awesome story, fonk. can't wait to see where it is going.
Nice to see Miss Morris' saga is getting underway.
Thank you for turning valuable non-work time into this interesting second chapter half. 8)
Your story line is very well-developed… er… so to speak.
Excellent job!
Good buildup so far. Now to wait for the action! ;D
*resurrects*
*again*
Oh dear. Well, chapter 2 is fully written – it just needs going over (it feels a bit slack in the middle to me, so that's got to be rectified). To celebrate, I went over chapter 1 and put it on that there Brawna website everyone's talking about. It is, in fact, here.
Should have chapter 2 ready to fly by the end of the month. He said. 😛
Here is the finished second chapter of the story. I hope you like it; all feedback welcome. 🙂
great stuff fonk! i haven't read the full chapter 2 yet but this is very promising!
brian
I hate to be a thread necromancer, but I didn't want to make another topic (seems like it'll just clutter up the board). But will there be a continuation of this story? I hope it continues, Fonk. At any rate, best of luck!
I hate to be a thread necromancer, but I didn't want to make another topic (seems like it'll just clutter up the board). But will there be a continuation of this story? I hope it continues, Fonk. At any rate, best of luck!
Trust me when I say that I hope it continues too! I've just had to reformat my hard drive due to viruses, so the little progress I had made has gone down the pan. Bah.
Trust me when I say that I hope it continues too! I've just had to reformat my hard drive due to viruses, so the little progress I had made has gone down the pan. Bah.
🙁 Well, the best of luck in the rewriting process. I think it'll be even better as you rewrite it!
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