Layla: Bigger than a Breadbox (collab by Ataru320/Higalack) (Update 2/17)

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  • #40192
    Atariboy
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    Wowo thats sooooo good^_^

    #40193
    AbyssPlanet
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    Wow, that was great.  😮 Very nicely done!

    #40194
    Angel Uriel
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    SWEET!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D

    #40195
    tyger-strype
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    pardon me for saying this but…Holy hell that was fantastic!  awesome job Ataru and the pics that were submitted along side the story were outstanding!

    #40196
    higalack
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    Thanx for the comments guys, It was a great collab with lotsa ideas bouncing back and forth and a great story as well. Though it started outta no where. Tink i rushed my side a bit near teh end, but all in all was great fun.

    Still i tink its a good time to post teh second half of the story, ataru.  Wouldnt u say  🙂

    #40197
    ataru320
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    Yeah, its time to see what happens next….

    If there was one thing that Layla hated more than anything in the world, it was going to the doctor for her annual checkup.  Ever since she was a little girl, she had this innate fear of doctors, mostly due to memories of getting needles stabbed into her and the one time when she broke her leg back in elementary school and all the stitches she had to get in to heal it.  She would always get tingly around her skin and her hair would feel like it had not been washed in weeks even going in to the sterile room and sitting on the bed-like seat covered in paper.  But even with her innate fear, she did have her doctor to thank for one thing: discovering the strange “GAPAS” genetics that she  had inside of her, revealing that this formerly average, ordinary teen had such amazing potential.  It had been a year since the last Christmas break check up she had, so Layla had no idea how much further she had become. (mostly since she stopped measuring around the time her shirts and pants started becoming too small)  So in this case, it was a bit to her advantage to be here.
    As she entered the doctor’s office to await his hearing, she unknowingly appeared just a couple inches below the top rim of a seven-foot six inch doorway.  Layla didn’t notice the height chart right next to the door since she was more nervous on what he had to say.  She was dressed in an immense winter hooded jacket, specially ordered from a website about a couple months ago after she started thinking that her growth was starting to slow down.  Although it felt extremely tight on her now, it wasn’t to the point of preventing any sort of movement.  Her physique appeared covered up in it, while an extremely long skirt covered the remains of her body as well as a pair of rubber boots her mom made her wear due to how moist the snow had recently made the ground.  A small bit of skin poked through between her jacket and skirt, revealing the bottom of her abs and a tiny bellybutton…just what she didn’t want due to how cold it was, but Layla had to live with it.  As she removed the hood of her jacket, she revealed her typical, cute 16-year old face, with her pigtails manicured and combed together with conditioner sheening through her hair.  On her face was a sense of nervousness, awaiting the results of whatever the doctor wanted her to do.
    A couple minutes after arriving, the doctor finally arrived to check out her patient.  She was a middle aged woman with a folded face like a shar-pei, but with eyes that sparkled with the interest and knowledge of her profession.  She carried a notebook with a picture of the patient one year ago, showing a teen girl with a strong physique and an overflowing bra holding E-cups while fit for A or B.  As she came in, she looked directly at Layla, moving her eyes up and down in astonishment as she realized how much her GAPAS genetics had come since last seeing her.  Even as she remained nervously covered, looking down as she awaited whatever she wanted, the doctor knew that there was much more to her patient than the little girl that sat there.
    “Do you think you can take off your clothing first?” the female physician asked of her.  “Maybe slowly so I can see how far you’ve come?”
    “Are you sure you’re not going to give me a needle already?” the girl asked.  Layla seemed more nervous of her primal fears of youth instead of anything regarding her other conditions.
    “This should be a quick and easy checkup, alright,” the doctor assured her, nodding her head as her cropped silver head nodded in agreement while looking in her patient’s innocent eyes.
    With this vote of confidence, Layla put her hands around her lengthy skirt and slowly, without too much difficulty, began pulling it down.  As she did, she first revealed a tight buttocks, firm and large due to the work she has done with it.  A very tiny G-string, bought from a sex shop of all places, was revealed covering her privates, open enough to allow the rest of her to breathe.  As she pulled the skirt further and further down, she slowly revealed a massive set of thighs, thick and developed more like tree trunks growing from the ground!  Moving from her thighs and a supportive kneecap, the remaining length of her long, luxurious legs shows massive, shapely calves that complimented the thighs.  While they would look freaky if she had not grown accordingly, they appeared perfect alongside the mass from the remainder of the bottom.  After the skirt was removed, she decided to go full throttle and take off her boots as well, if only to show that they grew large and proportionate to the rest of them.
