On the Rebound

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  • December 25, 2007 at 1:29 am #65028
    stmercy2020
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    Another little story, entirely self contained.  Hope y'all like it…

    http://stmercy2020.deviantart.com/art/On-the-Rebound-72880309

    December 25, 2007 at 4:31 am #65029
    iceman75
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    Like I said at my group, which you posted it on also, this story blew me away, guys and gals, if you like super strength, read this story! I hope you keep doing the super duper strength feats storyline going, that's one element I wish would be in more stories.

    December 25, 2007 at 4:46 am #65030
    stmercy2020
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    Thanks a lot, Jeremy- it means quite a bit that you enjoyed it, because I kind of see this genre of writing as being pretty firmly established and- well, ruled is probably the wrong word, but you get the idea- by you and Paul Smith.  As I said over at FPS2- this story was surprisingly easy and fun to write, so I'm pretty sure I will do more like this sooner or later…

    December 25, 2007 at 5:05 pm #65031
    Seldom
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    I have to say, not my normal type of story, but excellently written, very enjoyable, and a good way to start Christmas morning!

    December 25, 2007 at 8:37 pm #65032
    The Mole
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    Excellent story.

    Thanks!

    December 25, 2007 at 11:21 pm #65033
    ratlaf
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    I agree with Seldom, a very good story as always, but not quite up my alley.  I enjoy the aesthetics of the muscles behind the strength as much as the strength itself.

    Thanks for the Christmas gift and I look forward to reading more fo your work!!

    December 25, 2007 at 11:43 pm #65034
    stmercy2020
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    I agree with Seldom, a very good story as always, but not quite up my alley.  I enjoy the aesthetics of the muscles behind the strength as much as the strength itself.

    Thanks for the Christmas gift and I look forward to reading more fo your work!!

    Normally, I do too, actually (hence Sylph…)  On the other hand, when you're dealing with nigh-infinite power, there is no way to realistically visualize the muscles that would have to be involved; not even Dr. Banner comes close.

    Thanks for taking the look, though; I appreciate the input.

    December 26, 2007 at 9:39 am #65035
    demented20
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    I just got home from a family get together( insert favorite joke here), but at least I had a little something to read when I got back.  I really enjoyed the little different slant on the super strength theme.

    December 26, 2007 at 10:39 am #65036
    stmercy2020
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    Thanks muchly.  As you certainly know by now, I don't do much with extreme strength- I find it difficult to keep the characters genuine when they have essentially limitless power- but this story, once I found the human side to it, really seemed to write itself.

    I guess, sometimes, you really can fall uphill… ;D

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