Hugely Muscled Lucy

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    iceman75
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    Hugely Muscled Lucy Part 1
    By Jeremy Wilson    shaneomacfan2@yahoo.com
    A young woman transforms herself into an extremely strong goddess

    **Author's note: Well, here I am, back again to excite, disgust, arouse, or
    whatever else you want from these stories that I write. I was taking a little
    break from writing when this angel from heaven named Big Muscle Lucy suggested
    to me to do a story based on her, she gave me many details, and said that she
    loved my work, so how could I refuse. Anyway, this is along the usual lines of
    my stories, dealing with extreme strength and huge muscle, so if you do not
    find those story elements appealing at all, please do not read this story.
    This story is pretty much the opposite of what has been appearing recently,
    this story contains a plot that deals with extreme muscle and strength growth
    and use of that strength, it is complete and total fiction, with no real
    people being used (other than the title character who gave me complete
    permission to use her as a character), killed or hurt in any way. However,
    there are elements of violence, sex, and even blasphemy in this story, which
    are not my ideas, by the way, but elements that Big Muscles Lucy wanted to see
    in her story, so I will include them. Most of you have read my stories
    already, and know when you see my name attached to a story what to expect in
    the story, so why did you click on the link? Thanks to my fans though, without
    you, there would be no me. **

    Part 1: The Beginning

    Ever since she was very little, Lucy knew one thing, that she liked muscle and
    strength, that she wanted it for herself. She began working out at age 15,
    lifting weights, doing aerobics, riding stationary bikes, and whatever else
    she could do to shape her muscles. By the time she reached 19, she was a very
    fit young woman, but it wasn't enough for her, at 5'2 and 130 pounds of
    muscle, she was very big by most female bodybuilding standards, with 15" arms
    and a 40 inch chest, but her goals couldn't be met, she didn't want to be as
    big as a female bodybuilder, she wanted to be the most muscular human being
    that the planet Earth had ever seen, and her genetics just wouldn't let her
    get to that point. She had been using supplements, protein drinks and
    following all the bodybuilder diets she had discovered from all the male and
    female bodybuilding magazines she had collected since she was 13, but it was
    never leading to the mass she wanted, the definition she wanted, the power she
    wanted for herself. Finally she couldn't stand it, she decided to take
    advanced chemistry in college, so she could create a steroid like substance
    that would create super powerful and huge muscles on her body, without the
    negative side effects that are associated with steroid abuse. Lucy went
    through class after class and after gleaning as much knowledge as she possibly
    could, she got all the elements together and brought them home, to work with
    in her own personal laboratory in her basement. She was a scientific genius, a
    nerd of the highest caliber, so figuring out the right mixture would be very
    easy for her.

    Three hours later she put down her test tubes and beakers, she was confident
    that she had succeeded, but wasn't so stupid as to test it on herself, she
    took a female lab rat named Maggie, put it down next to a small dish, where
    she put her formula and encouraged the lab rat to lap it up. Nothing happened
    for a couple of seconds, the rat just started walking around like normal, then
    it stumbled a couple of steps and laid down on the counter, Lucy moved to pick
    it up but before she could pick her up, Maggie jumped up lunged her. Lucy
    leaped back, her eyes bulging at her sudden movement, then she looked a little
    closer at Maggie, her eyes grew even larger! Maggie was muscular, much, much
    larger than a mouse her size is supposed to be, and the muscles were very
    visible, from the enlarged shoulders to the engorged hindquarters, there was a
    visible difference from the mouse she was 10 seconds before. There was
    something else she noticed about the lab rat, her eyes had changed, they
    weren't the bright pink they were before, now they looked like a deep reddish
    type of color, like it made her evil or something. Lucy knew she had to act
    quick, because this mouse could be dangerous if left out. So she filled a
    needle with Cyanide and as quick as she could she grabbed Maggie and inserted
    the full tube of the poison into Maggie. Now on most mice Maggie's size, the
    poison would have worked immediately, but that didn't happen with Maggie, as
    soon as she was put down she started running, it wasn't until 30 seconds later
    that she started to slow down, and finally 1 minute after being injected with
    an incredibly powerful poison, she died. Lucy was incredulous, with what she
    injected, a normal mouse would have died in 5 seconds, maybe less, but because
    of the solution she made, Maggie took 12 times that to die.

