help with first story

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  • February 13, 2010 at 4:32 am #90049
    Chris
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    Hey everyone, i used to be a lurker here and now i decided to register because i wrote my first FMG story. i’m not really sure if it’s good or not so if someone would be willing to read it and give me a few pointers on what to change/what to keep i would greatly appreciate it. Oh and if you could PM me i’ll gve you the story that way (i’m a little self concious). Thanks!

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