[Cindy Tortio]

My eyes are tired..photoshop is exhausting! Here is rev.3. My friends name is Joe and this is supposed to be him as a child at the point he fell in love with muscular women. I don't know if the I beam name spelling worked or if the layout is worth a damn and I am too tired to tell. Many upgrades to Shehulk again and of course allot of foreground added. Hopefully color is next…I titled it- Give me an "O". Big thanks to my daughter who actually figured out how to merge 2 pictures. Input greatly desired.

[00tree]

sweet pic. ats 4 am so im too fried to give any advise sorry

[Jedediah]

Let's see:
She Hulk looks pretty good- nice arms, chest, crazed expression.
The boy is all right- i can't tell if he's dropping eggs or what's going on there.
I didn't see the I-beam lettering until I read your description, so I'd say it is not too clear.
Lastly, excellent job on the dog!  I like his little roman nose!

Um, as far as input- with the lettering, probably the more legible the letters the better.  I would suggest something like a font made out of bent girders as opposed to  more realistically mangled girders.

I admire your sticktoitiveness on this though!  It's leaps and bounds better than your first go at the subject.  I'm interested to see the color version.

[Reason]

Everything new you've added is just about perfect. Maybe make the pointy bit of the ice cream cone poke out a bit at the bottom of his hand, and I agree that the writing could be a bit more obvious. By the way, have you found someone to color it yet or are you just going to open it up to the forum?

I don't know if this is changed or I just haven't noticed it, but is her neck a bit too long? Since her arms are raised up, I think her head should be a bit closer to her shoulders.

The overall muscle shapes are awesome, but there's a few lines that are throwing me a bit. The outside line of her right leg should go higher and block the line coming down between the two gluteus muscles. Also, there seems to be a superfluous muscle above her left knee.

I will now call on the lovely Lisa to demonstrate…

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[Cindy Tortio]

Holy Moly that picture has driven me nuts! (probably all of you also)Its amazing how hard it is to draw something for someone else and be satisfied with it. I have sent it off to a colorist(after a couple more last minute touches) so I don't miss Joey's birthday and if it wasn't for his birthday I would probably be working on rev.7 and a new set of I beams.. Thank god for a deadline.

I want to thank all of you for all your help with this picture. I really think the drawing came out nice and because of all your help I was capable of producing something above my current ability…honestly. The muscle and position changes were priceless and I hope you all get a chance to say.."I told her to do that,see that leg." ;D I have learned so much on this piece and I really feel indebted to you all. I have to go practice ice-cream cones now,….Mr.Jedediah! :-[

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Another great picture, SinD – I think that would certainly inspire anyone to be a big fan of She-Hulk, the ice cream cone is a nice touch and I think you did a great job with the jade lady herself… I can't wait.

[Cindy Tortio]

Thanks Prophet and I forgot to mention a thank you for the photo post, Reason, I did incorporate changes off it.

[Reason]

I don't draw too much these days :(, so it was great to have the opportunity to make a small contribution to such a cool picture. Joe will definitely be blown away by it, plus you've got a story to tell him about it evolved.

[Cindy Tortio]

The color is done and posted under the she-hulk thread. I commissioned Blitz to do the job, please let me know what you think of it.

[blah8884]

I'm not sure if I can help, but I can say that's a really nice picture 🙂

Btw, didn't you plan to make a fmg story involving one of your characters?  ???

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