Jenny and the Cube (new interactive fiction)

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  • July 8, 2008 at 10:25 pm #72798
    dr_muscles
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    I just started (and I mean just started) an interactive fiction. Read, enjoy, add chapters, etc.:

    http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1445377

    Oh, and please let me know if you like it, or have any suggestions or comments.

    July 9, 2008 at 11:58 pm #72799
    peirrotlunaire
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    Very good so far.  Keep up the good work.  A "choose your own adventure" for adults is a lot of fun!

    July 10, 2008 at 1:35 am #72800
    dr_muscles
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    Thanks peirrotlunaire.

    I just finished all the chapters down to depth 3 (seven in total), but I'm going to need help before too long to get any farther. Stupid binary trees just keep doubling in size.

    July 11, 2008 at 2:00 pm #72801
    Tim
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    It looks like its turning out to be very good,but most of the paths end in the same way.otherwise,good writing!

    July 11, 2008 at 9:48 pm #72802
    dr_muscles
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    Yeah… It's the trap of having to come up with 4 different parrallel storylines at once. Once again, I would remind you that (if I have my settings right) this story can be freely added to.

    July 14, 2008 at 2:14 pm #72803
    g-man
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    Unless you weave them back together, there'll be more than 4 storylines… The number of storylines will double with every additional level!

    The work is, so far, great. I would have liked to see you develop it as a traditional story.

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