf/Itemid,95/topic,1818.0

    Dawn is his creation.  His short stories follow her adventures as she discovers bodybuilding.  He also posts a pencil sketch with each installment.  Enjoy!

    May 25, 2006 at 6:01 pm #24818
    Anonymous
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    Good stuff, not only does he draw, he tells storyies too.

    Sensational.

    thx

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