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November 4, 2007 at 11:15 am #62884ChuckParticipant
After seeing Leviathan's really awesome old Poser animation, I thought to try my hand at learning animation. I'm still learning all the ins and outs of it, so bear with me. I've never done this before. It's short and I had to compress it down so the quality's not the greatest but I like it.
I posted it on DA: http://titaneer.deviantart.com/art/Night-of-the-Titaneer-2-68961052
And here: http://rapidshare.com/files/67317092/Quick_Animation_3.zip.html
Comments and criticisms are welcome. Enjoy!
November 4, 2007 at 5:25 pm #62885Devon CoryParticipantThis is actually pretty awesome. Short yes, but very nicely done. ::Thumbs Up:: π
Criticisms…? Hum… let's see…
– A little too fast for my taste. Then again I like slow-mo growth as it's how I feel I can really appreciate the work of the artist.
– Too dark. Many details are lost to the viewer beacuse of this.
– Although it's nice to see the character grow too large for her outfit, her clothes hide part of her transformation and put greater emphasis on her BE than on her muscle growth. It's alright if that's what you want to do, but in this case you should add extra details to her BE. If that's -not- what you want to accomplish then you might want to reduce her BE and increase her upper body growth. The problem with this is that she can only grow so much before her clothes start to tear appart, and this kind of effect is hard to do.Anyway…thanks for this great animation. I'm really looking forward to other great animations and sequences from you Titaneer.
–Cash
November 4, 2007 at 7:01 pm #62886Hunter S CreekParticipantVery cool, Titaneer!
Thank you for sharing it!
Tschuss!
HunterNovember 4, 2007 at 8:11 pm #62887ChuckParticipantThanks you for your nice comments. I was happy to share it!
I agree that it went by too fast. My problem is I'm a total animation noob, and so my first batch of efforts were not only robot like and jerky, but also the file sizes were way too big. So I thought I'd go with a real quick, "What the heck is happening to me???" animation where it's so quick that poor Mrs. Stickpots doesn't have a long time to react to it. I'll do my best to make longer ones that are still downloadable.
The dark lighting is totally my fault. I was really hoping to make it a night scene but you could still make out the details. Next time will be cool!
That was another problem I've run into with my uber busty characters: their breasts get in the way of their abs and I have to have them bend over backward to showcase anything. Next time I'll probably do a character topless and less buxem.
I'd love to do ripping animation, but that's a traditional hand drawn thing I'd have to do in photoshop unless you're one of those people who have a team of ripping simulators to do it. It's a challenge I'd like to try one day though π
November 4, 2007 at 8:26 pm #62888KinnikuParticipantReally impressive!
The only thing I'll touch, if it's not much difficult, will be to ripping her shirt on the arms side. But I like as it's now!.November 4, 2007 at 10:59 pm #62889ChuckParticipantThank you! I'm glad you liked it π
November 5, 2007 at 3:15 am #62890ze flyParticipantReally impressive! Keep going. π
November 5, 2007 at 4:57 am #62891ChuckParticipantWill do, ze fly! π TC2 just gave me some sound effects to incorporate, which should be really cool!
November 5, 2007 at 5:48 am #62892oldFredParticipantI agree that it is a bit dark, but otherwise very enjoyable.
Thanks.November 5, 2007 at 8:58 am #62893ChuckParticipantI will work on brightening the image more next time. I was told earlier that flatscreens make things brighter than they do on other monitors. Will do better! π
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