[kuner]

I agree, there are far too many stories out there with girls doin stuff effortlessly. Jenna already is a behemoth, lets leave it at that. Her strength feats shouldn't exceed a realistic limit for someone her size (which should be quite high anyways)  😆

Just lifting stuff is boring I think it's been done too often. With her, I think character, I think the fact that she is a bit embarassed / unsure of her size opens the window for a lot of passive feats, i.e. destroying something without wanting to just because of her size. Think doorways, chairs, dressing cabins in shops, car interiors, etc.

With a character like jenna, you got loads of possibilities

[Mr.Shhh]

I'm loving these ideas, guys.  Jenna in a clothing store, barely able to move in a change stall without breaking it is really nuts.  And lifting the front of a bus?  Crazy, but maybe not sooooo crazy….

-Mr.Shhh

[Reason]

This might be something more for chapter 5, which probably won't ever exist, but how about Jenna tries to kick her addiction. We could see her getting tempted to use her strength or build her muscles at every turn, but she tries as long as she can to resist the urge. I guess finally she would give in to her compulsion and be even more fanatical than ever about building the most freakishly developed body in history.

As for feats of strength, I have to side with the folks that say to underplay it. I like the idea of her having all of this strength for the sake of it and not feeling the need to show it off. It just has to be up to your imagination to wonder just what she is capable of.

[iceman75]

Yeah, I mean that could be good, if her not using her strength would actually lead to something where not only she used her strength, but she used it in creative and awe inspiring ways. Like I said before, it would be a shame for her to have all those muscles and for her not to use them in some way. I think you all know my style of writing, I don't go in much for background, I don't go for much in terms of storylines not involving strength and muscle, but I can take a chapter off, if it leads to much more of the same in the next chapter after. To me, Jenna is someone whose obsession isn't a totally bad one, she wants to make herself better, she needs to lift to get bigger, its not like gambling, smoking, or drinking, the only adverse thing is what she wants to happen, and thats to get bigger and stronger, I don't see how that can be such a bad thing.

[Mr.Shhh]

I agree that Jenna's muscles aren't bad, though her level of obsession is pretty crazy.  The neat thing about having a psuedo realistic character is that she can be put into everyday situations that we all know and recognize.  I think it's even more sexy to see a living fantasy like Jenna interacting with average, everyday things (like school).  Greats thoughts so far everyone!

-Mr.Shhh

[sacul]

excellent story so far Mr. Shhh, you know, it never ceases to amaze me as to how much muscle the human body can hold, even when written down or drawn. 

[00tree]

oh your gooood…

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