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  • June 30, 2006 at 5:23 am #33585
    Cowprobe
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    Very good stuff.

    The transformation was almost secondary to the character development.

    One gives a damn about these folks and despite the Burke's virus it still feels genuine.

    While the swapping of gender plumbing isn't my favorite you've made a sympathetic and entertaining story.

    Thank you for taking the time to share this coming of age story.

    June 30, 2006 at 5:38 am #33586
    yaracyrrah80
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    Beautiful.

    –Y

    August 17, 2007 at 5:54 am #33587
    stmercy2020
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    Just found this story, and I gotta say- I really enjoyed it.  I especially liked the way you dealt with the issues of how characters responded to their own sexuality after unwanted gender swaps.  Bravo!  And, while we're at it… encore!

    August 18, 2007 at 2:53 pm #33588
    Mr. G
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    Different but nice. 🙂 That burke virus is powerful stuff.

    August 20, 2007 at 3:32 pm #33589
    ScottG
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    Fantastic story.  I haven't even finished it yet, but it is awesome.  Keep up the great work.

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