    Lucy had a lot to think about, the experiment with Maggie was clearly a
    success, as Maggie grew more muscular, stronger, and tougher than a mouse
    should be. But she also grew more feral, could it be that the animal's more
    baser instinct took over, or did the formular really make you evil? Lucy
    weighed the good effects against the bad effects and came to the conclusion
    that her human intellect will help negate the feral outcome that Maggie went
    through. She thought to herself, hell, I'm much more intelligent than a
    little, puny mouse, I can handle it. With that thought she took her formula
    and put it into a hypodermic needle, she then swabbed herself with alcohol and
    tied herself off with a piece of rubber. She injected herself with the serum,
    pulled the needle out and put pressure on the needle hole. Lucy started
    shaking, convulsing, she fell down to her knees in almost unbearble pain, she
    shouted "What's…whats..happening?" Muscle starting bulging from nowhere,
    pulsing, growing bigger, veins became visible all over her arms, she started
    laughing, the pain was leaving her body and was replaced by a feeling of
    Euphoria that she had never experienced before. After 10 minutes of this
    rollercoaster of emotion, she stood up, she felt lighter than air, like her
    feet weren't even touching the ground as she walked around gracefully. She
    spun around, her arms out like a ballet dancer, when she focused on her
    outstretched appendage. Her eyes were wide open in pure disbelief as she saw
    the muscle size, the definition, the veins going all over, she flexed for the
    first time and was amazed to find that her arms got 3 times bigger with just a
    light flex! Lucy finally realized that she did it, she had become the woman
    she had always dreamed! An Amazon, capable of holding her own in strength and
    muscle size with any man, a super woman, to be feared and respected. She could
    feel the power in her, but she wanted, no, she needed to test it, even with
    muscles the size of Mr. Olympia, she wouldn't be satisfied being merely strong
    for a human, she wanted super human strength to the extreme!

    She walked towards the lab door, which she locked when she first came in
    there, absentmindedly she grabbed the door handle, twisted and pulled, the
    door was ripped from the hinges with absolute ease, she threw it away like a
    frisbee, marvelling at her incidental show of strength, the door's hinges were
    pretty tough, thick metal, but she treated it like nothing but styrofoam. She
    walked down the hall, looking for the biggest man there, to test her strength
    against, she found him in the security guard, 6'4 275 pounds of muscle,
    capable of benching 600 pounds, but she was confident in her abilities to
    overpower him. She approached him with lust in her eyes and he was disarmed by
    the fact that she was so beautiful, yet so muscular, she stood right in front
    of him and in a flash she had him up over her head with one hand. His 275
    pounds was hardly straining her, but she noticed something, she was feeling
    his weight less and less, she felt herself growing bigger and stronger
    muscles, she looked at the guard and saw that his muscles were disappearing,
    slowly, but surely, his muscles were becoming her muscles. This brought a
    wicked smile to her face as she understood what this meant, not only was she
    stronger than any man on the planet, she could make herself stronger by coming
    in contact with them. When he was completely drained of his muscle, weighing
    only 130 pounds at 6'4 she dropped him on the floor and took some time to
    admire her new size. She flexed her biceps and was giggling with joy at the
    sight, they peaked right near where her fist was, her pecs were now 5 inches
    deep, looking like two flesh covered toasters. She looked down in contempt at
    the security guard, she says in a superior voice "Men shouldn't be allowed to
    have muscle, they only use it for their own ends, now that I have the power,
    things will change around here."

