[Cindy Tortio]

I thought just adding this to the first post may have lost it in the shuffle,so here is rev.2.Sorry for the long delay…wow where does time go? Here is the She-Hulk again with too many mods to list but I tried to get them all. The torso length was an eye opener..haha. Still rough since I am sure I will need a rev 3, I plan on adding a small dog barking in the foreground with a little boy staring on in amazement. Any and all input is greatly appreciated! Thank you all that have already helped me so much!

[cpbell0033944]

The thighs are looking a lot better. 8)

[Mimi]

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[FitnessGlamour]

Nice work.

[femfortefan]

a suggestion. maybe add a muscle( or a bulge) under her right arm.
at the armpit.This way it seems there's nothing between her back and breast.

[Reason]

Some excellent progress here.

Something is still bothering me about her left hip though. I don't think her torso is turned around enough for the outline of her waist to be formed by her abs. Perhaps you could add a gap between her waist outline and abs to show her left oblique more.

I agree with femfortefan's suggestion about her right armpit. A curve showing the other side of the lat would be good.

I see you've rotated her right thigh a bit further around. That's good but I think the line of her gluteus medius needs to flow into the curve of her hamstrings a bit more. You could also maybe lower where her butt joins her hamstring a bit too.

Bring on rev3!

[fm07]

Nice sketch.

Some feedback : Her right oblique seems to have a strange bulge in it, but maybe I'm just seeing it wrong. The abs themselves are great though! Also, maybe some more seperation along the sternum since her abs are really cut, it will show more pec muscle.

Looking forward to the rev!

[Cindy Tortio]

Hello all! Thank you so much for the input,I am sorry I didn't respond sooner.Very hectic week…. I have made the new set of "repairs" and hopefully I can post her tomorrow. My son came up with a neat idea to add to this picture . I think you will all like it. I did this picture as a gift for a friend and I plan on having it colored. As a thank you to all of you that have helped me I will post the finished art as soon as it is done.  😉 Mimi,I presently pay 20 bucks to anyone willing to join my fan club, ;D.

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