[Muscle Growth Nut]

*leads the entire planet in a standing ovation*

[Matthew Lim]

*leads the entire planet in a standing ovation*

*joins in world wide applause*

[Cowprobe]

*Hooks up Arechebo transmitter for trans solar revelries*

[Fonk]

You have just crafted a wonderful story, sir. Many and numerous kudos to you and your house!

[David C. Matthews]

*leads the entire planet in a standing ovation*

Hold on there, MGN… I'LL be leading the planet-wide ovation!

This has been a very enjoyable story; I've looked forward to every installment. I wish I had the money to pay JD to write for me full-time.

Jimmy, you have a wonderful knack for characters and characterization; even minor characters don't feel "stock" or stereotype. One of these days, I may just go ahead and illustrate this story as someone has already suggested.

One of the reasons I held off commenting until the end was that I wanted you to have your way and make your own story with the characters, instead of nit-picking about how "this isn't what I intended the characters to be like" etc. Part of the purpose, and the joy, of fan-fiction is to write the characters they way they aren't in their regular continuity. (As long as they're not changed too radically.) In other words, I didn't want you changing what you'd written.

In short; excellent job, Jimmy.

(Oh, and the ending: love the "Polymer City Chronicles" reference! I like the idea of Drs. Gannon and Bonn as colleagues…)

[refaal]

I can't remember when the last time was that I have read such a great story.

There is just enough background information to wonderfully ground the story
and you get funny and charismatic characters accompanied by a very interesting action sequences
that captures the attention of the reader.

Please let me join in this loud wave of applause.

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A most excellent tale overall, dear James.

I's do thank you greatly for the work that you have done.

Kudos unto you.

Peace
Neon

[Debido-San]

(Oh, and the ending: love the "Polymer City Chronicles" reference! I like the idea of Drs. Gannon and Bonn as colleagues…)

Hehe, that part made me smirk in my "Ohhhh Snap!" expression…sounds like a plug for a nice, indirect sequel…

GO FOR IT, JIMMY!!!

Also! Excellent Work Jim-ster, Everything in this story was well written, and it's a refreshing and original piece to boot! Thanks a lot!

[g-man]

'Tis great! I just with that Tetsuko and Les didn't have to part so soon 🙁

[robclassact]

Ah, I was gone for a while and what do I get upon return?  An awesome conclusion to a great story.  Most excellent sir!

Rob C.

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