    She walks out confidently and sets her sights on a van that she owned, she
    wondered how fast she was now, the van was 200 yards away, she started running
    and got there in less than 5 seconds, it seems she won't need her car, since
    she can move just as fast, if not faster than a car could ever move. She
    thinks about what she could do with her current car and it hits her, she has
    the chance to experiment with her strength again, she bends down and grips the
    side of the 4 ton vehicle, she raises her hands and with ease she lifts the
    side off the ground, she walks her hands inward, trying to find a balance
    point for the van. Once she found it, she took a grip on the undercarriage and
    started lifting, in less than a second the whole 8,000 pound van was off the
    ground and over her head, she isn't even straining, maybe absorbing that
    security guard multiplied her strength even more. She started twirling the van
    around like a baton, from hand to hand, on a finger, nothing was too hard for
    her, the van's weight was insignificant to her. She was moaning in pleasure as
    she experienced a strength induced orgasm, knowing that she was well stronger
    than 10 men put together and knew she could only get stronger. An idea came to
    her, the strongest man in the World, the Universe, Superman, lived across the
    country in Metropolis, if she could somehow gain his strength, she would
    become unstoppable! Her wicked mind formulated a plan on how to bring the
    World's strongest man to his knees… End of Part 1

    #40669
    AbyssPlanet
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    I read this story last night when it got posted to Diana the Valkyrie, but I'm glad you posted it here too so I can comment.

    Your writing is still great, and it's always a treat to see new stuff from you. Keep up the good work!  ;D

    #40670
    iceman75
    Participant

    Thanks a lot Abyss, glad you liked it! This is only the first part, I'm currently writing part two and it has a lot more action, muscle and strength growth, plus some superhero appearances.

    #40671
    gimme size
    Participant

    Definitely off to a good start! Hope to see more size in the next chapter!

    One minor criticism: pay closer attention to verb tenses. The events should all be told in the past tense (or all in the present tense), there seems to be some switching back and forth.

    Otherwise, nice work.

    #40672
    iceman75
    Participant

    Um, thanks, I'll keep that in mind.

    #40673
    Anonymous
    Guest

    The first chapter is excellent. I really enjoyed the build-up. CAn't wait for the next one.

    #40674
    iceman75
    Participant

    Hugely Muscled Lucy part 2
    The mega powerful and muscular Lucy puts her plan to work
    By Jeremy Wilson  shaneomacfan2@yahoo.com

    *Author’s note: This is the second part of a story requested from me by Big Muscles Lucy, a woman who has some great muscle and strength growth ideas. It is not my usual type of story, as I try to make the women in my stories very good and kind, but Lucy wanted her character to be a villain, so Hugely Muscled Lucy is about a woman who loves power and loves to use it over men, and begins to grow mentally unstable because of it, some of you may find this story too disgusting, too blasphemous, and negative for your liking, and for that, I’m completely sorry and I understand, but if you like that kind of stuff, I hope you enjoy this story. I have to tell you that there will be no use of children, no real people have been hurt in the writing of this story, if you don’t like my style of writing, then please don’t read this story and complain to me later, just don’t read it, and save us all some stress. Here we go! By the way, I have no ownership of Superman or anything related, Superman is owned by DC comics*

