MUSCLE MACHINE

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  • November 2, 2007 at 6:44 am #49796
    rob000
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    Awesome new storyline.  I can't wait to read more.

    November 2, 2007 at 6:14 pm #49797
    Mr.Shhh
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    Cool, guys.  Thanks a bunch.  It should be fun getting her into some wild situations. 🙂

    November 5, 2007 at 4:30 pm #49798
    muscleboytom
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    Looking forward to more chapters of this awesome story, including some strength demonstrations and posedowns with the male bodybuilders!

    Tom

    November 13, 2007 at 4:53 am #49799
    kuner
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    Nice new chapter of Hardbody! Ed's sudden change to bad guy kind of came out of nowhere, but then again, he's not really the reason we read this

    November 13, 2007 at 5:47 am #49800
    iceman75
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    Actually, I don't see it as a heel turn, I see it as an underhanded way to motivate her to get even more muscular than she already is, he's saying he wants to see her big enough to fill out that dress, he just holds out his love from her as the motivating factor to help her do it. I hope that's a good enough reason, because I definitely want to see it happen.

    November 13, 2007 at 9:20 am #49801
    kuner
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    Possibly, but why is the story told from a new character's point of view? Also Ed threatens the new character. He is definitely the antagonist in this one.

    November 15, 2007 at 1:56 am #49802
    Mr.Shhh
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    The Hardbody stories admittedly suffer from a lack of direction.  I never meant for it to be a long running series (Originally, Jenna was going to be the alter-ego of a musclebound teenage superhero), but the character was so interesting that it just kept going.  These days, I try to plot out my stories more carefully, but Hardbody continues to be a little "all over the place". 

    In the latest chapter, even though it made very little narrative sense, I decided to turn Ed "bad" for 2 reasons: 1) To give Jenna an outrageous new bodybuilding plateau to reach and 2) To make room for a new male protagonist that I felt people could relate to better.

     

    November 15, 2007 at 10:44 pm #49803
    Mr.Shhh
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    New story "DANCER" is up on the blog.  Check it out!

    November 16, 2007 at 2:13 am #49804
    Lupus14
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    Loved your story! The description of those wobbling boobs made my day.

    Say, what ever happened with the story of "Mercy" the stripper? Will we see more of her? And whats with 18-year-old bodybuilder Tina Brody? And Kitty, the uebermass monster?  Hope you won't let them fade away.

    Thanks.

    November 16, 2007 at 4:29 am #49805
    Mr.Shhh
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    So… many… stories.  I'll try to bounce back and forth between them from time to time (like with Hardbody).  Glad you enjoyed the boobage ;).  I wish I could provide more visuals but I'm out of the art game. 

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