[kuner]

Thanks for the awesome replies, everyone. 

I'm hard at work on chapter 4 right now.  If all goes well, it should get pretty nuts.  Once part 4 is done, I'll also be finished my innitial story arc.  At this point, if anyone has any ideas as to where they'd like to see the story go, now's the time.  Think of Jenna as your own personal super-built high school fantasy.  What would you love to see her do?

As for having artists do their interpretations of Jenna, I think it's a great idea!  If any of you artsist out there are reading this, by all means take a stab at it.  Perhaps I'll make a thread when chapter 4's done with an official request. 

-Mr.Shhh

Okay, here's some ideas.

Basically from where part 3 leaves off, it can go several directions.

1) Jenna finds prince charming and they have freak sex.  (that'd be too easy)

2)  the girls and ed have plotted a prank on jenna and expose her in some cruel way (like letting her show up at his house all slutty and then embarrassing her, when ed says he'd never be interested in her)…

3)… which could lead to a fit of anger and rampage

4)… or more obsessive training

5)… or meeting the obligatory skinny nerd guy with the muscle fetish and a happy end

6) another possibility is her guy turning out to be a real asshole and using jenna who blinded by love ends up doing things that are wrong and get her in trouble.

A plot twist that gives her a cause for revenge would be cool i guess. she got the musles, lets see her use them.  And yes i agree, no 747 lifting. but she should be able to cause a good deal of damage with that body of hers.

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hi !
i think that's a good idea if she does many feats of strength at school  to please him but that humiliates him … so…he goes away making her to cry …
… then he comes back on the evening, when they are alone, to ask her to do the same feats of strength in a happy end!

well, why not…

bye.

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In case y'all missed it, Pete "the Other Pete" has drawn his depiction of Jenna, and it's rather awesome: http://pdubage.deviantart.com/

[iceman75]

I agree, that pic was awesome! If that doesn't inspire you to write, you need to find a pulse!

[Mr.Shhh]

I like some of the ideas you guys have thrown out there!  Chapter 4 is pretty much set, but where it goes from there is totally up in the air.  For instance, what about a side story about Jenna's summer job on a construction site?  The idea of having our muscular heroine sweating in the hot sun while lifting outrageously heavy equipment seems like it might have potential  🙄 .  Anyone else have ideas of what crazy situations the super-massive teen can be put into?

I'm also glad people have discovered Pete's un-freakin' believable pic of Jenna  :-D!   There's also a second one in the "sketches" section of his site.  I'm going to post up a thread later in the art section for all to see.  His art is some of the most underarted stuff out there, in my opinion.  Absolutely amazing.

-Mr.Shhh

[iceman75]

Wow, construction job, that almost writes itself! I mean watching her carry I Beams around like toothpics, pulling and pushing dumptrucks around, taking a bulldozer shovel and move ground ten times faster than a bulldozer is able to. There are so many possibilities to go with, and if she gets bigger and stronger during her time there, I would love it even more.

[Mr.Shhh]

Not too sure about pushing bulldozer shovels… I like super-strength as much as the next guy, but Jenna's strength is supposed to be in the realm of possibility (kind of).  I've always found feats of strength sexier when the woman has to really push themselves rather than lifting something effortlessly. 

Another idea I had is to have someone question just how strong Jenna is.  This could intrigue Jenna and send her off on a quest to test her limits.  Who knows what crazy stuff she could find to do?

-Mr.Shhh

[iceman75]

I agree, I don't want her strength to be absolutely limitless, I mean what fun is that, but its obvious that Jenna has well above the muscle size of the world's biggest male bodybuilder, and from her strength show in the second chapter is capable of lifting a ton or more of weight for multiple repetitions, but I agree with you on the idea, we should find some acceptable limits. Carlifting for sure, but not bulldozer lifting, ok. Steel bar bending is okay, but not I-beam bending. How about tug of war, armwrestling, and regular wrestling, all against multiple numbers of regular guys?

[Mr.Shhh]

Hmmm.  Arm wrestling against a bunch of guys at once?  That I'd like to see!  As for bending bars – you'll be seeing some of that in chapter 4 (which is about half done).  Keep the strength feat ideas coming!

-Mr.Shhh

[iceman75]

Cool, you want my help? Thats awesome! Alright, this thought was going through my head, I bet her back is so wide that three men can sit on it, so why not have her do push ups with 3 football players sitting on her back. I don't know how strong you want to make her, where the cut off is, how about lifting the front end of the school bus off the ground?

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