    Hugely Muscled Lucy Part 2: The Making of a Goddess

    Lucy formulated her plan, she smiled wickedly as she thought about what she was going to do, Superman was the idol of manhood, he was the masculine ideal for many in the World, if anyone deserved to be knocked down a few notches, it was him. She flexed her muscles, knowing that she may not be strong enough now to defeat the Man of Steel, but she knew her powers would even them up and then move her well ahead of his incredible physical strength very quickly. She smiled down at her immense pectoral muscles as they bulged out over 6 inches from her sternum, she looked below at her six pack stomach, with plates of muscle that reached an inch and a half deep, she looked over to her biceps which looked so vascular that the vein running on top of her muscle was as big around as a pencil. Her thighs were the figureative tree trunks, completely separated and ripped to shreds, while her calve took on the shape of a giant upside down heart, striated and veined to a degree that there may have been no body fat anywhere on her body. She started giggling like a little girl when she thought about how big she might turn out to be after fighting the greatest Hero in the world, with his immense power added to her body, she would become totally unstoppable! When she was finally ready to go about her plan, she got up and delivered a spinning back kick to the van she had lifted earlier, which sent the van hurtling away at well over 300 miles an hour, it landed 20 miles away in a lake. She smiled again as she said to herself "Oh yeah, I'm totally ready for this!" 
    Lucy figured she wouldn't be able to take on Superman at her current strength level, so instead she went to find Wonder Woman, who wasn't as strong, and she could use Wonder Woman's attributes in her fight against Superman. So she ran off to the Amazon City, dressed in a tunic that showed off a bit of her muscle, but hid the majority of her incredible strength. She had a plan for Wonder Woman too, she would prove herself to be worthy of Amazon sisterhood and attatch herself to Wonder Woman, and while they're working close together, she would slowly drain Wonder Woman's power, until she felt strong enough to go one on one with Superman. Lucy didn't really care about the fact that Wonder Woman was the world's greatest female superhero, Lucy's mind was so fueled with gaining strength that her mind told her that the Maid of Might was not using her strength to help the plight of women, but used it to further the male dominated agenda of the world and therefore had to be stopped. Lucy walked up to Diana and put her hand on her shoulder, slowly and carefully draining her power so that Wonder Woman didn't notice. Diana turned around to find herself looking into the eyes of a woman looking very much like herself, she had long, flowing black hair and an Amazonian like body that was quite tall and muscular. Diana then gripped the hand on her shoulder and tried to pull it away, but it was much stronger than she thought it would be, it took her full strength to move it a little. At this point, Lucy was in full strength absorbing mode and Diana was getting weaker and weaker by the second. Finally, Lucy threw Diana's arm to the side and then backhanded Wonder Woman across the face with a slap so thunderous it could be heard for miles around, not only that, but it made Wonder Woman fly 20 feet away, blood flowing from her lips and nose. Wonder Woman was just conscious, but fully weak and could hardly even move, Lucy was on her like a flash of lightning, holding her down and taking Wonder Woman's gold lariat, with it she tied Wonder Woman to a huge oak. Lucy laughed as she saw how weak and helpless Wonder Woman was when compared to her, her muscles were pumped up so huge that she could have stepped on stage at Mr. Olympia and run away with the contest. She was just about 6 feet tall and looked like she weighed about 225 pounds of muscle, but actually weighed much more because of her denseness and power her body held. Lucy felt the power racing through her body, the power of the World's strongest woman multiplied many times. She smiled evilly and said "Now, its time, its time to pay the good old man of steel a visit, a visit he'll never forget!"
    Lucy then ran to the highest skyscraper in the city which is impressive in itself, as the building was 12 miles away and she got there in 45 seconds, the skyscraper was an 100 story building 1084 feet high, she looked up and smiled as part one of her diabolical plan grew to fruition. She decided to go incognito, so she wore a big trenchcoat and a brown wide rimmed hat, so when Superman saw her, he wouldn't notice her special developments. She wanted to surprise the Man of Steel, so she could take his muscle and strength without too much of a fight, at least before she was stronger than him. She took the stairs up to the top, going those 100 flights in about 12 seconds, pumping up her calves something fierce, making them at least 20 inches around at this point, with veins as large around as a finger. Lucy got to the edge and shouted "I'm falling, help me, Superman!" Just like clockwork, Superman zipped in from halfway around the world and caught Lucy's body about 30 feet from the sidewalk, then floated down with her still in his arms. Superman was none the wiser, he was so concerned with her safety that he failed to notice that her body was far harder than any woman's that he's ever felt. He set her down on her feet, and was quite surprised that she seemed almost as tall as he was, at 6'4, thats quite a tall lady, but that wasn't the case, he had grown 2 inches shorter from her draining his size, and she had grown 1 inch taller from that. Superman said "Please try to be more careful ma'am, that was a close one, and I won't always be here to save damsels in distress like yourself." Superman giggled at the last part, to which Lucy responded "Oh please call me Lucy, and you won't have to worry about me any more, I doubt I'll need anymore saving from now on. In fact, you'll be the one who's going to need saving." With that Lucy ripped off her trenchcoat and hat to show a huge muscular body that rivaled, maybe even was larger Superman's own massively muscled frame.
