My FMG comic..

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  • #7787
    Anonymous
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    One suggestion:

    On your dA pages, link to the next and previous pages.

    #7788
    Vic
    Participant

    Very nice work Kulli, ya gonna do some more?

    #7789
    Anonymous
    Guest

    Wow! That’s a great sequence! Lu’s a great character (and I love her ears too!) and it’s great to see her in action. My favourite pose is where she’s kneeling, almost bursting out of her clothes. It looks very realistic. Thanks for the sequence – it’s really brilliant!

    #7790
    Prophet Tenebrae
    Participant

    Tis a good comic, I hope to see some more 🙂

    #7791
    IronPumpingPanda
    Participant

    Wanted to say that I liked the comic, it is very well drawn.

    And I like the placement of "…you really want to know?" on page 8.
    😆

    #7792
    d0a2609
    Participant

    excellent comic, well drawn, well written. i like the atmosphere it has – real comic booky.
    😎
    good job

    #7793
    Jody
    Participant

    This strip has got some attitude, and your renderings are mighty fine. I'd like to hear some more background about the character, understand her motivations for playing the field and for bulking up. Is she just looking for a thrill, or is this more afoot?

    #7794
    Lu
    Participant

    I'd like to hear some more background about the character, understand her motivations for playing the field and for bulking up. Is she just looking for a thrill, or is this more afoot?

    *deep breath* Right. To get why this happened, you have to know what happened to Lu… it's a long story… so are you sitting comfortably?

    You have to understand Lu was born as a boy, NO sex change operations, Lu can change gender whenever he/she pleases. But NO, it's never in-between.
    So basically Lu was born ilagitimately to a Beast-DeathBringer (I just call 'em beasts. It's easier) but the father was a regular DeathBringer. These two races of the same people were at war because the Beasts were into genetic engineering and mutagenic enhancements, and the DBs hated all that and blah blah blah there was a lot of fighting. Their home planet had died because these people live off 'life-force', basically the essence of all living things. They killed their own planet.

    So anyway the DBs took to living on huge space ships and space station colonies. The Beasts invaded remote desolate planets and took over, making their own colonies.
    SO. When Lu was born, this hate war was still going on, but you see some Beasts were neutral, and Lu's 'mother' was neutral. Basically Lu hadto be given up to the research facility on that colony because otherwise he and his Mum would have been killed.

    So Lu grew up in a medical research facility being tested on and studied… why? Because he's a hybrid. And for some reason the hybrids have this wonderful medium between the two races and are quite indestructable.
    When Lu was about 15, he decided to try his luck and escape. On the way out he found that he had a half-brother who was also a hybrid, he had the same father. His name was Aiden. However he was so badly damaged he couldn't escape and sacrificed himself so Lu could.
    Lu was found by his father, who he didn't know, who was by then the captain of a certain ship where a colony of DeathBringers lived. His memory was wiped, so hopefully he would never remember what happened. And, looking enough like a DB, he lived there.
    Lu was pretty much comfortable with his life and didn't stay on the ship for a long time, and traveled around doing odd jobs and the like. But he'd usually return to the ship eventually.

    However, with being away and such he began to learn that he wasn't completely DeathBringer, and wondered why he was slightly different than the others. This wondering lead to his memory coming back to him, even though it was never fully restored, he did have a good idea what happened to him.
    So this lead him to begin to hate himself because he was neither Beast nor DeathBringer, but somewhere in the middle. Because he wanted to be one or the other he began trying to replicate the mutagen used to change them into Beasts in the first place. (By this time he had also figured out a serum with which to change gender)
    However in the search for the mutagen he could only replicate a certain strain of it, the muscle mutagen. The other attributes which for exaple increased stamina, senses, regeneration rates etc. were at a loss to him because he couldn't figure out how to replicate them. But that was okay, because he was already genetically enhanced with being a hybrid anyway.

    He wanted to use the muscle mutagen because he was afraid, scarred by his history, and sure if anyone tried to hurt him again, it wouldn't happen.

    So there you go x_X Lu's life history XD;

    Do remember, all this stuff is (c) to me :O

    #7795
    thechar4
    Participant

    The Char approves 😀

    #7796
    Tommy Dreamer
    Participant

    *deep breath* Right. To get why this happened, you have to know what happened to Lu… it's a long story… so are you sitting comfortably?

    You have to understand Lu was born as a boy, NO sex change operations, Lu can change gender whenever he/she pleases. But NO, it's never in-between.
    So basically Lu was born ilagitimately to a Beast-DeathBringer (I just call 'em beasts. It's easier) but the father was a regular DeathBringer. These two races of the same people were at war because the Beasts were into genetic engineering and mutagenic enhancements, and the DBs hated all that and blah blah blah there was a lot of fighting. Their home planet had died because these people live off 'life-force', basically the essence of all living things. They killed their own planet.

    So anyway the DBs took to living on huge space ships and space station colonies. The Beasts invaded remote desolate planets and took over, making their own colonies.
    SO. When Lu was born, this hate war was still going on, but you see some Beasts were neutral, and Lu's 'mother' was neutral. Basically Lu hadto be given up to the research facility on that colony because otherwise he and his Mum would have been killed.

    So Lu grew up in a medical research facility being tested on and studied… why? Because he's a hybrid. And for some reason the hybrids have this wonderful medium between the two races and are quite indestructable.
    When Lu was about 15, he decided to try his luck and escape. On the way out he found that he had a half-brother who was also a hybrid, he had the same father. His name was Aiden. However he was so badly damaged he couldn't escape and sacrificed himself so Lu could.
    Lu was found by his father, who he didn't know, who was by then the captain of a certain ship where a colony of DeathBringers lived. His memory was wiped, so hopefully he would never remember what happened. And, looking enough like a DB, he lived there.
    Lu was pretty much comfortable with his life and didn't stay on the ship for a long time, and traveled around doing odd jobs and the like. But he'd usually return to the ship eventually.

    However, with being away and such he began to learn that he wasn't completely DeathBringer, and wondered why he was slightly different than the others. This wondering lead to his memory coming back to him, even though it was never fully restored, he did have a good idea what happened to him.
    So this lead him to begin to hate himself because he was neither Beast nor DeathBringer, but somewhere in the middle. Because he wanted to be one or the other he began trying to replicate the mutagen used to change them into Beasts in the first place. (By this time he had also figured out a serum with which to change gender)
    However in the search for the mutagen he could only replicate a certain strain of it, the muscle mutagen. The other attributes which for exaple increased stamina, senses, regeneration rates etc. were at a loss to him because he couldn't figure out how to replicate them. But that was okay, because he was already genetically enhanced with being a hybrid anyway.

    He wanted to use the muscle mutagen because he was afraid, scarred by his history, and sure if anyone tried to hurt him again, it wouldn't happen.

    So there you go x_X Lu's life history XD;

    Do remember, all this stuff is (c) to me :O

    Whoa.  Awesome backstory.

    Especially when a lot of artists are just content with back stories like "Gah she got big boobs and muscles and strong gah hah hah I like tater tots!"

    Lord, I apologize.  That was wrong.  Please be with the starving pygmies in New Guinea.  Amen.

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