New Superman story at Brawna.org

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  • February 21, 2008 at 9:57 am #67516
    peirrotlunaire
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    I have posted the first two parts of a story I am working on at Brawna.org

    It is titled "The Red Room"

    I hope you all enjoy it.  (be gentle with your criticisms  :P) 

    February 22, 2008 at 12:11 am #67517
    Anonymous
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    The start is interesting…
    And the small commercial message for this site:)
    Excellent beginnings

    February 22, 2008 at 3:51 am #67518
    peirrotlunaire
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    Added a few new parts with some muscle growth.    😉

    March 2, 2008 at 3:12 pm #67519
    ze fly
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    🙂 Thanks for telling, i'll take a look at it.  😉

    March 3, 2008 at 2:38 am #67520
    growguy
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    You can't just stop at chapter 11.  More please

    March 8, 2008 at 12:12 am #67521
    mega_goddess1234
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    Hey there,

    Love a story that describes a goddess almost as big and as strong as me!  I'd love to chat with ya – mega_goddess1234 on yahoo or msn.

    Jenny

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