Looking for an old story

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  • February 9, 2005 at 4:54 am #2735
    celc5
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    I’m looking for an old female muscle growth story that I read about 2-3 yrs ago. Here’s what I remember:

    1) The guy in the story went to college after breaking up with girlfriend. He used the term "townies" a lot.

    2) The old girlfriend showed up at his school as a muscle babe with big boobs.

    3) The guy T** F***ed the girl while she held him up. That was a new twist.

    4) The end of the story was really weird and sci-fi.

    5) it was a really long story

    thanks in advance for posting if you have an idea what I just babbled about : )

    Celc5

    February 9, 2005 at 11:11 am #2736
    rob000
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    http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/marknew/gayle.txt

    February 9, 2005 at 1:21 pm #2737
    Mark Newman
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    It WAS a strange second part of the story. But I liked the personality shifts. I only wish I hadn’t ended things with Gayle herself quite that way.

    Rob, VERY clever of you to identify the story from the description. I wouldn’t have been able to do it.

    Mark

    February 9, 2005 at 7:19 pm #2738
    rob000
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    How would you end it now?

    February 9, 2005 at 7:35 pm #2739
    Mark Newman
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    I would not have made Gayle so disappointed in him. Instead, she would promise to return from time to time, bigger and more powerful each time, to rape and ravage — I mean play with — him.

    February 9, 2005 at 9:22 pm #2740
    alex
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    Yeah…that ending was very disturbing. Didn’t sleep well that night, and I may have spoken harsh things about you and your progenitor, Mark. Sorry about that. 😉

    February 16, 2005 at 8:12 am #2741
    celc5
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    thank you for answering my request!

    celc5

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