[Terryn]

Hey everyone. Call me growingup.

Thought I might post up a story idea that I recently had of writing. I write gentle gts stories, but thought I might try with one with a muscle growth in it as well.

This one is about a strange machine being able to change a normal 20-year-old college student into a taller giantess with mucles. Never written a story based on a muscle growth before. Any suggestions or ideas on how to write the growth scene out? I thought of one growth scene so far:

The girl is hanging on the hoop in the air. She feels the electricity flowing into her body. Her arms grow with a ring on her finger popping off. Hair grows down her back. Her blouse rips as her muscles and breasts grow too big for the blouse and bra. Hips grow too big for her skirt. Legs grow longer towards the ground. Shoes snap off, as feet grow huge. Undies snap off, becoming naked, but still continues to grow. The machine stops, as she is left hanging as a 7 ft giantess.

When writing my stories, I have real trouble with the description of the destructions of the clothes throughout a scene like 'shirt ripped'. Something like that. Writing a muscle growth story might be a challenge, but have no clue on how to write the actual growth of the muscle on the body during it.

Thanks

[Fett]

Welcome, Growingup!

(I ain't got no suggestions, just thought I'd be all welcome-y!)

[ayanamifan]

Well i guess the best idea is to take a lookat some FMG stories and let them inspire you.
I am no writer but i think what always helps is to try to describe the things that happen creatively and not too direct using comparisons, metaphors etc.

[Terryn]

Well i guess the best idea is to take a lookat some FMG stories and let them inspire you.
I am no writer but i think what always helps is to try to describe the things that happen creatively and not too direct using comparisons, metaphors etc.

I have tried, but doesn't work. Just the descriptions of the destruction of the clothes is the most trouble I'm having.

[AlexG]

Got your PM, I don’t understand why stmercy2020 couldn’t help, but since I write about superheroic power couples, I’m going to be inclusive about the two sexes.

Also, I’m going to limit myself to the physical discription surrounding the clothing – the sexual arousal (if any, from the sense of empowerment) and/or psychological aspects of the character(s) I’ll leave out.  The same is true of whether or not you want a fast or slow growth sequence.  That’s up to you to decide and deal with.

To describe the events of the clothing ripping asunder over a growing body, you have to think of it as a mental striptease – one part reality, mixed with two parts fantasy.

In actually, if a rapid gigantic and/or muscle growth (MG) transformation were to occur the clothing wouldn't get destroyed by the growth process – the material would stretch to the point of painful (perhaps even deadly) constriction, and the individual would be forced to remove it themselves, peacefully or in pieces out of desperation/panic.

Therefore, you'll have to have to be creative and use your imaginion, if you're going to keep the attention of the reader.  Now, if you're self-conscious/unconfortable about getting graphic about things sexual, think of it as if no one but you is going to ever read it.  Later, you can always "sanitize" it if you want to let others read the product of the theater of your mind.

Now baring having a willing girlfriend/significant-other as a model to test out your concepts (always a plus, when possible) you're going have to personalize it as best you can in your head.  The clothing, in general, getting tighter/snugger would be something someone would notice first – almost as if it was become a size too small (of course the realization would soon dawn that it wasn’t the clothing that was getting smaller, but he/she was getting bigger – bigger in scale of size, but more importantly (if MG is also part of the process) that their physique was also augmenting in hypertrophic development – i.e. normal to fit, fit to athletic, athletic to seriously muscular like a bodybuilder.  Besides the expansion, the increasing height and size of the body causes the shirt sleeves and slacks to graudally pull upwards, the cuffs tighening about the forearms and calves, the seam of the pants wedging into the crotch/buttocks, the waist tighening, the shirt pulling upward – out of being tucked in and exposing the belly.

As the material stretches, the weakest points of a garment should release first, the areas of greatest elasticity, last.  Therefore, buttons staring to unbutton or zippers slowly unzipping.  Later as the expansion (perhaps accompanied by some muscle flexing – some consciously, as if discovering in wonder, experimentally, or unthinkingly, and shockingly involuntarily from just causal movement.) seams split apart, material unable to stretch further from the unyielding strain of relentless expansion, rips open.

Its then a toss up how you want to mix it up – do you want him/her to help the process along, or is he/she beginning to take on a degree of invulnerability, if so, the expansion process will allow him/her to burst forth, if not, he/she will have to “assist” – unbuckling a belt, pulling at his/her garments (all done in a vain attempt to relieve the sensation of constriction, of which will only the most temporary of relief, and force them to divest themselves of their clothing.  Otherwise, if the former, and depending upon the areas of most radical growth (how the increasing height and muscle mass is effecting the shape/ silhouette of his/her physique) after the chest (if it’s a button closed garment) you might want the back area to rip open, the area around the upper arms and about the upper legs.  Don’t forget the feet!  If he/she is getting taller and larger, the feet and hands are also effected – tightness and uncomfortable of their undersized footgear.  It’s up to you if you want the character to remove their shoes, or have the feet burst (eventually) forth; it will be up to you.  Over the course of the growth influenced striptease, their clothing will gradually taken on a disheveled/tattered appearance.

Similies are useful – i.e. her leather shoes ripped open like old cardboard.

Now, depending on just how graphic you want to be, you’ll have to decide if you want to take he/her all the way to unabashed nudity, or leave them with a sense of immodest modesty with only their underwear (severely straining, as if airbrushed and leaving little to the imagination) on them at the end of the transformation.

In addition, during the process of transformation don’t forget to highlight the sexual attributes as a part of the process – i.e. with females perhaps longer hair, larger breasts, a more shapely appearance, the structure of the facial features, etc.   With male subjects, well, I won’t get graphic, you can figure that part out yourself.

Hope this is of assistance.

“I like a good story well told. That is the reason I am sometimes forced to tell them myself.”
~ Mark Twain / Samuel Clemens (1907)

[Terryn]

Got your PM, I don’t understand why stmercy2020 couldn’t help, but since I write about superheroic power couples, I’m going to be inclusive about the two sexes.Hope this is of assistance.

That was great what you wrote. Stmercy was great with afew gts scenes I had for another story, but he suggested you to help me write the actual scene out. What I wrote in my first post is what I can do in a growth scene. That's the best I've got. Stmercy and I chatted about how I wanted the scene on the messenger and he would write it out. That helped me a lot what we did together.

[Terryn]

Story now completed, except for growth scenes, which I'm really stuck on in describing. But the rest of the story sounds great.

[Terryn]

Just bumping thread.

[Terryn]

Really stuck on scene 4 and 5 if anyone has any ideas on how to write them out.

4.Girl grows inside a closet out of her uniform. In a wall closet, like Alice In Wonderland style, but out of her clothes.
5.Girl grows in front of boyfriend and out of her dorm, growing huger than the building. Like really big.

Let me know if you have any ideas.

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