Lady of the Rings

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  • #17353
    Jon
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    Such a wonderful story! The romance between them is really believable, and I really enjoyed that she stayed a good and honest person throughout. Excellent!  🙂

    #17354
    Trent Harlow
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    Once I started, I couldn't stop.  Then I read it agin, TWICE!  This is definitely going in the archives.  Great work as always Max!!!  Keep it up!

    #17355
    Mark Newman
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    I've given Max my kudos privately, but he also deserves my public thanks and appreciation

    #17356
    BlackKusanagi
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    Niiiice. ^_^

    #17357
    Max
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    Thanks a lot my friends for your words and feedback. I'm glad that you have enjoy the story and thanks for posting your wonderful comments about it. I really appreciatte them.

    Thank you.

    Max

    #17358
    minimanmax
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    ok I finnally finnished it. And I love it. A nice happy ending for both the male and female caracters. That is a rarity for these type of stories. Great work.

    #17359
    SheMuscleLover
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    Majorly excellent writing, my friend.

    Say, anyone care to try working-up a picture of the end-result Debbie?  Just to complete the effect the text provided?

    #17360
    Silent One
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    Excellent and inventive story.  The constant bending of the rules were ingenious.

    #17361
    g-man
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    It is pretty enormous 😉

    I found the grammar a bit distracting. No offence man, the story was great and I understand you're probably not a native english speaker. Just get somebody to edit it, I'm sure lots of people around here would jump at the chance 😉

    #17362
    Vic
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    A great work Max, congratulations!

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