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  • February 11, 2006 at 7:42 am #22517
    Shadowninja
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    Over at my Neverkick4 group (1,2 were deleted Bah!) in the files section.  http://groups.yahoo.com/group/neverkick4/

    Story by me
    Great Artwork by FFF

    Feedback always appreciated.

    Enjoy

    February 12, 2006 at 8:29 pm #22518
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    Good work!

    Shame Yahoo keep detonating the groups but such is life.

    Very nice though. That's a good soup of the day 😉

    February 12, 2006 at 11:27 pm #22519
    detritus
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    I have to agree; that's good stuff.  FFF always makes his musclegirls completely adorable, and the embarassment here makes her even cuter.  A nice change from the usual surge of confidence that accompanies a muscular transformation.

    February 12, 2006 at 11:36 pm #22520
    Fonk
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    That's a cute story and the girl looks gorgeous after she's finished up transforming. Also… can I get hold of the recipe for that soup? 😉

    February 13, 2006 at 12:10 am #22521
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    Yeah – it was cute how she acted with resignation and embarassment.

    A bashful amazon is just naturally amusing – I mean it seems so unlikely that a woman so powerful and sexy should be so… shy.

    FFF is quite ftw.

    February 16, 2006 at 8:29 pm #22522
    femfortefan
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    Glad u guys liked it,
    yhank you very much!

    FFF

    February 17, 2006 at 1:23 am #22523
    Cowprobe
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    Adorable amazons are Fem Forte Fan's strength.

    Not just a pro at invisible assasination, Shadowninja is also a concise narrator.

    Great story. Especially amusing is that the lass went to so much trouble to make the date. Perhaps her love life has been plagued by her nutritious nemesis. First boyfriend having had spinach for dinner. Post prom late night room service substitutes spinach for lettice. College steady agriculture major…

    Poor vegtible powered single woman.  😥

    Good job both a ya  😀

    February 17, 2006 at 5:07 am #22524
    Shadowninja
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    Thanks all of you for the great feedback, and more is welcome as well. 

    Great ideas cowprobe. more ideas to expand on for future comics.  I just get random ideas and then try to plot them out some work and i'll collaborate with FFF and ask his opinion on them and then either tweak it a tad, scrap the idea or go ahead with the project (once i have the extra cash of course)

    February 18, 2006 at 6:09 pm #22525
    Prophet Tenebrae
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    Have you considered doing something with slower growth SN?

    Maybe our heroine is chewing spinach gum – or something – and over the course of the day finds herself bulking up, with sexy results.

    Cowprobe's idea is good too. It might be amusing if it had been her nemesis for some time or possibly she sometimes tries to use it to her benefit but inevitably overshoots. Or maybe even showing the original discovery of her special "allergy".

    Just tossing out ideas – not that you seem to need them.

    February 19, 2006 at 12:44 am #22526
    Shadowninja
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    the only problem with slower growth is the length of the comic. and unless more people are contributing money i just cant foot the bill, which is why the comics average 4 pages sometimes 5.

    Im all for a joint collaboration comic if the interest is there.

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