Magic Muscle Chapter 2 by Pokkuti

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    James
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    Well you can see the future chapters on the other website that I go to: The Process Forum, go to the Growth Forum, then go to the category on Muscle Growth, and underneath it should be a thread that is called ” Magic Muscle by Pokkuti written by J2k”

    #108468
    Trent Harlow
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    Well you can see the future chapters on the other website that I go to: The Process Forum, go to the Growth Forum, then go to the category on Muscle Growth, and underneath it should be a thread that is called ” Magic Muscle by Pokkuti written by J2k”

    You can only see the stories as a member, which you can only be once the moderators approve your membership. I’ve been waiting over a year…

    #108480
    James
    Participant

    Ah I see, well, the eventuality is that funding will be a problem soon, can’t always fund this alone cause that will definitely make an impact on the comic wise. Will need to have a setup on a donation directly to Pokkuti on the amounts needed to fund this continued project.

    #108481
    James
    Participant

    And here is the scripts for Chapters 3- 7

    Chapter 3
    Page 1:
    Taking a new perspective from the beginning of Chapter 2, Juvia is looking out from behind a door frame, seeing the newly muscular Erza, Lucy, and Wendy along with Natsu and Grey. She is clearly surprised. (Can add some beginning dialogue from Chapter 2 here)

    Cut to behind the door frame, where Levy and Lisanna are also present.

    Lisanna: Do you see them, Juvia?

    Juvia: Its incredible. I don’t think I’ve seen anything like it before.

    Levy: That’s impossible. How could they get so big so quickly.

    Juvia: Sounds like they had help from Porylusica. Maybe we should go see her.

    Lisanna: You really think she would help us? Last time I checked, she doesn’t like humans.

    Levy: We just wouldn’t stay too long, okay? We get some more of these ‘muscle magic candy’ from her and just leave. Shouldn’t be too hard.

    Cut to Juvia fantasizing about her new body, looking forward to the experience.

    Juvia: This will be great. With a new form, I’ll surely earn Grey’s love!

    Levy and Lisanna just look on in confusion.

    Page 2:
    Cut over to Porylusica’s home, with a subtext stating that a while has passed. Can see that the three girls have gotten a large jar of the ‘muscle candy’ with them.

    Juvia: That was much easier than I expected.

    Levy: Like I said, just make the visit quick enough and she wouldn’t need to shoo us off with a broom.

    Lisanna: Think we should test these out first.

    Juvia, excited at the proposal, immediately grabs for one of the candies.

    Juvia: Yes, for the sake of love, I shall take the first piece.

    Levy: Woah, calm down.

    Juvia reacts to the awful taste before beginning to grow larger muscles. Levy and Lisanna react with a mixture of shock/awe.

    Page 3:
    Juvia: Wow, this was more incredible than I had hoped. I feel amazing.

    Levy: Yeah, that looked…interesting, to say the least.

    Juvia: Oh? You don’t want to join in too?

    Levy: Maybe later. Right now, we should get back to the guild.

    Juvia: Really? You want to hold off on something like this? (Juvia flexes a bit)

    Lisanna: Well, let me give it a shot. (she takes a candy while Levy looks on in surprise. Like Juvia, Lisanna reacts to the horrible taste and starts growing larger muscles). Woah, this feels amazing. Guess I know why my brother wants to be stronger too.

    Page 4:
    Juvia: You look great, Lisanna. Want to join in too, Levy?

    Levy: I don’t know now. After seeing the results first hand…

    Lisanna: Come on. I bet Gajeel would like it. (Levy gets a bit flustered at what Lisanna said and quickly downs a piece of candy. Same reaction as Juvia and Lisanna. Her reacts is more embrassed than surprised)

    Levy: Ah, I didn’t expect to get this…big.

    Juvia: You look fine, Levy. We all do. Lets get some new clothes before heading back to the guild, then we can show them the new ‘us’.

    Chapter 4
    Page 1:
    Cutting back to Grey, Erza, Lucy, Wendy and Natsu, with Grey, Erza and Lucy watching Wendy holding Natsu like the kid he currently was.

