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But as long as I'm on this roll, I offer up my very first internet drawing submission to you guys. Comments and criticisms are welcome.

😮 Really impressive… Keep drawing!!!

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Very nice, dear David. An most excellent pose and posture.
Though, one point to make, is you may consider changing the art program, that you use to make her colouring more realistic and soften the lines which create her. Other than that: 'tis a more wonderful work.
Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

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Cute drawings. Well done.

[Anonymous]

Well, the momentum of the first drawing carried me into the second!

Hooray!  More great art.  I really like this pic too, and since you asked for feedback, here's a bit:
I know it's in a chibi style, but I think when the muscles get so big, the limbs would look better being a little longer perhaps to balance it out a bit?  I'm not an artist so I can't really comment on the colouring points raised above except to agree about blending the colour in or airbrushing it or something (or perhaps using tones that are closer to the 'normal' skin tone when you're doing shadows?).

I too love the tightness of this girl's dress – it's very *ahem* appealing…  😀 That and her outrageous muscularity and cute face are my favourite points of this pic.  Thanks for posting!  I hope to see more great works from you in the future.

[Cowprobe]

She's quite the cutie.

I like her overall proportions also, those fireplug pixies always catch my eye.

I'd love to see her in a relaxed setting. Sometimes the tease of seeing clothing meant for mere mortals trying to navigate the dimensions of a fantasy figure is all the more powerful than exposed flesh.

May I humbly suggest a flight attendant/stewardess?

*http://www.uniformfreak.com/indexnav/indexnav1a.html      Didn't want to Hotlink so remove the * to get there

Haven't drawn in a while either so I'll commend your strength of will on getting inspired, off your ass and to the Wacom  😀

[David]

😮 WOW!!! Those are soome abundant ladies!  😮

[dwarfpriest]

Holey crap! Awesome muscle tone, man. Lemme see… The skimpy outfit looks great. Her arms are very wide compared to the rest of her body, but I dont know if it was your intention. The part on the right elbow looks funny, I have this kind of problem too. The coloring is good, just a bit simplist, even with the shading effect.
Anyway, nice work on the lineart, and keep posting, dude  😀

[David Easton]

Holey crap! Awesome muscle tone, man. Lemme see… The skimpy outfit looks great. Her arms are very wide compared to the rest of her body, but I dont know if it was your intention. The part on the right elbow looks funny, I have this kind of problem too. The coloring is good, just a bit simplist, even with the shading effect.
Anyway, nice work on the lineart, and keep posting, dude  😀

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, the arm size is intentional… I guess I've got a thing for girls with biceps bigger than their waists. 😀

As for the elbow, yeah, joints aren't my strong point. I've got another in the sketch stage that I'm also having arm trouble with, but I'll soldier through and put her up for analysis soon.

I'm also going to try for more than three shades for the skin this time! Watch out, I'm crazy! 😀

[SammiChung]

😮 Wow that is so friggen HAWT! please do more and maybe if possible a little background of Emmi? That would be nice! Ol'Haps

[David Easton]

Phew. Okay, I lied about more shades in the highlights and shadows, but I did try to be a little less extreme this time. I did wind up spending most of the time on the pose… I'm still not sure if it looks right, but I've been staring at it for so long that I'm completely useless. 😀

Yep, I have attempted the dreaded BACK SHOT… definitely not my strong suit. Especially since I had to be extra difficult and stick Emmy in a rather… unconventional pose.

Seems her new thong bikini isn't as comfy as she hoped! Poor girl! 👿

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