[Mr.Shhh]

After a bit of a break, the blog has been updated with a new story.  Check it out!

[Lupus14]

To be honest – I liked the first story of her much better. I can't get that picture of her lifting that fridge and doing curls with it out of my head. *drool*
But this story seems to me a bit "chaotic". The two other "babes" you introduced distract from the main character. Now she isn't so unique anymore, with the other "roid junkies" beside her. The part where one of them is growing a dick ruined the entire reading pleasure for me.  :-

No hard feelings. Just my two cents.

[Muscle Growth Nut]

The part where one of them is growing a dick ruined the entire reading pleasure for me.  :-

Yeah, that was a tad much. 😛

[Mr.Shhh]

Constructive criticism is always appreciated, fellas.  Thanks for the feedback  ;).  So far, reactions to the story have been very polarized.  If people feel things went too far this time, I'll certainly dial it back a bit in the next story.  Any other thoughts out there?   

[stmercy2020]

To be one-hundred percent honest, I'm not a big fan of futa, either- but this wasn't futa, exactly.  You described her crotch as being nearly as big as and resembling, not as being; the difference between metaphor and simile.  I personally don't need the over-muscled sexual organs- they don't do a whole lot for me- but they don't really make me want to run screaming, either, and I love the descriptions of rigorous training even at the height of sexual passion.  Your descriptions of the insane degree of conditioning these three girls have achieved is magnificent.  If there's one thing I find disconcerting and a little off-putting about your writing, it is your tendency to describe the muscular girls in your stories as sluts, whores, and easy women- even when they clearly are not (as Jenna and Lt. Cronenweth are not).  Hope to see more of your work soon- it's always eagerly awaited and hungrily devoured…

[iceman75]

I enjoyed it myself, I thought while I would like Traci to remain the main character of the story, I do like that you introduced two very well described girls as her best friends, and could possibly branch off into new stories involving those characters if you felt like it. I have always been a fan of your muscle description, I have tried to model some of my newer works after yours because of the enjoyment I get out of reading your stories. Its up to you what you want to write, if these things interest you, then there's nothing wrong with them. I just hope all the negative comments don't make you hesitant to write again, I would miss your writings a great deal. Like I said at your site, I love it when you take it to the next level and hope you bring it beyond in the future.

[Mr.Shhh]

Thanks for the alternate points of view.  Writers often explore a recurring theme in their work.  I think my specific fascination is with women of indominable will who possess a limitless hunger for muscularity, and the extreme sacrifices they're willing to endure to achieve their "vision".  Everything in the stories is just a way of exploring that central theme.  Tanya and her friends litterally overdosing on steroids was a new way of exploring just how obsessed these girls are with their muscles.  I don't plan on making steroid abuse a regular thing, but with Tanya, it seemed fitting.   

[Mr.Shhh]

Updated the site today with a short new chapter of NO CONTEST. 

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