    “I think I was lifting about five hundred pounds last year when I saw you with these things,” Layla nervously said as she took off her boots.  “I don’t quite remember what I did with them today, but I think my spotter said I pulled about seven or eight tons this morning.”  Her face blushed as she said that, feeling rather embarrassed by how freakish she would seem in lifting so much.  The doctor let out a nice smile as she heard this, nodding her to continue before the checkup began.
    As her lower half was completely revealed, the teen girl began to blush as her hands shook and approached the zipper of her hooded jacket.  Slowly, she started pulling the metallic form downwards, knowing what was coming even before she said anything.  As she pulled, two immense, fleshy orbs revealed themselves, showing off further and further cleavage as they appeared in front of her!  They appeared round and firm in structure, not being held up by anything but her own enhanced physique.  As the zipper approached the bottom, it began to show as well a hard, impenetrable system of abdominal muscles, holding themselves firm as she revealed them above her cute innie bellybutton.
    “Do I have to go any further?” Layla asked, blushing red as she looked at her doctor.  “You’ll probably call me a freak with what you’re about to see.”
    “You don’t look that bad, Ms. Robinson,” the doctor replied, looking at her professionally like a pediatric patient instead of a monster.  “As soon as I’m done, we’ll get your clothes back on and you can leave.  Promise?”  The teen felt a bit of confidence emerge within her as she heard this, knowing that when it came off, it would be too late for any second chances.  Without too much of a thought, Layla threw her jacket on the ground and revealed what she had become!
    The most obvious sight revealed as the jacket were the two, immense breasts that stood there in alignment on top of her massive physique.  Layla really could not figure out how huge they were now, but all she knew was that it had gotten to the point that nearly anything she tried to wear on top of them would burst wide open unless extremely loose or confining.  Both round objects stood there nearly naked, with merely a small cloth she wrapped around the middle before she left holding them back and letting her nipples remain hidden.  This cloth was also used at the gym to prevent her from being completely nude when she worked out, getting the ire of the perverted pigs as they whistled and kept calling her “The Rocks of Gibraltar”.  Surrounding this chest was a body perfectly aligned in mass and refinement from GAPAS evolution!  Her shoulders appeared extremely broad and completely filled with raised muscle mass, yet somehow did not conflict with her slender, human neck on top of her body.  Further down, Layla’s arms had become the beacons of her ultimate form, filled up completely with raised, awakened biceps and triceps!  Layla had become so large that she feared even flexing the arms, seeing how every time she did they appeared an inch or so higher than the day before.  Luckily, the arms hung low from the boobs down towards her butt and the top of her thighs, preventing the freakish masses from appearing too out of place.  Even her back appeared freakish, with what wasn’t covered in her breast-concealing cloth showing rock-solid wingspan that flexed with every motion and bounce she made up in front!  Altogether, this sixteen year old girl appeared to look less like a girl..and more like a goddess of power!

    As a final side note, the blood test merely was to check Layla’s development, which revealed that the GAPAS evolution had peaked with the measurements taken that day.  The doctor stated that Layla probably could continue getting even stronger if she desired, but she would no longer need to worry about her continuous growth spurts.  That was good for Layla to hear, considering now she could get a full wardrobe again and not have to worry about tearing or ripping it!  But where would she get an N-sized bra and immense pants!?

    #40198
    Debido-San
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    lol you guys are evil

    Awesome second half!

    #40199
    billy3802
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    man she is sooooooooooooooo cute

    #40200
    AbyssPlanet
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    Oh god, there's MORE? I don't know if my mind can handle this.  😮

    #40201
    ataru320
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    Oh god, there's MORE? I don't know if my mind can handle this.  😮

    Well actually, the second tale above was the last part.  I just decided to seperate it for suspense sake.  There is possibility that Layla will return in the future, but it will either explain various parts of her physical transformation…or could be a more present day tale.  But the last pic is her final form: she can potentially get even stronger, but can't physically change any further without turning into an immense, proportionate slab.

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