    Grey: Still can’t believe that candy did that to Natsu. And Wendy is starting to act strange.

    Lucy: Wait, starting to?

    Erza: Let’s focus back on Natsu. Now that he is in that state, I doubt he’ll be of much use in the tournament.

    Wendy: That is still months away. Its not that big of a problem now.

    Erza: He wouldn’t be much help in training. If anything, he’ll hold us back.

    Natsu: No I won’t! I can still fight like this. Just need some time to get this body back in order!

    Grey: (under his breath)Great job, Natsu. Figure he would’ve learned by now. (Looking at Wendy) What about you, Wendy? You’re already big enough as is. Don’t you think this is going too far?

    Wendy(putting Natsu down): Relax, okay? We still got plenty of strong mages in the guild. Think about it. (Wendy takes another candy and eats it) Most of the mages we have can be considered S-Class…(Wendy starts growing even bigger muscles and gains some more height) …and with this, we got an even better chance at winning!

    Natsu(bit upset): Oh come on!

    Page 2:
    Grey(bit frustrated): Can you get focused, Wendy? We’re going to need to train to match up with the other guilds. This won’t cut it!

    Wendy(picking Natsu back up): I know what you’re saying! The training is important, but this can help too. This for the guild remember. (Grey tries to get a remark in, but is stopped by Erza)

    Erza: Wendy does have the right idea, but we need to tread cautiously.

    Lucy: Uh, Grey, maybe it would be better if you went to see Porylusica and see if you can help get Natsu back to normal. (Grey delivers a glare back to Wendy, then to Erza).

    Grey: Fine. We’re just lucky that Guild Master Makarov isn’t here now. He’d probably throw a fit. (Grey then walks out of the room, leaving the scene)

    Wendy(playing a bit with Natsu’s hair): Aw, even after all that, he still cares for Natsu.

    Lucy: He thinks Natsu would probably do the same if the situation was reversed.

    Natsu(slyly): Maybe…

    Erza: You sure about this, Wendy? Taking more than one…

    Wendy: I’m trying to think of the guild here, not just us. We need to be at our best, right? (She tosses a candy each to Lucy and Erza) Its not an easy road, right?

    Page 3:
    Erza: Right. (She quickly downs the candy, getting even more muscular than before) Ugh, that taste. (Lucy follows in suite, eating the candy and getting muscular. Wendy marvels (lol,pun) are Erza’s and Lucy’s new looks.)

    Page 4:
    Lucy: I think I’m starting to get used to this new look.

    Erza: Agreed. It doesn’t feel that bad anymore.

    Natsu: Okay, now you guys are just taunting me. This is so unfair!

    Wendy: Great. Maybe now, we can get some actually training done.

    Chapter 5
    Page 1:
    Grey continues his walk over to Porylusica’s still thinking over the events from last chapter. Voice calls out to him from off panel!

    Juvia: Grey! Over here, Grey.
    Grey. Sounds like Juvia. Good. Maybe she can try and talk some sense into-

    Grey turns to Juvia and is clearly surprised.
    Grey:-holy crap!

    Cut to Levy, Juvia and Lisanna, sporting their new bodies from chapter 3 (as well as new clothes). Lisanna is holding onto the jar of ‘candy’ at this point

    Juvia: Hello, Grey. Do you like the new and improved Juvia?

    Grey tries to remain focused while explaining to Juvia about the situation.

    Grey: I can’t believe you ate some of that candy too!
    Juvia: Are you not pleased?
    Grey: Well, considering that Erza, Lucy and Wendy took some more and-

    Cut to a chib-style frame with a surprised Juvia and an angry Grey.
    Juvia: Really? Then we need more candy in order to catch up!
    Grey: Can you please let me finish?

    Page 2:
    Cut to Lisanna already grabbing ahold of 3 more pieces of candy and pacing it out amongst the trio.
    Juvia: No time, my love. Ready, Lisanna?
    Lisanna: Here, one for each of us.

    While Juvia and Lisanna prepare to eat to their candy, Levy asks Grey, who is just smiling nervously.
    Levy: Do you want one too, Grey?
    Grey: Er, no thanks. I’m fine.

