HARDBODY Chapter Two: Get Bigger (nsfw)

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  • February 11, 2006 at 11:04 am #22474
    Mr.Shhh
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    Wow man, that sounds like a hell of a story!  Anytime you want to take the plunge, you have a captive audience right here.

    -Mr.Shhh

    February 11, 2006 at 12:33 pm #22475
    AbyssPlanet
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    There's actually no plot whatsoever in my "story" – it's quite literally 39 pages of descriptions, imagery, things like that. I'd most likely edit it down quite a bit before posting it for "public consumption".

    February 11, 2006 at 1:05 pm #22476
    sacul
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    absolutely fascinating, can't wait for the next one

    February 11, 2006 at 2:45 pm #22477
    Reason
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    Man that was incredible! Could almost imagine hiding in the shadows of the basement watching it all happen.  Bring on the next one, the more twisted the better! Any chance of adding a bit of good old fashioned sex and/or violence to the mix? And AbyssPlanet, if you've got 39 pages of this sort of stuff, bring that on too! If people want plot they can go and read a Michael Crighton novel or something.

    February 11, 2006 at 3:25 pm #22478
    slider
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    No pills or magic potions, just a young girl completely obsessed with her body and willing to do absolutely anything to get bigger.

    For me this is exactly what is so great about this story (and Battle of The Sexes).  Just the mental strength needed to push yourself to the most ridiculously (sp) extreme measures of muscle growth…. It's a psychological thing! 😀

    February 11, 2006 at 7:56 pm #22479
    Anonymous
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    Thank you for the incredible story !!!!!
    I have a question Mr.Shhh, is there a part 4 of battle of the sexes? Thanks  😀

    February 13, 2006 at 11:22 pm #22480
    iceman75
    Participant

    Wow, I can't believe all the positive comments, here I thought that most people would find it not so palatable, with all the huge muscle and veins and stuff. But there are tons of acceptance and love, and I'm happy to see that I'm not the only one that finds this story incredibly hot! I just wish I knew when part 3 was coming out, anybody with me there?

    February 14, 2006 at 5:17 am #22481
    Mr.Shhh
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    I'm affraid things are going to slow down a little bit.  I've pretty much burned off my head start with this series.  Life also has a funny way of crushing your free time.  I promise I'll post part three as soon as it's ready.  😀

    As for Battle of the Sexes, I'd like to see it finished as much as anyone.  But for right now, Hardbody is my priority.  After that, anything is possible!

    -Mr.Shhh

    February 16, 2006 at 1:33 am #22482
    Tommy Dreamer
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    I, like a lot of people, rarely visit this area of the Amaz0ns board.  But I have to say this was worth the trip.  Definitely.

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