    Superman's jaw was on the ground as he gazed at the muscular vision in front of him, she was only in her bra and panties, which were straining to hold themselves on. Her body was completely ripped, containing muscles that you could only find on the most massive of male bodybuilders, and she wasn't even flexing at this point! She giggled at his astounded reaction and said "You see, Superman, I've been given a gift, a gift to help all of womankind, and since you're the model of manhood to all the world, you're gonna be the first in a long line of my slaves, Man of Steel, when I'm done with you, you're gonna be the Man of Tissue Paper." She grabbed him so fast that he couldn't resist, she held him by his shoulders and said "Are you feeling it, Supes, your power is becoming my power, you're growing weaker, while I'm getting stronger, and there's not a thing you can do about it." It seemed she was right, Superman struggled with all of his prodigious physical strength, but he couldn't shake himself loose from her increasingly tight grip. Before his eyes he could see Lucy change, her muscles growing a little bigger second by second, her height growing, the look in her eyes appeared to get more and more crazy, she was driven insane by the power she was absorbing. Superman's mind flashed with an idea, he figured she must have some weaknesses, sure she might have muscles hard as stone, but even her hard muscles can't deflect his heat vision. He fired it up and hit her on the chest, but it didn't cause her any pain at all, in fact she was moaning in pleasure, he tried harder, but that didn't get anything more than louder and more passionate moans from Lucy. The third time he tried the beams only got half way to her chest before he was forced to stop, as his energy was far too low.
    Superman was in a frenzy now, he saw that his powers had no affect on her at all, so he was jerking left and right until finally he managed to wriggle free and then he flew up into the air, hoping that she couldn't absorb his ability to fly as well. Unfortunately for him, she was too fast and before he could get 5 feet off the ground she grabbed his ankle and with a flick of the wrist threw him thirty feet, where he smashed into a hotdog vender's cart. She snorted and said "Leaving so soon, I wouldn't hear of it! You see, I have to eliminate you, Supes, with your power, I will make a new world order, where women rule, and men will be nothing but sex slaves to use at our leisure. When you fall, men from all over the World will see, and they'll have no choice but to follow me, I'll see to it that all women in the world will get the power they deserve! Before this night is through, all men will bow before me!" She said this with a crazy look in her eye as she ran to him, getting there in a fraction of a second. She held her hand around his throat, her arm was huge with muscle, but it didn't even strain with the Man of Steel's prodigious weight. Superman was trying with all his might, using both hands to pry one of her fingers off his throat, but he was so weak and she was so strong, that she didn't even notice his efforts. She looked at his face and then at his hands and started laughing like a crazed banshee, "Hahaha, this is what the mighty Superman is reduced too, trying to move my little old fingers with all his power, it seems you don't understand this, but I AM POWER!!!" With that, she chokeslammed him so hard that he was drilled 10 feet into the ground, his body was broken, his back was shattered, but he hung on to life, hoping that she would think he was dead and go away, he stayed there, unbreathing, unmoving, and it worked. Seeing his motionless form, Lucy clapped her hands like cleaning an eraser, and walked away, thinking of what next to do with her power. Superman laid in that hole for 2 hours before finally gaining the strength to fly again, he made a straight line towards the sun, so he could recover his strength, but it was going much harder than usual, he was so beat up that it could take days or even weeks to regain his full strength.  As he recovered, he thought of how he could beat the Hugely Muscled Lucy, she was more powerful than anyone he’s ever faced, and she took his power while fighting him, how could he possibly beat her in a fight? He knew he couldn’t do it alone, so he placed a call to Gotham City…to be continued

    #40675
    Anonymous
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    It's quite an interesting story. Can't wait for further developments!

    #40676
    sacul
    Participant

    love the story so far, i just wonder at how big lucy could get?

    #40677
    iceman75
    Participant

    Okay, thanks for your comments, in the next chapter I'm really gonna push the limits in terms of both power and muscle size/description, so I'm going to make some polls and abide by them, its up to you guys, what do you want to see out of Lucy.

    Okay, I guess they only allow one poll, so I'll tell you what, I'll put both polls up in my yahoo group and anyone who wants to vote has to join the group.

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