    Rest of page involves girls growing larger muscles and reacting to their new bodies with glee.

    Page 3:
    Grey has the look of shock across his face, with Gajeel coming up from off panel to see what is going on.
    Grey: What the hell-again?
    Gajeel: Hey Grey, what’s going on over here?

    Levy(with Juvia and Lisanna near here) blushes at the site of Gajeel, who himself gets surprised at Levy’s new look.
    Levy: Gajeel? I wasn’t expecting you…this is…wow.
    Gajeel: Wait, that’s you, Levy!?!

    Levy flexes a bit, trying impress Gajeel, but keeps blushing a bit.
    Levy: I figured that…well, maybe…what do you think?

    One panel shows a serious look from Grey and Gajeel to Levy, quickly followed by another panel with Gajeel giving a thumbs up expression with Grey surprised.
    Grey: Really? You’re okay with this?

    Page 4:
    Gajeel smiles smugly, with Grey just face-palming.
    Gajeel: Why not? The guild can always get stronger. Doesn’t seem that bad.
    Grey: UGH, alright fine.

    Grey refocuses himself and continues his journey, leaving Gajeel with the 3 muscular ladies
    Grey: Just head back to the guild with the rest of girls, alright? Natsu is in a bit of trouble and I need a level-head to watch out for him, okay?

    Juvia, Levy, and Lisanna follow Gajeel back to the guild, with Juvia looking a bit sad at Grey’s lack of appreciation to her body. Levy, however, is happy that Gajeel likes her new look. Gajeel is just smiling.
    Lisanna: Hm, wonder what could’ve happened to Natsu?
    Gajeel: Knowing the Salamander, it was probably his fault to begin with.

    Chapter 6
    Page 1:
    Cut to a beach site with Erza, Lucy, and Wendy (donned in swimwear) getting ready to relax at the beach. In Wendy’s arms is baby Natsu from previous chapters.
    Lucy: You sure this is such a good idea, guys? Shouldn’t we start training soon?
    Erza: Its alright, The tournament is still months away and we can still spend some time training while relaxing?
    Natsu: Why don’t you try spending some time getting me back to normal?
    Wendy: Aw, you’re so cute when you’re angry, Natsu.
    Natsu: Wendy! Cut it out!.

    Cut to Erza and Lucy looking over their right and left shoulders respectively, hearing a familiar friend’s voice.
    Levy(off-panel): Hey Lucy! Erza!
    Lucy: Oh, hi Lev-
    Cut to small chibi-Lucy with a shocked expression on her face.
    Lucy; -EEEEEEEEE?!?!

    Page 2:
    Cut to Lisanna(who is holding a bag around her shoulder), Levy, Gajeel(who is carrying a folding chair) and Juvia, all decked out in appropriate swimwear as well.
    Lucy: Levy? Lisanna? Juvia?

    Cut to Lucy and Levy talking to each other.
    Lucy: How did you-did you get some of the candies too?
    Levy: Yeah. We paid a visit to Porylusica too.

    Cut to Erza and Juvia talking as well, with Juvia blushing a bit.
    Erza: It looks like the candies are working out well for you three.
    Juvia: Oh thank you. I’m hoping that if I put this to good use…

    Cut to Juvia flexing, with Levy and Gajeel in the background looking on (could have both in chibi form if wanted to)
    Juvia:…I’ll win Gray’s heart. Just you wait!
    Levy: Uh doesn’t she remember how Gray reacted before?
    Gajeel: Eh, she’ll be fine.

    Page 3:
    Cut to Wendy(who is still holding Natsu) and Lisanna, who is surprised when she sees Natsu.
    Lisanna: Hey, who are you holding, Wendy?
    Natsu: Lisanna! Its me!
    Lisanna: Wait, Natsu? You turned into a baby?

    Cut to a shocked Levy and a laughing Gajeel.
    Gajeel: Gahahahaha! I can’t believe Salamander got himself turned into a kind.

    Cut to Erza and Lucy, shrugging or sighing.
    Erza: Yeah. He was being too brash and tried eating one of the candies beforehand.
    Lucy: That’s Natsu for you.

