[Strickalator]

Hey all you fine folks

8)

Ok so do you all have any constructive critisism,comments and suggestions to offer me for my episodes of Hormonal Springs?

Any Gramatical <Errrors I i should be looking at?

Im ready for my closeup Mr.Lingster 8)

[Richard]

I’d just like to say that I’m enjoying you story and if you’ve ever read on e of mine you’ll know I’m the last person who’d comment on anothers gramer mistakes.( Or speeling)

[Strickalator]

😮 yeah….i try and speel…but my problem is sometimes with

quotations "" like say oh

stacey says "hello" on her way to the store.

sometimes i write it like

stacey went to the store and said "Hello"!

and i forget if the exlamation is supposed to be inside or outside of the ""

[robclassact]

The exclamation point goes "inside!" the quotes. I not much of a writer, but I have no issues with proofing. In regards to the story itself, I wouldn’t mind seeing more subtle slow growth, but then again that’s a personal preference. Write it how you like it.

Rob C.

[Strickalator]

8) ahhh…rob just wait till you see what happens to veronica and stacey then…..

you will like that…im betting….there is a reason why mary’s growth was so fast….it will make sense by the end of episode 5…but i shant give it away yet…

[Anonymous]

😀 Ok, well i think what i have read so far it has definiately got my attention when it comes to the characters and of course this just a rough draft so grammar isnt important but when it is done then you tweak it up with the grammar. But I think you did an awesome job!!!! Keep up the good work.. And baby just to let you know i am being serious… 😛 😀 🙂 😉

[Strickalator]

thank you melongirl

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