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Hey everyone,

I have posted a new story at different websites for your viewing pleasure. You can view the PDF at the following links:

http://tc2.deviantart.com/#/d2sfa3b

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/the_collector01

Or you can view them in plain text format here:

http://brawna.org/stories/lonely-burden

http://tc2.deviantart.com/#/d2sf9tm

Here is a small preview for you guys to enjoy:

I bit my lip and tightly closed my eyes as I leaned my head back into the pillow. I started to rub myself, slowly at first, but as the fantasy started become more intense I unconsciously began to rub just a little bit faster. Next, I was visualizing my pink shirt inexplicably pulling up from my stomach which showed off my increasingly obvious abs. As it continued to slide up my breasts surged outward and stretched the shirt so far that it ended up barely covering my nipples, the bottom half of my breasts clearly visible. Like a reverse tube-top. Wouldn’t you know it; I wasn’t wearing a bra either! As I fantasized him pushing into me every thrust would make my breasts swell larger and larger. With each push and pull the shirt would start ripping wider and wider, from the center heading outward–

Aaahh! Mmm…. nn… God, I needed this!

I began to rub myself a bit more vigorously and as my pace increased the tingling feeling I got in my face and the rest of my body intensified as well. As I thought back to my fantasy my breasts had burst out of my pink shirt and my nipples bounced into place without the blouse holding them in place. Suddenly I looked to my right as Collin was pushing into me and saw my bicep explode from my sleeve! The veins began to bulge and I could see the muscle–

“Oh! Aaah! AAAAH!!! UUUNGGGGGHHH!! NNNNGGGHHHH!! WHAT’S HAPPE… OOOUUUGGGHHH… NNNNNGGGHHAAAAHHH!”

My eyes snapped open as the cries erupted from me and I looked down as I briefly stopped what I was doing. I pulled my fingers out of my groin and grabbed onto my bed sheets with both hands as I felt a strange pulsing deep within my body, pushing outward. I was barely able to catch my breath from the excitement of the fantasy as my gaze travelled up my body. As I reached at my chest I saw my breasts were rhythmically starting to push outward and grow in size! I couldn’t believe–

“UUUNNNNGGHH… shit… UAAAAAHHHHH!”

My breast started looking like a cartoon character that was growing into a monster. Each intake of breath caused them to swell larger in a small burst of growth, shrinking slightly as I exhaled but never returning to their previous size as they kept pushing outward. This was giving me a horrible yet intoxicating feeling as I felt my breasts swelling against my top. The feeling of my chest expanding was so painful that I ended up closing my eyes, wincing in pain as I pushed my head back into the pillow as far as I could. My neck felt like I was over extending it and as I started taking deep gulps of air I looked back down and saw the buttons on my blouse immediately popping off, one by one, and not because of my heavy breathing! I couldn’t help but whimper,

“Oh God! My tits are getting bigger!”

I took another look down as the last button popped off and caused my breasts to burst from their restraints, settling with a small jiggle in the straining bra.

My cleavage was getting deeper and my nipples were getting bigger! This is what I was afraid of happening. I was afraid that I was going to transform but I had no idea that it would feel like this! My bra was miraculously holding up well to the change of size but my stomach was starting to hurt so badly that it felt like I had done 1,000 crunches. I thought that my painful transformation would immediately start turning me off from what I was doing but, strangely enough, I stayed turned on. Yet, when I felt and saw the transformation happening to my own body in real time it actually magnified my journey to ecstasy. I placed both my hands on my breasts which now had nipples that were becoming really thick and huge. I wanted to see and feel my stomach but my once-C cup breasts had already grown to at least an E and I had to squish them down with my arm just to see my stomach.

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It’s been a long time since I’ve been back at this forum, and I have to say… I don’t think that I could have come back at a better time! The preview was excellently written, and the full version is no less impressive. The attention to detail was great, and it was interesting to hear the story from a 1st person perspective.

[TC2]

gblock,

I honestly wasn’t expecting a response to this thread. This was a most pleasant surprise and I thank you for your comments. I am glad that I asked someone else to help go over the story and proofread it for me, it wouldn’t have nearly been as good if we hadn’t gone over it with a fine-tooth comb.

[Cowprobe]

Your silent editor and yourself have much to be proud of.

Only quibble in this fine story was the switching of tenses. Couldn’t tell if she was reporting as it happened or recalling an event after the fact.

[TC2]

My bad, I was trying something different with the tenses hoping to mix it up. The best way to explain it would be like someone is in the middle of telling you a story until they are suddenly interrupted by a loud sound, or in her case a sudden spasm of muscle growth.

[FlakBait]

I read most of this story…..and not one scene with chocolate covered unicorns kickboxing fig newtons…..wtf man? are you serious? what a let down….
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[TC2]

I’m sure you’ll find a way. I guess pretend that the main character is a chocolate covered unicorn and that should work.

[Matthew Lim]

FlakBait wrote:

I read most of this story…..and not one scene with chocolate covered unicorns kickboxing fig newtons…..wtf man? are you serious? what a let down….
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