    Cut back to a now surprised Gajeel.
    Gajeel: Really? That candy makes girls more muscular and turns men into kids? What kind of magic is this?

    Cut to Levy flexing one of her arms while delivering a playful smile.
    Levy: Its alright, Gajeel. It doing wonders for me, right?
    Gajeel: Uh, yeah. Can’t complain about that, right?

    Page 4:
    Lisanna is trying to get Natsu back from Wendy, but Wendy keeps Natsu clear from Lisanna’s reach.
    Lisanna: You can’t do this to Natsu. He’s our friend.
    Wendy: Don’t worry. I’m taking good care of him.

    Cut to Lisanna, preparing to take something out of her bag.
    Lisanna: He may look like a baby, but you don’t have to treat him like on!

    Cut back to Lucy and Erza, looking over the event transpiring.
    Lucy: Erza, do you think she’s-
    Erza: Pretty good guess.

    Cut to Juvia and Levy, with Juvia surprised and Levy looking off-panel.
    Juvia: Lisanna, are you sure this is a good idea?

    Cut to Levy and Gajeel, revealing that Levy is watching Gajeel preparing his seat with the folding chair.
    Levy: What do you think you’re doing, Gajeel?
    Gajeel: Getting a seat ready. I’m guessing things are just going to escalate soon and I feel like setting up a front-side view of it all.

    Chapter 7
    Chapter 7
    Page 1
    Lucy catches the jar of ‘muscle candies’, which has been thrown to her form off-panel.
    Lucy: Wha? Lisanna?

    Cut to Lisanna, preparing to chomp down on two pieces of muscle candies.
    Lisanna: Just hold onto that, Lucy. This won’t take long.

    Sequence of Lisanna growing larger (height-wise and muscle-wise, with any tears in clothing that do not break modesty)

    Cut to Lisanna charging Wendy to get to Natsu.
    Lisanna: Give Natsu here, Wendy!
    Wendy: No way! You might hurt him!

    Page 2:
    Background has Wendy and Lisanna fighting a bit, with Erza and Lucy in the foreground, looking a bit worried at the situation.
    Lucy: We need to stop this, Erza.
    Erza: Right, though we need to be cautious. Natsu could be seriously hurt if we go in too reckless.

    Cut to Levy and Juvia, also looking worried, with Gajeel in the background, lounging in a beach chair.
    Juvia: How? Wendy and Lisanna are so much stronger now.
    Levy: Maybe we should have some more of the ‘muscle candies’ to even the odds,

    Cut back to Erza, who is a bit reluctant, while Lucy is a bit shocked.
    Erza: Hm…fine. Might as well. Lucy-
    Lucy: Oh, alright!

    Short scene with Lucy passing out 2 ‘muscle candies’ to Erza, Levy, and Juvia.

    Page 3:
    This is basically a sequence with Erza, Lucy, Levy, and Juvia getting bigger (height-wise and muscle-wise), though are more used to the growth and are now enjoying it.

    Last scene on this page is Gajeel, smiling like the awesome guy he is.
    Gajeel: Freakin’ sweet. I’m surprised they didn’t decide to use this earlier?

    Page 4:
    Cut to a new location (inside Porylusica’s home) with Grey talking to Porylusica. Both are a bit angry at each other in one way or another.
    Grey: What do you mean you don’t know how to reverse the effects?
    Porylusica: There never was a recipe for a reverse spell to the ‘muscle candies’, since there never was the need for one to begin with.

    Cut to close up on Grey
    Grey: How could anyone not think to make one? Haven’t you been around long enough to study it at least?

    Cut to Porylusica
    Porylusica: Not as much as you think. These ‘muscle candies’ never really crossed my mind for a long time, till some of your guild mates asked for help. This just seemed to pop right into mind.

    Cut back to Grey and Porylusica in the same panel
    Grey: Still, you did have the time to look into it. Why not?
    Porylusica: Because they were gifts from the first Fairy Tail Guild Master, Mavis Vermillion.

    #108482
    James
    Participant

    Just remember though that the scripts can change from time to time, but basically it is what it is for now.

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